Akdha ff:Dastaan-E-Mohabbat...THREAD CLOSED-Thread 2 link page no.154 - Page 7

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Anu U Rock... I have not read chapter yet... In lunch time I will read it and comment... Thank U for super surprise... I can't wait to read... divorce issue...Please save Jalal...kya hoga uska... divorce ke baad me pata chala vo uska bhai tha... oh god... I will read in 2 hours

Originally posted by: Scarlettkevin

loved it

StoRy is going very good Anushka. Loved the idea of talak and the way you broke it. Fantastic. Your way of execution is really awesome for this current track lot lot better than serial. Loved it to core the way sujamal raised his voice in a court👏. Hamida Jodha bonding also very nice. Rraly good story , precap is interesting. Please update soon.

Originally posted by: dkorumilli

StoRy is going very good Anushka. Loved the idea of talak and the way you broke it. Fantastic. Your way of execution is really awesome for this current track lot lot better than serial. Loved it to core the way sujamal raised his voice in a court👏. Hamida Jodha bonding also very nice. Rraly good story , precap is interesting. Please update soon.

Thanks for the pm.

OMG! Such big compliment! I am so happy to have friends like you...!! gosh!😳😳

Hii Guys!! Shayad aap sabko yaad hoga ki groupbie banne ki khush mein I promised you all to give you an update today.. SO here I go! I don't know how you all will react to this chappy but this one's really special for me and also for our AKDHA.

This chapter will mark the beginning of their love.. SO here you go:

RECAP: "Jodha begum... kya ho gaya aapko.. aankhe kholiye Jodha begum!!" He patted her cheek but she remained unconcious.

"Ya Allah! Yeh humse kya ho gaya! Humne itna bade gunah kar diya!"

He immediately picked Jodha in his arms and carried her to his room. He ordered his guards NOT to arrest Sujamal and asked him to rest in the ROYAL GUEST HOUSE.

PART:4

Jalal gazed at the eternal beauty lying on the bed, lost in the world of unconciousness. Hakims have tended Jodha and she was recovering fast.

"Shahenshah, Begum Jodha ab bilkul durust hai. Unhe aaj raat ya kal tak hosh aa jaayega. Inke roza(fast) rakhne ki vajah se chakkar aa gaye the. Humne inhe dawaai de di hain."

Jalal thanked the Hakim from the bottom of his heart and also rewarded them handsomely. They greeted him and silently left the room. Jalal went to the bed and sat near Jodha.

" Hume... Hume muaf kardijiye Jodha( His voice was stammering). Humari vajah se.. aapko itni... itni takleef hui. Itna sab kuch sehna pada. Hume muaf kardije. Hum aapse... aapse vaada karte hain ki aaj ke baad koi bhi.. koi bhi aapko dukh nahi pahuchayega." He said while holding her hand.

He didn't realise when sleep took over him and dozed off on the bed beside Jodha.

MIDNIGHT

Jalal had woke up as he was thirsty and found Jodha murmuring in her sleep.

"Shahenshah.. Humara vishwaas kijiye. Hum Sujamal bhaisaa se milne gaye the.. Humne aapke saath vishwaasghat nahi kiya hai Shahensha.. Humara vishwaas kijiye.."

As soon as he heard her murmurs, he was guilt-struck. He carresed her forehead and said " Hume muaf kardijiye Jodha. Lekin aaj ke baad aisa kabhi nahi hoga.. Jo aap kahengi wahi humare liye sach hoga. Hum aapse mohabbat karte hain Jodha... Beintehaa mohabbat karte hain hum aapse."

Hearing his voice,Jodha calmed down and slept peacefully. Jalal remembered his promise and decided to sleep on the couch. Jodha finally opened her eyes and saw Jalal gazing at her. Jalal did not dared to go to her and said while sitting on the couch, "Hume muaf kardijiye Jodha.. Humne aapke saath bahut badsaluki ki. Aapki beizzati ki. Hum aapse vada karte hain ki hum aapse kabhi shak nahi karenge.. Humesh aapki kahi baat ko sach manenge.. Khuda ke liye hume muaf kardijiye. Hum aapse behad mohabbat karte hain." All this Jalal said in one go with his eyes lowered.

