AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 2: Chap 7-10 - Page 67

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

bachha KAUN???😆

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

*Edited*

Prianka Charan kaha hai tumhare? Hahaha dekha kuch ghante baad bhi yeh dialogue change nhi hua mera

yeh le mere charan...ab bol kya karna hai...😆

Yaar kya solid likha hai tumne! Matlab maan gayi mai aaj...bas maan gayi tumhe! I am in love with your writing man :O Especially with this story! Wow its just soo appealing!

bas bhi kar yaar...kitna tarif karegi...rulayegi kya...😭

Not even jalal its abdul whose characterization is just making me fall for him *Drooolss* jalal ko jodha ke saath tu waise bhi set kar hi degi...mujhe abdul dede 😛 XD XD

alle...main toh khud Abdul ke sath romance karneka soch rahi thi...but agar tu chahti hai toh thik hai...abdul tera🤗

Acha now coming to the update...i just love your description about each and every thing...whether its abdul's anxiety or be it jalal's behaviour. It just engrosses me into the story and nor do i feel that its getting boring or something. Its just perfect..i think i need some tips here.

😳 main sharma gaye...waise you are damn good writer yaar...you dont need any tips from me atleast.

Plus this whole update was jalal and abdul's and included the past. It was indeed fabulously written. Jalal ka gussa..ufff! Khair he himself is Ufff

Khauff-e-azm...Jalal

Agar jalal ka behaviour aisa hi raha na toh end mei abdul ke alawa koi bachega nahi shaadi ke liye!

main toh hoon na...

Aur abdul ko mai lene dungi nahi..ab sab tere haath mei hai dost...jalal ko thoda dimaag de aur usse bol ki sirf rico nahi jodha bhi hai saath mei!

firk mat...jalal ko jodha sudhar degi..

And update soon

ja nehi karti

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Originally posted by: J2lover

wow...miss.PP...just wow...wat an update...👏👏i totally loved it...😉😉

aww thanks love...thnk you sooo much

finally u brought a JEALOUS JALLU!!!!😳😳hayeee...kitta POSSESIVE hoo raha tha...☺️❤️

log darr rahe hai...and tujhe achha lag raha hai...OMG...lol

...poor abdul...as to be soo much ALERT wenevr he's with his BEST BUDDY!!!😆😆...am sure if it was not abdul at that tym...golliyon ki raaslila racha hi daalta mera RAM!!!😆

hahah...you are mad...goliyon ki raas...what the...btw you are actually right...pakka yehi hota...

that flashback was lovely!!!😳😳 n FINNALY...FINALLY...jallu got THE BIGEEST surprise of his LIFE!!!🤗🤗...now JUST waiting...wen mini version RAM..meets BIGGER VERSION!!!😉..n HIS LEELA too!!!☺️☺️

am damn confused kya likhu kya na likhu

...n loke to mention...that descrption of jallu's turmoil after knowing the truth!!!!wow...amzing miss.PP...tuzzi great hoo👏👏

shukriya jee...

...continue soon...pecap ne pehelehi hypertension de dala...MY DARLING is MISSING!!!!😲😲 hope jallu finds him soon!!!😉😉n...n that means...THEY ARE GONNA MEET!!!🤪🤪

itna bhi khush mat ho...india ka koyee bharosa nehi...last minute me kuch bhi ho sakta hai...

.uff..uff..can't wait di..plzz..update soon!!!!😆

will try to...my love

Originally posted by: spvd

part 9
awesome dear...
poor Jalal...
how did that accident happen?

keep reading pata chal jayega😆

but now he gotta know that Rico is his son and Jodha's...
hes very possessive of Jodha...
then why are they separated?

TOP secrete😆...next 2 chapy me pata chal jayega😳

OMG he wanted to kill Jodha's friend?
cont soon dear...

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Originally posted by: Pals2411

bachha nahin PP, bechare...HUM aur kaun

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

chal yaar aj ke liye by...kal i will not be comng here...

i will be out of station...ofcl tour

Beautiful PP .. kya likthi ho yaar!

