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Radhika Arora

@radhika7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#871

ANother beautifully written chappy.👏...Finally jodha's past is revealed...What a true friend she has got in moti...its really a blessing...i hope she celebrates her this birthday with full joy and hopefully no bad things this time...will wait eagerly to read the next update.😊

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aisha

@aisha.....11110

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Posted: 11 years ago

#872

Originally posted by: Anushka8722

Bahut zyada delay!!! ab compensate karna!! 😡 😆

ohh sorry

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aisha

@aisha.....11110

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Posted: 11 years ago

#873

Originally posted by: ruthshalini
Its was awesome update yar I loved it 😊

thnks a lot dear😉

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aisha

@aisha.....11110

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Posted: 11 years ago

#874

Originally posted by: onaisa
supeeer duper update
finally pills ka raaz khul gays ..
thanx Fr d PM

yup pills ka ho gya parda faash😆

btw thanks a lott dear😉

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aisha

@aisha.....11110

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Posted: 11 years ago

#875

Originally posted by: radhika7
ANother beautifully written chappy.👏...Finally jodha's past is revealed...What a true friend she has got in moti...its really a blessing...i hope she celebrates her this birthday with full joy and hopefully no bad things this time...will wait eagerly to read the next update.😊

awww...thnx a lot dear

dont take tention ab sab kuch guddy guddy hoga😆😉

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#876

OMG aisha ... jodha's past 😭😭😭😭😭 ... i cant stop crying ... n my hero jalal rushed to her as soon as moti called him ... so considerate of him ... aur bechara veer ko kutta bana diya ... 😆 ... so cute !!!

I loved the chapter ... so finally we came to knw why jodha used to take pills ... hmmm interesting ...

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#877

Aisha awesome yaar... I have no words for your talent... What a mind blowing story... I loved last two chapters the most... I could feel Jodha's pain when she left the house... I pictured every scene...how empty everyone where feeling without Jodha... The way she hug him sleep...was so cute... and hilarious part... she name that doggy... Veer... aww... entire chapter was mind blowing... I really felt she was treated like princess in Jalal's house... She broke Jalal's fav vase but Jalal didn't got angry at her...I love your imagination and every little things in the story...

This chapter... I almost cried for Jodha... poor girl has suffered so so so much in her life... She has gone through so much pain... fear ...anxiety... separation... on top of it... kamina Ajay ...omg... poor Jodha... suffered so much... No wonder she is in depression and got habit of medicine... Aisha you creativity is mindblowing... loving it... sorry for late comment... I am really so crazy busy... but can't help it when I see pm from you...No matter how busy I am... I read it... Love your story and writing thank U so much.