~*FF-NOT just a passionate affair THD 2 ~*PART 31 Pg 127-UD 21st Apr!

Antara123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

hey that was brilliant.please update soon and pm me

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Shraddha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: najma123
are you updating today?

Trying 😆

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Pallavi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: lashy

Trying 😆

I seriously dislike this laugh lashy😡 Better update, PLEEASSSEEE😭

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Shraddha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Pals2411
I seriously dislike this laugh lashy

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mdeshpande

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Loved the precap!! Jealous much !!! 😉 😃

Hope the "gushing Lady" is not Ben !!

Update plz!!

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SUMESHNI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Update plz plz plz plz plz

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Shraddha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: SUMESHNI
Update plz plz plz plz plz

Done 🤗

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SUMESHNI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Awesome superb update

Jodha does like Jalal .nice to see a jealous jodha and now Jalal

Plz plz plz continue soon

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ash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Thx for amazing udate. My fav. Parts r below. My comments in red.

It wasn't the woman Jodha he missed as much he missed the companion Jodha! She'd exited from his life, but left behind a legacy - a legacy of warmth, of selfless support, of evident concern that went into all those healthy snacks she used to bring him, of sweet messages like 'All the best for your submission', of sarcastic compliments like 'That green t-shirt only looks good because it's on you!' and of genuine care in all those subtly-done Saturday late night calls to check he wasn't going overboard with the 'beers'!

Awww. Just loved how u descibed who jodha was for jalal.

'Nahin yaar...' Jalal spoke up, unmoved - he'd shifted to toying with the ring on his index finger now 'When she met me after the match, she said something that made me realize that Jodha Singh is irreplaceable!'

'The Jalal I know is NO weakling so don't call him that! Well, its not really YOUR fault that Jodha Singh can get quite irresistible at times...but, I can make her curb all that natural charm, if it'd help...'

'She...' his voice dropped down to a murmur 'She reminded me all over again...of why...I've fallen in love with her...' phew, that was a tough confession to make, but he'd finally done it - he'd finally talked about this relationship and divulged his sentiments!

Awww my baby!poor him. He is so heartbroken.

Oh ya and about jodha, now she is getting jealous. I like it. I wonder if her jealousy would be obvious to jalal in next chapter or she will conceal it better. Actually, if she will realize that she is getting jealous in first place. I am so looking forward to read this. U know now i feel like i should not have read this ff, although when i started reading this particular ff just bec u were the writer and u know how much i love ur writing style. I feel i should have just stopped after first chapter. After reading 2-3 chapters, i got so into it. It is all ur fault. I am just loving this ff. I wait for the updates so eagerly. Plzzz update soon. Thx for pm.

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divyavm

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 23 was awesome Shraddha! Writer-e-khaas, missing your posts in the show these days but at least you are making more frequent updates to your FF 😊

Here were three things I loved- I always see some beautiful parallels with the show hence, end up referring to the show- if that is okay.

(1) Conversation between Abdul and Jalal: Reminds me of how much I miss Abdul in the show; Jalal needs a friend on the show as well

'Arre...' Abdul jumped in with a hasty attempt to restore some positivity 'It's just a matter of time...you'll forget all this when you meet someone else...'

'Nahin yaar...' Jalal spoke up, unmoved - he'd shifted to toying with the ring on his index finger now 'When she met me after the match, she said something that made me realize that Jodha Singh is irreplaceable!'

'The Jalal I know is NO weakling so don't call him that! Well, its not really YOUR fault that Jodha Singh can get quite irresistible at times...but, I can make her curb all that natural charm, if it'd help...'

'She...' his voice dropped down to a murmur 'She reminded me all over again...of why...I've fallen in love with her...' phew, that was a tough confession to make, but he'd finally done it - he'd finally talked about this relationship and divulged his sentiments!

Having done his bit of explaining, Jalal looked up to observe his friend with a 'got your answer now?' expression, but was caught off-guard by what he saw. Jalal had expected the fellow to come back with one of his usual jibes, but here he was - sitting speechless!

'Kyaa hua?' Jalal had to laugh at the unusual sight, setting aside the troubling topic for a moment 'No jokes?'

'Huh?' Abdul stuttered. Well, yeah, he was the group-jester - but, what he'd witnessed was too moving to laugh-off. The pain in his friend's voice and the anguish his eyes that'd finally surfaced was something he'd NEVER seen Jalal endure. It was quite whelming - enough to make even this blabbermouth emotionally tongue-tied for a few moments.

(2) Loved the awkwardness of the meeting and the beautiful analogy of the dressing:

Startled, she momentarily stopped in her tracks - at the same time that he'd noticed her emerging profile! The following few seconds unleashed a wave of unpleasant emotions for both. It was bound to happen - their last meeting was an unhealed wound that'd been covered up with layers of dressing. This unexpected encounter had somehow peeled off some layers of that dressing.

(3) And ... Of course, claps for a beautifully jealous and perceptive Jodha! How we could see that more in the show!

'Jalal? When did he get here?' she wondered simultaneously 'And why didn't he visit our stall?' her glances then fell upon a beautiful young lady seated beside him - clearly, someone he'd brought along to the event. Someone - she also noted - who was sitting very very close to him 'Oh! Why would he bother coming when he's busy entertaining?'

What an irony, she thought! This somewhat icy reunion was turning out to be quite a contrast to their previous heartfelt one. On that day, the senior she'd met was a down-to- earth sombre gentleman. The one sitting in front was someone else.

Yeah, this man was handsome too - really really really handsome in that dark tie, black suit and impeccable grooming. However, this 'uber swanky' senior didn't remind her of the sweet caring cheerful Jalal she liked - he resembled the arrogant flirty Jalal she'd met during her first week at University.

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