A lone tear trickled down her eyes as she saw the condition of her hhusband,her Shahenshah and most importantly, her love. She immediately ran to him and HUGGED him tightly. Jalal was way too shocked on her hug. Jodha sobbed terribly in his arms. "Aapne ek baar hume swayam se prathak karne ki cheshta ki hai... agar aapne dobara aisa kiya to hum aapko kabhi kshama nahi karenge.. kabhi nahi..." She said, sobbing.

Jalal carressed her back, assuring her. All of a sudden Jodha broke the hug and looked straight in Jalal's eyes and said, " Kya aap bhi humse prem karte hain Shahenshah?" Jalal was surprised by her question and nodded his head in a yes and smiled faintly. And then it struck him "Aap BHI". His smile kept on getting wider till it can't. He can't control his feelings now. He laughed out loudly. Jodha was shocked at this sudden reaction of Jalal. She asked him innocently, "Aap has kyon rahe hain Shahenshah?" Jalal controled his laughter very hardly and replied in a mischievious tone " Aapne humse kya poocha... AAP BHI humse mohabbat karte hain? Yahi naa"

"Haan.. Isme hasne ki kya baat hai?" Jodha replied innocently. And then she realized what she had said. She immediately hugged him tightly and blushed heavily. "Matlab aap bhi humse mohabbat karti hain Jodha begum?" These words were enough to make Jodha's cheeks go crimson red. Jalal broke the hug and saw Jodha's blush. He smirked and said "Aakhir aapne apne dil ki baat keh hi di Jodha".

Jodha looked in his eyes and saw pure and intense love. She replied looking in his eyes, "Haan Shahenshah... Hum bhi aapse prem karte hain." This was a big shock for Jalal. HE never ever thought that Jodha will confess her love. He quickly grabbed her waist and took her in his embrace. Their passionate hug was disturbed by a lady's voice.

"Ahem Ahem... Yeh kya ho raha hai Jalal?" Jodha saw her first and blushed heavily. She couldn't meet her eyes with Hamida. Jalal thinks its Jodha so he says without turning back, " Ab aap hume naam se bhi bulaane lagi Jodha?"Jodha was trying hard to come out of his grip but to no avail.

Hamida smiled seeing the love between her son and her chahiti bahu. She pretended fake anger and said loudly, " Accha Jalal! AB apni Ammi ki aawaaz bhi pechaan nahi paa rahe tum??"

Jalal is surprised hearing Ammi' so he breaks the hug and turns back to see Hamida staring at him.

" Hum to yahan Jodha ki tabiyat puchne aaye the.. Lekin yahaan to kuch aur hi dekh liya humne" Both Jodha and Jalal couldn't meet her eyes. Finally Jalal decided to change the topic. " Ammijaan. Jodha bilkul durust hai. Aap fikr mat kijiye. "

"WO to hogi hi na Jalal! Unke shauhar jo yahaan hai!" She said in a mischivious tone.

"Shabbakhair" Hamida said before leaving the room. Jalal was back into his mischievious mood and after noticing Jodha's embarrased face, he decided to tease her. " Humari Jodha ko sharm aa rahi hain?? Aapko apne shauhar se kuch chupani ki zaroorat nzahi hain Jodha."

Jodha gave a long angry glare to Jalal and replied back, "Jaise aapko sharm nahi aayi. Jab ammijaan humare samaksh khadi thi tab aap ko laga ki hum aapse baat kar rahe hain!! Aap humari aur ammijaan ki awaaz mein bhed nahi laga?"

"Are are bas... Ab humari Jungli billi humse naraaz ho jaayegi kya?" He replied in a mischievious tone. Jodha turned to go back but before she could, Jalal grabbed her by her waist and took her in his embrace.

"Hum aaj bahut khush hain Jodha... Aisa lag raha ki jaise duniya ki har khushi mil gayi ho hume. Hum tumse ek pal ke liye bhi juda nahi hona chahte."

