Akdha FF ~|| Heartless ||~PROLOGUE updated pg 1 (24.3.14)

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MUSKAN

@copacati

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Chaliya chaliya chaliya rooh choora loo mein hu asi chaliya chaliya pass na aau mein hu asie chaliya Chaliya chaliya ho chaliya haath nau aise chaliya

Bhagwan ke liye apna besura gana band karde chaliya

Sorry sis aaj toh mein buppy lahri ka record tor kar rahongi

Record toota ya na toota tera gaana se ghaar ke sheeshe zarror toot jaane hai

Kisi ne door beel bajaye

Ji boliye kisse milna ha apko

Ji mein aapke liye parcel leke aaya hu

And he give her a very heavy parcel

Thanks bhaiya

Vo darvaza band kar deti hai

Fir se doorbell bajati hai

Ji aap...

Ji vo madam ji paaani meliga

Ha yahin rooko

Meanwhile chaliya ne gana baand kar diya tha bathrrom se lekne ke bad vo apne kapde phen rahi thi

Doosari taraf awaaz aayi

Yeh le...

The voice stooped suddenly

Di are u there

Di di di

Vo apne kamare se nekeli aar usna dekha ki charro aur khoon falya hua hai

Di di di she cried uski di vaha nhi thi darwaaza khula hua tha aur jahan uski di thi vaha sirf khoon tha... sirf ...khoon

Suddenly the phone rang up

She was not in her senses but manage she managed to pick up the phone

Befor she could say anything

The caller spoke up

"Hope u had fun...jodha "

And she stood there alone there ... no she wasn't alone there she had the PARCEL with her

Ready for ur jhootass and chappals

Tamator bhi fako ge chalega lekin agar tamator ke saath pyaaz feko gae toh bhotth ,ehrbami hogi😲

I will continue only when aap sablogo ko achi lage gi

Agar achi lage toh log khate hai like button daba dena chaiya

Comment karna mat bhulna and u can give me ur suggestions😳

Edited by copacati - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

RES

will unres soon😃

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.LiveLaughLove.

@.LiveLaughLove.

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Posted: 11 years ago

This fan fiction has a superb start and I'm sure it is gonna rock. Please continue soon 😃

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Mishika

@Mishika123

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome start Muskan dear !👏

Plz update soon ! 👍🏼

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

Nice !!! Please continue soon with Long chapter... I am sure with Rock this story...

Suspense...Thriller... Update soon... Ye khoon dekhke me darr...gayi... Jaldi... Update dena😆

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MUSKAN

@copacati

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

PROLOGUE

Well thanks for reading the crap created by me the responses mean a lot to me .

Do all the lady love needed to be beautiful do all the lady love needed to be meek need help of the male lead no not really .

She closes the clip

Well this is how it happened with me as she said trying hard to keep a straight face she was at the verge of crying

I am sorry for your sis jodha she said ruks said without any emotions

she was the least interested in what happenend with jodha and her sister

Well it's all okay replied jodha

Well u sing very nicely exclaimed

Surya

All the eyes turned towards surya here jodha was trying to decipher about why it happened to her sister and here he was saying how beautiful she sang he just do not have it she taught

I was just trying to make the situation light

What happened to ur sis then salima asked jodha with atmost sympathy. Although she was jodha's best friend she did not know the reason for her irritation whenever one of the collegues tried to ask her

Dont know she replied 4 yrs has passed since its incident

AND what about the parcel asked surya

NONE OF YOUR CONCERN replied jodha just u need to know this that this is one of the reason why i joined RAW

You may leave now surya said ruks in a bossy tone

Sury left

So my boss said u two r selected to come with me to Chicago

Well forget ur boss name what was the...

Before salima can complete her sentence jodha replied

Jalal ...Mr Jalaludin Mohommad in somewhat caring manner

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Tahniat Ahmad

@Sexylicious.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Nice update hun!
Next time give a longer one!

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prianka

@ppluvkuch

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

hey thats wonderful yaar...really loved the concept

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MUSKAN

@copacati

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch
hey thats wonderful yaar...really loved the concept

thanx😳

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PoPo/PoPu

@TheItalianBride

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

Wow, Thriller Akdha FF um.. m eager to read it more 👍🏼 great work keep 'em coming

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Akdha FF ~|| Heartless ||~PROLOGUE updated pg 1 (24.3.14)

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