Beautiful PP .. kya likthi ho yaar!
Wonderful.. loved it!🤗
thanks lashy...my darling...its always nice to see you here🤗
I've highlighted the bits that I loved!
'I tried to talk to her...but she ran away Abdul...what do I do to make her listen to me...what do I do...'
'it's not that simple Abdul...it's a bit complicated', leaving the sentence half done, Jalal started walking towards the bar counter. He filled up a tumbler and gulped it down at once. This rush of emotions, this desperation, this immense desire...everything was new for Jalal. He had never been in such turmoil before.
never felt this much urge for any of them...this much passion for any of them. Since the moment he saw her...touched her, her thoughts...her image didn't left him, not even for a second. Jalal himself didn't have the idea that he can actually go crazy for a girl.
'I want her Abdul...I want her. I want her to be with me...forever. I want her to be in my arms when I close my eyes at night...I want her to be there when I wake up in morning. I want her in my life...' Jalal paused to take breath here. Gulping down another shot he began, 'I never felt this way for a girl...never wanted one so much...never craved to touch one so much. You may call it love...lust...or desire...anything...I really don't care. I just want her.'
Loool first time love..
isme lool kya hai be???
That much was enough to paralyze Abdul's senses. All of a sudden his decade old friend appeared a stranger to him. 'Who is this Jalal!!! Longing for a girl!!!' Abdul was damn surprised...but certainly not disappointed.
I liked this reaction from Abdul a lot!
he is a darling...waise ajkal mere desire ke thread me Jalal se jyada Abdul ki demand hai
'I have wronged her Abdul. I have touched her against her will, she cried but I didn't listen to her...I just...but trust me Abdul I have never been so bad with any women. But with her...I don't know what happened to me. She just took over my senses. I lost control over my mind...and pulled towards her. She is like a drug to me. Whenever she is around, I simply loose the strength to stay away from her. I want to touch her...feel her...make her mine...forever. I will loose my mind Abdul, if I don't get her...' finishing this Jalal drank almost half the bottle of Chivas Regal.
Brought back everything...
explain plz
Within few minutes the duo left for Jodha, without knowing this encounter will unleash a flood of turmoil in their life.
Shocked... as though you're giving us any less shocks than you already have😲
what the...haha😆
Jalal was about to utter something but the sight of Jodha, ceased his flow. She came out of the orphanage gate...the lackluster turquoise blue salwar, could hardly reduce the grandeur of her beauty. Her bright skin was glowing under afternoon sun. Her mere sight paced Jalal's heartbeat hundred times faster. He could feel himself sinking in her presence all over again. Looking at his friend's reaction Abdul easily guessed who SHE was.
Chalo jaldi se ankhen pocho...ab main agaya hoon na, jo bhi problem hai...milke samhal lenge. Ok?' With this the guy wiped Jodha's tears from her cheeks and wrapped his arms around her...hugged her.
I was shocked by this Jo aashiq 😲
kasam se Jalal bhi...😆
The MUGHAL blood in Jalal called for punishment. And he responded.
I loved this reaction and all the reactions below- and Abdul's timely response to it too.. 😛
waise Abdul bhi kaam nehi hai...woh bhi toh Jodha ko taak raha tha...thank god jallu ko pata nehi chala...warna...
Jalal had already pulled out his 9mm pistol from the front box of the car.
Goli Jodha ko bhi toh lag sakti hai na...
Jodha's son...Salim...DNA...unknown man...these scattered phrases only added up to one logical conclusion for Jalal...'somebody else touched her'. This thought was like a stab to his heart. Hence he decided to put an end to this DNA discussion.
Loool... yahaan par bhi uski insecurity eating him.. 😆
he is a gone case😆
The all powerful Jalaluddin Mohammad was just a frail fly in the hands of Fate.
Well said! 👏
The night before the accident, Jalal was with Jodha. That night he became one with her. Jalal always wanted her back in his life but he never imagined, that one night he spend with her, will give him the most precious gift of his life...his SON.
Wow!
Can't wait to read what happens next.. plz cont,...😳
tum kaho our hum na maane aisa kabhie ho sakta hai bhala...bolo kab chahiye update?
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