~*FF-NOT just a passionate affair THD 2 ~*PART 31 Pg 127-UD 21st Apr! - Page 14

Originally posted by: lashy

Poor jalal, he's become somber all right...but, not devdaas or anything...woh sab Abdul ka kamaal hai...he's a prankster 😆

Jo yes...like a goddess 😳 She is a beauty."...

Awww sweetie, It felt short? Oh it's the same 3100 words as the rest ..😕

Ok ok hopefully next one I wouldn't disappoint you😳

Originally posted by: preeti.r

Hey I had missed out on reading your FF , not just a passionate affair, but happened to start reading it yesterday... Finally completed it today ... It has been beautifully written and very gripping. 👏.

Couldn't stop reading once I started 😆 , wanted to read more and more till I realised part 23 had ended😆

I generally steer clear of reading FF's on JOJA in 21st century, that's the reason I missed out this beautiful FF. You have cleared my mental block towards FF' s on 21st century JOJA .🤗

I must say you are a gifted writer , apne Khyalo ko shabdho mein dhaalne ka hunar aap ko bakhubi atha hai Lashy , aapka yeh hunar hume behath pasand aaya 😉😆.

Update it soon , thanks

Originally posted by: Rutuja...

Awesome Chap di As usual... 👏👏but lil small one...

Nahi re...not very small...same length only...😳

Koi baat Nahi next update bada wala dena ha...😳😳

Aww Jallu finally expressed his feelings😳😳 When Jo will realized yaar... Pls jaldi se abb realisation karwao yaar di.. 😃😃

😆 haan haan

Originally posted by: minnie2308

Jalal is in love😲 and he confessed to Abdul...'

Yes he did dear...😲 FINALLY

Bossy Renu trying ti bring back the straying friend🤔 I kinda liked her interaction with jalal.

But Jalal is too far gone to come back and so is Jo.

Jo is far gone? 😕 Hmmm

Poor Jo has never had any boyfriends, affairs so doesn't know how cupid's arrow feels like. But I'm glad Ja knows better...

Beautiful comparison here dear...

Sparks at the business event...cool. I like it.

😎

Thanks Lash... Btw, since when did you become so disciplined with your updates...You were not so 'regular' with updates of your other fics:-)..I am just jesting...pulling your pretty pedicured leg the e-way

😆

With Sammi, it always took me ages to whip up a chapter...

in a way, I'm also getting more attached to this story than I was sammi...🤔

Originally posted by: baubles

Heyyaa di...I've been commenting so late the past few times Ille, but trust me I read it as soon as I woke up!! The 1st thing I did was on my Wifi and check for your PM!!🤗

Awesome chapter as always di...⭐️⭐️

Loool...thanks da😳

Jalal and Abdul share such a close bond...Abdul is a darling, he reads Jalal so well.. So it's still painful for Jalal to hear not-so-pleasant stuff abt Jo, he really hasn't moved on..and she thinks he has..😭

He can never move on...he's in too deep like minoo said...she's impressed him more than any girl he's ever seen...

As for the confession, I was so so so excited and happy to hear him say he loves Jo!! I fell in love with him all over again..☺️and Abdul's reaction was epic!😆😳

Btw, I love Renu also...you know that right.😳😳

You fell all over aaa...,keep falling only😆

Loved jo's ex-messages to him😆.. esp the one about the green t shirt looking good cos it was on him These two really miss each other so much..my heart went out to them, a lot more to Jalal obvio..😭😆

That green t shirt message was actually a sarcastic msg...that his t shirt looks not so great..and it's bearable only cos it's on him...,😆

The business meet..Sharif..shameless guy! Time and again she's made it clear she wants nothing to do with him and he still doesn't give up! If he had one ounce of shame he would keep as much distance from her as he could..😡😡

😆

Anyway..the rest of it was too good!! Jo n Jalal had to be there at the same place, opposite sides of the table..Jalal seems to be having better company though!😆😆

LOOOL

Absolutely LOVED the way he noticed her..top to bottom..and she noticed the 'Handsomest' guy(and the girl next to him too)...hayye!☺️

Well, onnu chollatumaa...I'm ROFLing right now..thinking about the extra long table arrangement convo we had!!🤣

ROFLLL...with pictorial evidence to back it up

The jealousy from both sides was perfect!!! Enjoyed it so much..Jo's a little more!! 😆😳

But why did she had to hold his hand!!!! And you...that's where you had to stop!! Crazy!!😡

How could you!! And how am I to wait now...you better not take another 5 days now.😲

Update as soon as possible.. I'm gonna bug you till you update..I'm dreading an MU...hope it doesn't happen! Can't wait to know!😒

And ya..loved the 'I know right?' part...you know why!😳🤗

Love ya loadsss 🤗🤗

Love you more sweetie... 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: lashy

Serial ka track predict karne ki side effects dikh rahi hain mujhe 😆

😆 That's actually true. Last week I was predicting Jo's win by Jallu's vote. Then CVs gave this twisted election Today when we have the jashn promo, I am again predicting Sujamal being blamed/he saving Jallu from the attack/Suju ke wajah se new MU/Suju helping Jallu in Jo's possible kidnap😆😆🤢 Pagal ho gayi hu after thinking so much. And then we have the CVs who will give something else🤢🥱😭 Nowadays, I don't take anything at face value. Not even your chapters😆😭😆😭

Edited by Pals2411 - 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy