AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 1- 6 - Page 61

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

First chapter 1 : I loved Naughty Rico...and Jodha running behind him... My heart broke when rico was standing by that toy shop looking at that car... and he surpress his desire... vow what a understanding kid... I felt Jo and Ric both pain in that part... and also U have successfully display Jodha's condition what she is going through... raising child alone with some financial crisis... and Then U have added suspense dream... That really scared me the way you have written entire part mind blowing...

well tumne itna kuch kaha...dont know what to start with...it seems you got what i wanted to write...yap..i wanted to make Jo a strong lady...who has many hurdles on her way...but never loose hope...Rico being her only lifeline...

Did Jalal force on Jodha in the past? I am sure something connected to Jalal with this dream...

well it may take few more updates to get to this...

I wanted to read this story for so long but short of time... but now I am hooked on this story so no matter how busy I am I will read it... thank U so much for beautiful story

aww..you will read it no matter how busy you are...did you just said that...

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

I love Chapter 2: specially you display Jalal's character and condition beautifully... The way he fire Amir... I loved his attitude... I am still wondering In what he failed... probably in search of Jodha...May be wrong ...or overthinking... U might have put out to display his character... I love in through out chapter display his character richness... I felt throughout his personality very royal... but outline... Most fav part Abdul and Jalal's bonding and understanding...I wish we had that in serial... serial has mostly all main character women... anyway I loved how he shut Rukaiya... lol... and his desire for women...every night he is with diff women but not satisfied... still wanting her (probably) ... In one line somewhere I am not sure what chapter but ... he got in to accident and can not be a father? Wondering what accident? I loved his attitude toward Ruku... and she wants to marry him for his money and status... Superb...

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Chapter 3 very interesting... Someone is helping Jodha... and she called her Ammijaan😲...is it Hamida?

ok...lets divulge this much for you...YES its hamida banu...

and Really U have written beautifully about Maham and Adham... but sorry no interest in their pair... kamine kahi ke😆...

mujhe bhi koyee interest nehi hai in me...but had to waste some lines to introduce these creeps

Maham married to humayu😲 omg... another shock... Superb

yaar ek baat bata...shock kaise superb ho sakta hai

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Chpater 4 ... vow what alishan house.. 10th floor for Mr. Jalal dude... lol ... his indeed sound very rich and royal... he doesn't let anyone comes close to him...

yap raees hai banda

Ruku ...jalkukdi ... trying to get Jalal...I am glad Jalal had to leave no swim baby... swim alone ok...

trust me dear...jalal akele hi swim karega...

Poor Ric...worried for competition... Panda can't wait for more...

aww🤗

Jallu not feeling well...he is going on cruise... vow... I am glad he care about his father's trust and he going to be a chief guest for the competition... Can't wait for Salim and Jalal's meeting and I doubt will get to see Jodha and Jalal's meeting soon... but I can always hope for it...😃 Superb...

wait wait ...watch watch...sorry read read

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

YAAR ESA ZATAKA... MAHAM AND HUMAYU😲... YE SHOCKING BHI HAI AUR SUPERB ISS LIYE KI KISI NE AESA AB TAK SOCHA NAHI😆

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

i thought lets see yeh rista kya kehlata hai...😆

actually..i wanted to make adham jalal's legal bro...thats why mujhe Humayun ke saath yeh nainsaafi karna para

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Rico and Jalal convo... How cute... I adore this teaser... so cute...

ab...kya kahoon...🤗

Ricco is talking to Jalal and telling him about his passion for sports car...You have written with detail expression and action ...I imagined everybit of it...

kya baat kar rahi hai...tune jalal and rico ko dekha...maine toh abhitak nehi dekha...

Hope Jalal find out he don't have any sports car... but I guess Rico is so smart he wont revel that he don't have sports car.. Lovely

rico ko bachha mat samjho...woh bohot samajhdar hai😎

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

CHALO AB HUMNE BATE VATE BAHOT KI AB UPDATE DEDO😆

UPDATE PLZZZ🤣

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

tere comments ka reply deke am damm tired...now need tons of Glucose to revive energy😆