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Kalgi22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#581

Originally posted by: lashy

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Thank me and my hindi 🤣

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..Piyali..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#582

wonderrful chapter...

jalal retorted jodha in meeting..😆

jodha is so cute n innocent...she calls mr. jalal instead of sir..

liked elevator scene...how caring jalal is..she is his employee still he cares...

tell me wt will jodha call jalal sir or mr. jalal...

who is aliya...

she will create problem for jodhaalready jodha suffered a lot..she is all alone..i hope god will listebn her pray as she said sm1 who pamper her like her father..i love ur jodha..

n her surname 😆😳she is jalal's partner or girlfrnd...jalal loves her...??

may br nxt chapter me she will come..

waise i can see jodha's impact on jalal...

plz update ASAP cant wait 4 nxt chapter..

atleast give teaser...plz

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#583

Originally posted by: ..Piyali..
wonderrful chapter...
jalal retorted jodha in meeting..😆
jodha is so cute n innocent...she calls mr. jalal instead of sir..
liked elevator scene...how caring jalal is..she is his employee still he cares...
tell me wt will jodha call jalal sir or mr. jalal...
who is aliya...
she will create problem for jodhaalready jodha suffered a lot..she is all alone..i hope god will listebn her pray as she said sm1 who pamper her like her father..i love ur jodha..
n her surname 😆😳she is jalal's partner or girlfrnd...jalal loves her...??
may br nxt chapter me she will come..
waise i can see jodha's impact on jalal...
plz update ASAP cant wait 4 nxt chapter..
atleast give teaser...plz

Hi Piyali.. seems this is your first comment on my story.. thanks for reading and commenting yaar..
Jodha is cute but not innocent dear.. 😉
It's too early to say Jalal had an impact on her.. 😆 he'd have helped anyone stuck up in such situation, given that he knows them..

You tell me what you prefer? Sir or Jalal?
And in next chapter you'll know who Aaliya is.. 😉 Let's see if she comes in way of Jo or not.. 😆
I'll try to update before this weekend Piyali.. thank you for your wonderful words.. 🤗

by the way, how did you land in this FF? I'll be glad to know 😉

Edited by hemakeerti - 11 years ago

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#584

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

You know what.. I'm forced to lessen Hindi in the recent updates, just because of you.. from now on I'll give translation at end of chapter for your sake 🤗

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#585

Originally posted by: lashy

chalo.. now tell me how good it feels to be Sherlock 🤣

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AbHer_neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#586

Where should I hide my face...I haven't yet unreserved my comment.😆

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#587

Originally posted by: AbHer_neha
Where should I hide my face...I haven't yet unreserved my comment.😆

You need not hide if your going to comment in next one hour 😆

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AbHer_neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#588

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

You need not hide if your going to comment in next one hour 😆

Ab toh pakka hide karna padega.😆

Par kal pakka😳 Bye dear🤗

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#589

Originally posted by: AbHer_neha

Ab toh pakka hide karna padega.😆

Par kal pakka😳 Bye dear🤗

ok ok.. no problem.. btw are you a Malayalee?

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AbHer_neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#590

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

ok ok.. no problem.. btw are you a Malayalee?

Nahi yaar...I m north Indian.😊 I replied you in Lashy's thread also.

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