~*FF-NOT just a passionate affair THD 2 ~*PART 31 Pg 127-UD 21st Apr!

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preeti.r

@preeti.r

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Awesome FF Lashy, finally JO will realise she does have feeling for him😉. Plz update the nxt part soon 😊

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

First of all Lashy, I was expecting your PM, so the first thing I did today was check Gmail to see if there is any PM. Saw other mails but opened yours first.😃😳 Started reading ASAP and I was literally bowled. Our 'Devdas' Jalal admitting to Abdul that he missed her company terribly, that Jo is irreplaceable, that he is in LOVE with Jo. Ohh Maaa, I was like 😳😳😳😳. LOVED IT DEEAAARRR. Jo is so so important to him. Finally Jallu is in Love and he has also confessed to it😳😛😃 I cannot express my excitement in words. But loved this chapter very much.

Then came the business meet. Jo there, Jallu there. I am not seeing anyone other than them. Awkward meeting for sure, but I couldn't help smile at how Jallu was niharofying her from head to toe. Jo all jealous😃 Burning after seeing the despo girl😡😆 Loved it. She is on her way tooo.😳😳 But I don't know why it was towards the second part, that my heart was beginning to sink😭 Shareefff😡 Jealousy on both ends - I love. But please no MU from Jallu's side😭😭

Lashy - You are acting like JA CV's. Precap chapter mein aaya hi nahi.🤢 Want to keep it for the next chapter kya😡😡

Seriously Lashy, love your writing style. So so relatable (I think I have said this before too😕😛). But I so so so so LOOVVVEEE it.😳 Chalo abhi next update jaldi chahiye. You updated yesterday night it seems. That means 5 days - Thursday night😡😡 Arre kitna late😡🤢 I cant wait. 😃PLEASE TRY YOUR BEST & UPDATE SOON🤗🤗🤗🤗

Edited by Pals2411 - 11 years ago

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Angel-

@Angel-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

I completed reading this and I m craving for the furture chaps... I so loved the concept... I actually like these kind of concepts very much...

I loved each and every chap... U have written it very nicely... I loved all jalaljodha scenes... They were so cute and lovely...

I loved this very very very much❤️❤️L]

thank u so much🤗

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Antara123

@Antara123

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

brilliant chapter.jalal all devdas like and confessing his love.does the other girl have any role to play? curious. jodha beautiful like a goddes.omg. amazing update.felt it was too short maybe because it was that brilliant.update soon and pm me

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: SUMESHNI
Awesome superb update
Jodha does like Jalal .nice to see a jealous jodha and now Jalal
Plz plz plz continue soon

Thanks Sumeshni 😳

Originally posted by: Gayuraj
nice update
loved it

Thanks yaar 😳

Originally posted by: ashpat
Thx for amazing udate. My fav. Parts r below. My comments in red.
Awww. Just loved how u descibed who jodha was for jalal.
Awww my baby!poor him. He is so heartbroken.
Oh ya and about jodha, now she is getting jealous. I like it. I wonder if her jealousy would be obvious to jalal in next chapter or she will conceal it better. Actually, if she will realize that she is getting jealous in first place. I am so looking forward to read this. U know now i feel like i should not have read this ff, although when i started reading this particular ff just bec u were the writer and u know how much i love ur writing style. I feel i should have just stopped after first chapter. After reading 2-3 chapters, i got so into it. It is all ur fault. I am just loving this ff. I wait for the updates so eagerly. Plzzz update soon. Thx for pm.

Ok you just made my day Ayesha...how brilliant...

Ayooo my fault 😆 awww but thanks so much...what a beautiful compliment you've paid me...🤗

As for Jodha's jealousy...hmmm😳 I hope I wouldn't disappoint you...

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preeti.r

@preeti.r

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Hey I had missed out on reading your FF , not just a passionate affair, but happened to start reading it yesterday... Finally completed it today ... It has been beautifully written and very gripping. 👏.

Couldn't stop reading once I started 😆 , wanted to read more and more till I realised part 23 had ended😆

I generally steer clear of reading FF's on JOJA in 21st century, that's the reason I missed out this beautiful FF. You have cleared my mental block towards FF' s on 21st century JOJA .🤗

I must say you are a gifted writer , apne Khyalo ko shabdho mein dhaalne ka hunar aap ko bakhubi atha hai Lashy , aapka yeh hunar hume behath pasand aaya 😉😆.

Update it soon , thanks

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Delphi

@Delphi-03

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

noo... not the "make-the-other-one-jealous" game!!!!!😕

But anyways, nice chapter!!! Loved it all up until Jo took Shareef's hand...!

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charu

@cjs369

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

wow! finally Jalal confessed his love for Jodha in front of Abdul...😃
now just jodha has to realise her feelings ...

enjoyed the jealousy jodha felt when she saw jalal enjoying with another woman...
and hope this leads on soon to getting them together... cannot see them apart for long