AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 2: Chap 7-10

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#841

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy
Wooow! What an update PP... really thrilling... You know..I feel ye Jalal ne hi karwaaya hai... Taaki Jodha paas aa sake...
hmm...aaj toh sare jasoos ek hi baat bol rahe hai...😆

Amazingly written... But itna chota update! 😡
yeh chota tha 😲...ask pals she will tell you how long it was😳

I loved how you described Jodha's helplessness upon losing her very child... my heart went out to her...
yap...that was tooo bad

I hope RIco's fine with Jalal 😛
Zaleem jodha ki bhi toh soch😆

Waiting for next update... beautiful writing 🤗 Love ya
thanks sweety...love ya 🤗

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#842

Waah prianka waaahhh! Kya kaatil update di hai tumne...bache ko uski maa se cheen liya tumne! Kahin wo insaan tum hi toh nhi jisko 500 crore chahiye!! XD
Jodha and Rico's bond! What a classic thing to read...i loved it. Koi toh hai jiske saath jodha khush hai :/ :)
But prianka seriously 70k ka football!! Kya bakwaas hai! Jodha kya mai tak na khareedu ye.
Rico kidnapped :/ Poor jodha...i really liked how you played with the words there to show her emotions. Then the call! Amazing conversation...par ek baat bata...tu 500 crore ka karegi kya? XD XD
She is ready to meet him. Gosh i am so excited for the next man. Plus i even loved HB n Jo's bond...they have a real mother daughter bond. Nicely penned!
Are hum yaha ruku ko kaise bhul gayeee...acha mazaak banaygi ye khudka...mujhe dkhni hai iiski popat :D

Super update this was...now eagerly waiting for the rest...take your time and write the best ;)
It rhymed :O ;D

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aisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#843

amazing update👏

just waiting for yr next update as it is really difficult to hide my excitement after reading the precap😳😃😛

only question coming in my mind is "what will happen next"😕😉

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#844

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy
Also, I love Jodha's and Hameeda's bonding in your story! Really touching and amazing 😳

thanks dear...in JA thats my fab part...i just adore their BOND😳

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#845

Originally posted by: Pals2411

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#846

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
awesome update

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Pallavi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#847

Next Update chalu kiya kya🥱

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#848

Originally posted by: ---Mehak---

oh god oh god ☺️
This chapter 10 was shocking like hell Pri ...
😆...mehku mera WARIS 🤗

And the precap .. ufff ... i can't stop thinking about it ☺️
jyada mat soch...tere umar ke liye thik nehi hai 😆

But how does someone else rather then Jalal , Hamida , Jodha and Abdul can knw that Rico is Jalal's son ..
yehi toh pata lagana hai...😉

This update was awesome
thanks love...jyada idhar udhar ghum mat...SHADES ka update de 😡

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#849

Originally posted by: Pals2411
Next Update chalu kiya kya🥱

jee haan 😳

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sneha sanyal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#850

awesome.. mindblowing.,superb, .as usual..
bt di i ws shocked whn i found maham ..kamini maham yahan vi..
.hurray jodha challi jallu se meeting ko.. hayee..iske lia to main wait kar nahi payungi..
di next update kab de rahe ho..
plss give me jaldi jaldi...cant wait.. ..excitemnt k chakkar mein buri halat hone wali hai ager sunday tak next chappy nahi milli to..plss di humari mangge puri karo

Edited by SsnehHa - 11 years ago