FF: Registan Ka GULAB (Rose in Desert) Thread 1 Close Thread 2 Active - Page 30

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia

Beautiful Story..

Don't know whats wrong with the like button. Its showing an error.

Update soon. And do send me a pm with your next update.

Tc...

Flavia

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

bhavini...kal mera chutti tha...so I went through the chappys...dear...what was that...it was awesome...

first of all prologue was damn interesting. mere dimag me kitna kuch chal raha hai...I cant tell you...was he attacked or he attacked somebody...precisely jodha...

and btw tum lakh chupalo...am damn sure this Radha is Jodha...may be she is here to take revenge of something...pata nehi tumne kya khichri paka rakhhi hai...

chap 2 se clear hai...Jalal have met those doe like eyes. how I love that diwana Jalal...

bhavini an ardent req from this poor soul...plz plz keep this chase going...bada maza araha...

love you...keep updating...am just loving this...

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Hey bhavini! I am sorry for such a late reply, my exams are going on so i didn't got time to comment here. I read the two chapters before, have to say girl HatsOff! What a brilliant writing and execution :O *Claps*

omg!!! i am so touched with your comment... I always feels so proud when i see comment for expert writer...

The story and its concept is so intriguing and appealing that i actually wanted to comment in detail and big as you deserve every bit of it...but today i couldn't stop myself from writing here.

vow this means a lot to me😃

I super like the character of radha! She is so strong and independent, her scene with the guard was wow. Plus her bonding with rahim is very sweet. Everyone was all praising about radha, her intelligence, values and beauty which in turn led jalal restless. It was all very nicely described by you!

Yes... This Radha is very strong... U will see her more talent... bravery and much much more...

The jungle incident is getting mysterious...radha is jodha and that man is jalal...thats

Yes... In next chapter it will revel that Radha is Jodha...

why she was walking away everytime after morning puja...she is here to seek revenge i guess?

She has not seen who is practicing... In Agra palace hindu prayer is not allowed so she secretly does prayer very early morning... she thought some guard is running behind to catch her...

I honestly loved how you handled all the characters in these two updates. The title "Registaan Ka Gulaab" is very nice! It has a ethnic rural touch to it..so i love it. Even i belong to registaan area XD Lol i meant Jaipur :)
I am glad U love this title... U from Jaipur... vow...

Loved the updates. Keep them coming!

Sure I will

Originally posted by: JAN_SA

simply loved it read allarts in one go cant wait to read more

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

am waiting 😳

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Here U go my favourite comment for darling Rima...
Hamida was surprise with Radha... couldn't believe... She confirmed with Rahim...

It was shocked and strange for her ... choti ammi ... mean she is a begum of Jalal... she was surprise why Rahim think that she is choti ammi... she didn't like at first dasi called her as begum... but after explanations he understood and appreciate Radha

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

As soon as he heard SC... he recall the purpose of his visit... he doesn't know what he has done... but he knows that he had done something wrong... very wrong...

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Radha doesn't know yet... that he was gazing at her... Jalal is unknowing getting attracted to her ... First her prayer then her kamarbandh and payal sound...

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Dosti me aesa hi hota hai... ek hi minute me chemistry ban jati hai... U right even his name giving her shivers... soon will revel... in next chapter... U right he was drugged by dancer that night... What ever he did he was not in his sense... He was drunk that bad... In first drink he felt something was in drink... so he pushed dancer away from him... and walk out of his tent...

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Yes those fearful painful angry eyes are hunting him...

First of all Jalal is in also helpless condition... He has unknown guilt which is killing and eating him up inside.. Only her prayer is started to give her peace... he want to see her... Her payal and kamabandh sound... really attract him... he saw her in the garden... and her prayer... His strong crave to see her...made him run behind her... poor Radha got scared ...