"Hum bhi sadaiv hi aapke saath rehna chahte hain Shahenshah." She replied, her head resting on his manly chest. Then a thought struck her mind. Before she could say anything, Jalal said: "Fikr mat kariye Jodha. Sujamal bandhi nahi banaye gaye hain... Woh atithi greh mein mehfooz hain." Jodha smiled hearing his reply."Aapko kaise pata ki hum kya kehne waale hain?" She asked.

"Mohabbat karte hain hum aapse. Aapke mann ko samajh sakte hain hum." Jodha blushed heavily. She had lose her heart to Jalal. Then she realized that he is sleeping on the couch so she said, "Shahenshah, aap bhi humare saath vishram kar sakte hain. Hume aap par vishwaas hai, swayam se bhi adhik." Jalal was so happy at the thought that she trusts him that he felt he could burst anytime. "Zaoor. Aisa mauka hum kaise chod sakte hain Jodha.. Aapke itne kareeb..." Before he could complete his sentece Jodha pinched him on his shoulder.
"AAAH.. Yeh kya hai Jodha?" He replied in an angry tone.

" Humne kya kiya..??" She said very innocently and pulled him on the bed. She covered him with blanket and slowly went into a peaceful sleep. Jalal also dozed off thinking about their love.

MORNING

Soothing sunrays fell on Jalal's face as he slowly opened his eyes to see the most beautiful sight. Jodha was sleeping peacefully in his arms. How could Jalal control himself? He wanted this moment to last forever. He slowly embraced her waist and went to sleep.

Soon, Jodha woke up and blushed seeing her in Jalal's arms. She tried to free herself from his grip but instead, he tightened his grip on her, smiling innocently with his eyes closed. Jodha realises that he is awake and smiles. "Su prabhat Shahenshah." She slowly whispered in his ears. He did not replied, just smiled. Finally, Jalal loosened his grip on her. Sensing the opportunity, Jodha immediately woke up and adjusted her dupatta. She got up from her bed and as soon as she reached the corner where Jalal's was sleeping, he grabbed her by her wrist and pulled her towards him and she landed on his chest with a THUD!

Jodha was shocked seeing the sudden reaction of Jalal. "Yeh aap kya kar rahe hain! Chodiye hume Shahenshah! Jaane dijiye." She said in an angry voice.

" Humne kaha roka hai aapko? Aur aap khud hi hum par giri hain! Humne nahi kheecha aapko!" HE replied so innocently.

Jodha was surprised seeing his cute mischiefs and a smile spread on her rosy petal lips. Immediately, Jalal rolled and there he was, on top of Jodha. Jodha eyes widened in shock. She immediately pushed him and got up from the bed, giggling.

"Aap bhi na Shahenshah..." She said while running.

" Hum bhi kya Jodha?" He replied,chasing her.

Jalal thought of a plan to get Jodha. So he knowingly got on the bed assuming that Jodha would go to the other direction. And he was right, Jodha was right opposite the wall. SO he pretended that his leg has twisted while getting up from the bed.

"AAAH!" HE cried. Jodha's expression changed from that of happiness to worry. She immediately ran to him and asked him, "Kya hua Shahenshah? Aap theek to hai naa?"

"Lagta hai moch aa gayi hai Jodha..." He decided to extend this drama a little bit.

"Moch?!! Shahenshah aap apna dhyan kyu nahi rakhte? Dhyan se utarna tha naa.. Rukiye. Hum abhi dekhte hain." As soon as Jodha bent down to examine his feet Jalal grabbed her wrist and pinned her to the wall with a jerk.

"Yeh aap kya kar rahe hai?" She said not understanding that it was a drama.

" Aakhir humne aapko pakad hi liya Jodha.." He whispered while his fingers played with her hair.

Jodha got angry and decided to teach him a lesson. So she leaned closer to his face and pretended to kiss him. And she was right, Jalal closed his eyes. Jodha immediately ran from there and shouted "Aankhen Kholiye Shahenshah!! Aap hume nahi pakad paaye!!" Jalal opened his eyes in amazement and saw Jodha running away.

He smirked at her wittiness and said, " Aakhir kab tak bhaagein gi aap Jodha? Humari mohabbat aapko humare kareeb le hi aayegi.."

PRECAP: IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT IN DWK... ANY GUESS WHAT WILL IT BE??

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Regards,

Anushka...