FF: Desert Rose (Chapter 7, Pg 35) 11/07

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BlackWitch

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: PupCat
Awesome update yaar!! Update soon otherwise i'll surely beat u!!
Wanted a pm if possible!!

Hahaha 😆🤣 Now I am so gayiguzri that I am getting threats of a beating. Ab toh chapters likhne hi padenge! Warna Shahi Farmaan mere khilaaf hoga 😛 I am adding you to the PM list 😃

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Preet

@rishbala3018

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

Res :))
Unres

Very interestingly and awesomely written 👏

Edited by rishbala3018 - 11 years ago

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PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

Yeahhh my babyyy is baccckkk ... unres 😃

Okay my sweetheart prateeksha is backkk ... & in action ... now if u dont give me the updates oftenly then you will face my wrath 😡 my dear ... gosh ...I was sooo much waiting & waiting & waiting & waiting for this update to be released ... & finally its been released ... & whatt an awesome update yaarrr 👏 ...btw I missed you sooo much ... 😭 ... I knw u were busy & stuff ... but still 😭😭 ... now plzzz dont you dare become Ms.Gayab from the forum 😡 again ... ye mera dhamaki hai 😳

Now coming to the update ... jodha & jalal both are lying to each other 😆 ... both are adamant in revealing their identity ...😉 ... now even after these close encounter's what makes jodha hide her identity ...??? & also what makes jalal hide his identity to jodha ... cant they reveal the truth???

well i love this shatir jalal ... even after jodha lied he didnt cave into her worked up story 😆 ... btw was she eyeing him when he was tending to her foot ...?? 😉 ...

i loved this part the most ...

1) "Oh, cease the god awful screaming, woman," he complained, comically rubbing his ears. "And stop fighting with my bedding. I am partial to it and I do not want your claws spoiling it."

( jalal is worried about his bedding getting spoiled , what will happen on their first night then 😆...🤣 Omg... !! you are sooo good in bringing out the sarcastic humor prateeksha ... 😆 i love it )

Loved loved loved this update ... i want next one ASAP ... thatz an order from Queen Varsha😆

Edited by varshaakulkarni - 11 years ago

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Rashmi81

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

You write too good.I liked your interlude of passion also very much.Please can you continue that also.

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#235

lovely.. finally u updated...tks dear...

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Radz

@...Radhika...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted
Hahaha 😆🤣 Now I am so gayiguzri that I am getting threats of a beating. Ab toh chapters likhne hi padenge! Warna Shahi Farmaan mere khilaaf hoga 😛 I am adding you to the PM list 😃

okay love! are gayiguzri nahi... ye Pune ka special style hai... har sentence me marne ki dhamki dene ka! 😆

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Rasika29

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Posted: 11 years ago

#237

Finally...u are back..😊

Am going to read the chapter and will comment after reading...😛

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rpeez

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Posted: 11 years ago

#238

Thanks for the PM Pratiksha.

A very interesting chapter with both of them hiding their identities. 😉

But, why does Jalaal do that? Why is he reluctant to admit who he is?

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#239

part 6
awesome dear...
so interesting...
so Jalal didnt believe her story...
cont soon dear...

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Jas2204

@Jas2204

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Posted: 11 years ago

#240

I only found this FF today. Read all 6 chapters in one go. Absolutely loved it. You are a fabulous writer. This is one of the best written FF's I have ever read.😊

If possible, please PM me when you add future chapters.

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