FF- Hum ho gaye apke (UPDATED) PART 6- Page 15 (20/4/14)

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meghajj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Awesome update👍🏼

Nd thanks for pm

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Niki_Sobti

@Niki_Sobti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: sweetystubborn
Omg omg Love each tiny bits of what you have written my lovely little ghrina 🤗❤️🤗 Your writing is just a thunder , thunder killer 👏👏⭐️ He made her wear his bangles 😳❤️ Ruku baba ji ka thullu with her poor hosiyar 🤣🤣 Jodhu and Rahim's interaction so cutie sweetie lovely 😛😛 And my favourite part for which you are rewarded with a *tight hug* for writing it so marvelously mesmerizing 👏❤️🤗 He pulls her closer to him on his chest ☺️❤️ He holds her by her waist ☺️❤️😳 And he confessed to her that she is prettier then Benazir ❤️☺️(my favourite bit) and he kissed her sensuously on her lips , rubbing her cheeks with his nose ☺️☺️☺️ and before she releases herself from his clutches he told her that she will think only about her and she runs away blushing ☺️☺️❤️ and the precap Haaayyyeee mein marjawa ☺️☺️❤️ Wonderful update as always my darling ghrina 🤗 Update soon warna pacific war teri inbox mein hoga han 🤣🤣 Love you and your rocking story 😎❤️😎

Aww your post made me blush 😳 Glad you like rahim's involvement i was worried whether he would anger my audience! ROFL babaji ka thullu!!😆😆😆 im happy u liked how jalal confessed that she is prettier than benazir, i really want him to do this in show so thought id write it instead! 😉 LOL ill try to update saturday...

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akdhadeewaanii

@akdhadeewaanii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

very nice update..😃
plz cont soon..can't wait for next..😳😳

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...janu...

@...janu...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

wow just read 4 parts its awesome plz can u continue ur story in english

and plz update soon and pm me plz

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SIVARANJANI

@pranavvikas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Wow it was an amazing update dear

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samy18

@samy18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

minblowing superb update it asap plz plz

and if possible do pm me😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

My god!!!!😲😲 Resplendent Update!!!⭐️⭐️👏👏 Wow!!! Loved it to core dear.. it was written so exquisitely..Just loved both the last chapters.. 😳👏👏👏 The proximity between Jo Ja was OMG..depicted with sheer brilliance.. I don't have words to comment on ur superb update.. keep it up dear.. update soon!!!!!👏👏👏

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Niki_Sobti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy
My god!!!!😲😲 Resplendent Update!!!👏 Wow!!! Loved it to core dear.. it was written so exquisitely..Just loved both the last chapters.. 👏 The proximity between Jo Ja was OMG..depicted with sheer brilliance.. I don't have words to comment on ur superb update.. keep it up dear.. update soon!!!!!👏👏👏

Hi nancy! I was missing your feedback! 🥱 But im so glad you liked it 😆😆 glad you'e enjoying the closeness between our akdha!😉 I will probably update on the weekends cos i have mocks now 😭 But thanks for your comments again😳

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Kavya

@AriyaLilyOrchid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Awesome 111111
Loved it
Its so cute

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Nancy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: No_more_ghrina

Hi nancy! I was missing your feedback! 🥱 But im so glad you liked it 😆😆 glad you'e enjoying the closeness between our akdha!😉 I will probably update on the weekends cos i have mocks now 😭 But thanks for your comments again😳

Awww sorry for late comment Ofcourse I loved the updates Cant wait... precap uff..😛😛 Aww..no probs.. but update sooon...😃