AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 1- 6

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

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tum log bakbak karo...main sandy ke sath chai pike ayye

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Posted: 11 years ago

#592

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

tum log bakbak karo...main sandy ke sath chai pike ayye

Yeh hai hum jaise sacche readers ki kaddar😭... Hamare comments - bakbak...😭 yeh maine kya sun liya...🥱

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#593

First chapter 1 : I loved Naughty Rico...and Jodha running behind him... My heart broke when rico was standing by that toy shop looking at that car... and he surpress his desire... vow what a understanding kid... I felt Jo and Ric both pain in that part... and also U have successfully display Jodha's condition what she is going through... raising child alone with some financial crisis... and Then U have added suspense dream... That really scared me the way you have written entire part mind blowing... Did Jalal force on Jodha in the past? I am sure something connected to Jalal with this dream... I wanted to read this story for so long but short of time... but now I am hooked on this story so no matter how busy I am I will read it... thank U so much for beautiful story

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I love Chapter 2: specially you display Jalal's character and condition beautifully... The way he fire Amir... I loved his attitude... I am still wondering In what he failed... probably in search of Jodha...May be wrong ...or overthinking... U might have put out to display his character... I love in through out chapter display his character richness... I felt throughout his personality very royal... but outline... Most fav part Abdul and Jalal's bonding and understanding...I wish we had that in serial... serial has mostly all main character women... anyway I loved how he shut Rukaiya... lol... and his desire for women...every night he is with diff women but not satisfied... still wanting her (probably) ... In one line somewhere I am not sure what chapter but ... he got in to accident and can not be a father? Wondering what accident? I loved his attitude toward Ruku... and she wants to marry him for his money and status... Superb...

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 3 very interesting... Someone is helping Jodha... and she called her Ammijaan😲...is it Hamida? and Really U have written beautifully about Maham and Adham... but sorry no interest in their pair... kamine kahi ke😆... Maham married to humayu😲 omg... another shock... Superb

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#596

Originally posted by: Pals2411
Yeh hai hum jaise sacche readers ki kaddar😭... Hamare comments - bakbak...😭 yeh maine kya sun liya...🥱

oye sachhe reader kahan gaye😆

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#597

Chpater 4 ... vow what alishan house.. 10th floor for Mr. Jalal dude... lol ... his indeed sound very rich and royal... he doesn't let anyone comes close to him... Ruku ...jalkukdi ... trying to get Jalal...I am glad Jalal had to leave no swim baby... swim alone ok...

Poor Ric...worried for competition... Panda can't wait for more...

Jallu not feeling well...he is going on cruise... vow... I am glad he care about his father's trust and he going to be a chief guest for the competition... Can't wait for Salim and Jalal's meeting and I doubt will get to see Jodha and Jalal's meeting soon... but I can always hope for it...😃 Superb...

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#598

awww...bhavini...main parke...reply karti hoon...thanks yaar...you took so much effort

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#599

Rico and Jalal convo... How cute... I adore this teaser... so cute... Ricco is talking to Jalal and telling him about his passion for sports car...You have written with detail expression and action ...I imagined everybit of it... Hope Jalal find out he don't have any sports car... but I guess Rico is so smart he wont revel that he don't have sports car.. Lovely

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ppluvkuch
awww...bhavini...main parke...reply karti hoon...thanks yaar...you took so much effort

Yaar tumne itna superb likha hai ki... I was feeling guilty aese padh ke bhag ja na not fair...and I wanted to tell you what I felt about each chapter... loved it... 👏👏👏👏👏