AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 3- Chap 12 (Part 3)

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Ashwini

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Wow,You can write a novel dear.

You are an amazing writter

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I rather be good...and let others be best😎

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Originally posted by: Pals2411
I rather be good...and let others be best😎

kitna pithhy dialogue hai😡

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

kitna pithhy dialogue hai😡

THAT IS WHAT I AM SAYING...I CANT WRITE😳

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Originally posted by: Pals2411
THAT IS WHAT I AM SAYING...I CANT WRITE😳

trust me YOU CAN😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

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PP, that was a really awesome update! So we finally come to know what transpired in that guest house!😲 And I must say that it was terrible that Jodha had to go through all this! Jalal cannot be excused for this at all! Firstly he called her to that place by tricking her and then he violated her!😡

Poor Jodha went through so much torment; pleading him to leave her alone and stop what he was doing. But everything fell on deaf ears as Jalal was just not in his senses. He was consumed by an unending desire for her! He was afraid that his life would become hell if she went away from him! But that was no way to handle the situation!

At first I thought that he only desired and lusted for Jodha. But it did seem like he regretted harming her like that. You showed two contrasting situations so well. For Jalal it was something so beautiful that happened between them but for Jodha it was worse than death! He kept touching and caressing her but his touch was like fire engulfing her body! But PP I applaud you for writing such a scene with so much sensitivity!👏👏👏 It must be really a task to describe such torment in words!

The last scene seemed like a ray of hope, a new beginning! I hope it is so! Please update soon!

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gauriS

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Posted: 11 years ago

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omg awesome update. i dont know from where to start.the way you have written jodha's physical as well as mental struggle to save her world her dignity is really heart touching had tears in my eyes😭

on the other hand jalal's inner battle between the devil n morality is also written amazingly👏 all cleared now. why she didnt want to see him,didnt want to let him know about the child n hiding her small world. this guy is disgusting. poor girl.

it will be really interesting to read how you change this character from selfish possessor to a selfless lover n how they reunite.

thank god rico mil gaya finally.😃

continue soon😊