SS: A night to remember : Last part added - Page 9

Originally posted by: No_more_ghrina

beautiful end to the story :)

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

ur SS was very good...

Suddenly remembering the letter, "Who read the letter last time, Shehenshah? Why would they lie?" Jodha asks Jalal.

Jalal with some difficulty answers "Badiammi..." that one word hiding a sea of sadness.

"Oh!!!" Jodha with concern for Jalal "Are you sure you will be fine now?"

You know, I dread this bit...in the serial, as well as when I imagine what the REAL DUDE must have felt , upon getting this bit of gutting knowledge...that the one whom he loved more than his birth mother...could exact such chilling vengeance, or was capable of such malevolence...It's soul shattering ..that...

And the fact that despite this, he raised himself to such heights, is a testament to his fortitude and his character..

Ok..I can fangurl now......any more and I shall puddle out right here...

K2M2BHT-2... I did not just like the story..JE L'AIME beaucoup...tres bon..ma petite soeur...👏👏👏

Originally posted by: LizBennett

Suddenly remembering the letter, "Who read the letter last time, Shehenshah? Why would they lie?" Jodha asks Jalal.

Jalal with some difficulty answers "Badiammi..." that one word hiding a sea of sadness.

"Oh!!!" Jodha with concern for Jalal "Are you sure you will be fine now?"

You know, I dread this bit...in the serial, as well as when I imagine what the REAL DUDE must have felt , upon getting this bit of gutting knowledge...that the one whom he loved more than his birth mother...could exact such chilling vengeance, or was capable of such malevolence...It's soul shattering ..that...

And the fact that despite this, he raised himself to such heights, is a testament to his fortitude and his character..

Ok..I can fangurl now......any more and I shall puddle out right here...

K2M2BHT-2... I did not just like the story..JE L'AIME beaucoup...tres bon..ma petite soeur...👏👏👏

Originally posted by: Jaz713

I have to be honest Kshithi, if it weren't for your PM, I would have overlooked this one (I don't read fanfictions, I find them too fangirly for my tastes 😆).

But yours is especially well-written, I loved the rich inner dialogues of the characters, they add a lot to the story; it's something that we don't see onscreen. Additionally, I liked your portrayal of Jodha also - it's how I wish she could be in the serial.

Please keep writing and I promise to keep reading! 😊

Originally posted by: dkorumilli

Nice story.👏

Originally posted by: najma123

that was brilliant