FF- Hum ho gaye apke (UPDATED) PART 6- Page 15 (20/4/14)

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SIVARANJANI

@pranavvikas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

It was a superb thought of bangles theme
aisa agar showme hota tho bohat accha lagta tha
But its ok
i loved this update a lot

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Niki_Sobti

@Niki_Sobti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: pranavvikas
It was a superb thought of bangles theme
aisa agar showme hota tho bohat accha lagta tha
But its ok
i loved this update a lot

Aww thanks 😃 Yeah i too wanted jalal to replace jodha's bangles when she gave them up for him... instead that random lady replaced them... grrr😡

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Niki_Sobti

@Niki_Sobti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: SUMESHNI
WOW AWESOME UPDATE 👏
The way jodha and jalal defended each other so cute

love the way jalal screamed at her when she was talking bad about jodha .but felt bad for jalal when ruku gave his gift to the maid

Thanks 😆 and im very glad u liked it... i just wanted to show the vast difference between ruks and jo to jalaal, on one direction jo is speechless at his gift 😳 ad in the other ruks give sthem away to a maid... 😭 DOnt know if i got the message through but 😕 I hope i can update soon 😉

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Niki_Sobti

@Niki_Sobti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sweetystubborn
Fabulous and romantic update my ghrina 🤗🤗 Keep rocking and impressing me as always sweety 😳😳 Your writing is UFFF

Aww thankies🤗 ☺️ Im glad u enjoyed it... ill try and update by tues... and u r very sweet praising an elementary writer like me 😆 FOr now lets just hope jallu doesnt let jodha sleep outside tomorrow or at least sleeps with her😕

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.GreekPrincess.

@.GreekPrincess.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

wt a luvly updte..
its awesm.👏.
plz do cont..
waitng 4 next chappy..
plz pm me if possible..

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Sonia

@princessSonia

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Awesum update...
loved it...😊

Do cont soon...

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Tanzia Scott

@latanzia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Wow This was beautiful.

I read this in one go, you are a beautiful writer, i cannot believe this is your first time, very good job, please PM me whe you update, i am so looking forward to this FF.

Welcome to the froum and hope i get to read many more of your stories.

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

omg!!! I just read 1st part vowww amazing superb mindblowling... I will put my detail comment soon I can't wait to go next chapter...

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mesmeric893

@mesmeric893

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Wow awesome upda5e
Loved the dialogues between jalaal and jodha

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Vincy Anne

@VincyAnne

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

I can't believe I missed out on chapter 2 !!! I'm really sorry dear ...

This is me making up for it ... 😳

Chapter 2

Wow ?! What a chapter .. 👏

At first I hated the fact that Jodha was feeling guitly for falling in love with Jalal ... But I'm sure you will sort things out later on so I was cool about it ... 😎

Next , the questions Jalal asked himself were brilliantly written ... Great job !!! 👍🏼

And I loved how you included the pharse ' Why is it so hard to understand women ' . ❤️

I find it really cute when Jalal says this ... 😳

Poor Jodha doesn't even have a blanket to cover herself and she has a fever ... 😭

But Jalal came to the rescue and gave her some heat and shared some moments ... ☺️

And the end , I was like come on Jodha don't keep hold back your feelings just let it out afterall he's also your hubby ... 😭

Overall a wonderfully written chapter ... I really enjoyed reading it ... 👏

Chapter 3

Once again a great chapter ! I feel really bad for Jalal and Jodha for hearing Rukaiya whining ... 😆

Aww Jallu you cutiepie , you thought about asking Jodha how she feels before you make your decision ... 😳

Thank heavens Ruku decided to sleep instead of coming between Jallu and Jodha's date ...😃

Jallu bought Jodha bangles !!!!! 😲❤️ Thank you so much for writing this I really wanted Jallu to buy bangles for Jodha in the show but it didn't happen so thanks for fulfilling my wish ! 🤗

Okay , Jallu traded his ring to buy bangles for Jodha , Jodha protests and Jallu puts his finger on her lips to shuush her , and her puts the bangle on for her ???!!! Can this get any better ?!

How rude of Ruku can't she at least appreciate that Jallu gave her the bangles ?! And how could she give it to Hoshiyar ?! 😡😡😡

Well done Jodha for defending Jallu's gift and giving Ruku a piece of your mind !!! 👏

And Ruku and her spiteful words ... 😔

Jallu shut Ruku off !!! Yippee !!! 🥳

Another fantastic chapter !!! I can't wait for the next chapter !!!!

You're doing a good job with your story and I'm really loving it ... 😉

Keep up the good work !!! 👍🏼