Wonderful.. loved it!🤗

I've highlighted the bits that I loved!

'I tried to talk to her...but she ran away Abdul...what do I do to make her listen to me...what do I do...'

'it's not that simple Abdul...it's a bit complicated', leaving the sentence half done, Jalal started walking towards the bar counter. He filled up a tumbler and gulped it down at once. This rush of emotions, this desperation, this immense desire...everything was new for Jalal. He had never been in such turmoil before.

never felt this much urge for any of them...this much passion for any of them. Since the moment he saw her...touched her, her thoughts...her image didn't left him, not even for a second. Jalal himself didn't have the idea that he can actually go crazy for a girl.

'I want her Abdul...I want her. I want her to be with me...forever. I want her to be in my arms when I close my eyes at night...I want her to be there when I wake up in morning. I want her in my life...' Jalal paused to take breath here. Gulping down another shot he began, 'I never felt this way for a girl...never wanted one so much...never craved to touch one so much. You may call it love...lust...or desire...anything...I really don't care. I just want her.'

Loool first time love..

That much was enough to paralyze Abdul's senses. All of a sudden his decade old friend appeared a stranger to him. 'Who is this Jalal!!! Longing for a girl!!!' Abdul was damn surprised...but certainly not disappointed.

I liked this reaction from Abdul a lot!

'I have wronged her Abdul. I have touched her against her will, she cried but I didn't listen to her...I just...but trust me Abdul I have never been so bad with any women. But with her...I don't know what happened to me. She just took over my senses. I lost control over my mind...and pulled towards her. She is like a drug to me. Whenever she is around, I simply loose the strength to stay away from her. I want to touch her...feel her...make her mine...forever. I will loose my mind Abdul, if I don't get her...' finishing this Jalal drank almost half the bottle of Chivas Regal.

Brought back everything...

Within few minutes the duo left for Jodha, without knowing this encounter will unleash a flood of turmoil in their life.

Shocked... as though you're giving us any less shocks than you already have😲

Jalal was about to utter something but the sight of Jodha, ceased his flow. She came out of the orphanage gate...the lackluster turquoise blue salwar, could hardly reduce the grandeur of her beauty. Her bright skin was glowing under afternoon sun. Her mere sight paced Jalal's heartbeat hundred times faster. He could feel himself sinking in her presence all over again. Looking at his friend's reaction Abdul easily guessed who SHE was.

Chalo jaldi se ankhen pocho...ab main agaya hoon na, jo bhi problem hai...milke samhal lenge. Ok?' With this the guy wiped Jodha's tears from her cheeks and wrapped his arms around her...hugged her.

I was shocked by this Jo aashiq 😲

The MUGHAL blood in Jalal called for punishment. And he responded.

I loved this reaction and all the reactions below- and Abdul's timely response to it too.. 😛

Jalal had already pulled out his 9mm pistol from the front box of the car.

Goli Jodha ko bhi toh lag sakti hai na...

Jodha's son...Salim...DNA...unknown man...these scattered phrases only added up to one logical conclusion for Jalal...'somebody else touched her'. This thought was like a stab to his heart. Hence he decided to put an end to this DNA discussion.

Loool... yahaan par bhi uski insecurity eating him.. 😆

The all powerful Jalaluddin Mohammad was just a frail fly in the hands of Fate.

Well said! 👏

The night before the accident, Jalal was with Jodha. That night he became one with her. Jalal always wanted her back in his life but he never imagined, that one night he spend with her, will give him the most precious gift of his life...his SON.

Wow!

Can't wait to read what happens next.. plz cont,...😳

Originally posted by: Pals2411

What😲...Kitna jaldi bataya tune...Bye ke saath...Warna humlog tujhe satate isliye na😡...Too smart...Aur ek din update late...BYE PP...Enjoy (Even if it is an office tour)...Take care😳

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

awesome update yrr
just fantastic!