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hi guys decided to writea small OS on Akdha...



It was almost midnight, everyone in the palace were asleep.. last few days were very stressful and tiring for everyone in the palace because of jodha's health but now everyone could rest because she was fine...the entire palace was silent only the sound of the breeze could be heard ...
Everything looked so beautiful and divine under the light of the shining moon , and there she was..sitting in the angoori baag looking so pure and divine like an angel, she was sitting on the cool, green grass and was looking at the moon and thinking about the past events, she was totally unaware of her surrounding when she felt a strong muscular hand on her shoulder..she immediately turned and was surprised to see shehensha standing there

Jalal (worriedly) : "Jodha begum?"

Jodha : "Shehensha, aap yahan?''

Jalal: "Jodha begum yeh sawal hume apse puchna chahiye! aap yahan is waqt kya kar rahi hai? apko toh aaram karna chahiye apne hojre main! moti kahan hai?? moti itni laparwah kaise ho sakti hai apko aise akele chodke..."

Jodha smiled seeing his concern and said " shehensha, hum thik hai..woh bus hume neend nahi aarahi thi toh hum yuhi yahan baag main ake baith gaye, shehensha magar aap yahan is waqt? aap soye nahi?"

Jalal: "woh hume bhi neend nahi arahi thi" by saying this he sat beside Jodha

both did not know what to say...so both were waiting for each other to start talking but to their dismay none of them started the conversation

Jodha's thoughts "Shehensha aapko jaror kuch hua hai, apka bartaav bahut badla badla sa laag raha hai"

Jalal thinking " Jodha begum, hum apko kya bataein apko khone ka bahot darr lagta hai"

Both were looking at each other, even though they were silent but it looked as if they were talking with each other through their eyes

Finally jalal broke the silence

jalal : "Jodha begum raat bahut ho gayi hai apko so jana chahiye"

Jodha immediately said " NAHI shehensha hume apke saath rehna hai"

jalal looked at her.

Jodha realized what she said and again she immediately corrected herself "humare kehne ka matlab hai ki hume bilkul neend nahi aarahi hai aur hum is waqt akela nahi rehna chahte..."

jalal smiled at her and said " toh aap kya karna chahti hai jodha begum? " and he smirked..he was surprised when he saw Jodha's reaction...her cheeks had turned pink and she looked down so she could hide her blush

Jodha(shyly) : "shehensha yadi apko aaram karna ho toh aap jake so jaye.. aapko bhi aaram ki avashyakta hain...hum yahan thodi der chandramaan ko dekhte hain fir chale jayenge apne hojre main"

jalal : "Jodha begum aap humare sath ayiye"

Jodha : ''kahan shehensha?" (confused)

Jalal: "humare hojre main"

Jodha confused and thinking what to do...when jalal says "ghabrayie maat hum apke sath kuch nahin karenge apko chuyenge bhi nahi..."

Jodha immediately : "nahin shehensha aise koi bhi baat nahi hain, hum appe vishwas karte hain, hum apke sath ate hain chaliye"

Jalal got up and he gave his hand to help Jodha get up, but Jodha's legs were still weak and she could not stand properly forget about walking...

Jalal (concerned) : "yeh kya Jodha begum aap bahut kamzor hai..aap davaiye vagere toh thik se le rahi hain na?"

Jodha "jii shehensha..woh shayad bahut der baithne se aisa hua hoga" she tried to walk but could not, she tripped and jalal cathed her just in time..

Jalal: "Jodha begum. dhyan se"

Jalal then decided to lift her and take her to his hojra..he lifted her in his strong arms and started waking towards his room, finally they reached his room and he went and kept jodha on his bed..."

Jodha looked around the room as she was seeing it for the first time

Jodha : "shehensha..apka kamra toh bahut acha hai"

Jalal: "shukriya..waise apko ek baat batayein.?"

Jodha: "jii ?"

jalal: "aap pehli begum hai jo humare hojre main ayi hain"

Jodha :" Sach?(she was surprised as well as happy also to hear that)

Jalal : "haan..sach"

Jodha: "Shehensha hum apse kuch kehna chahte hain"

Jalal: "Boliye Jodha begum"

Jodha: "shehensha..woh hum apka shukriyan ada karna chahte hain...woh darasal Moti nai hume bataya ki apne humara bahut dhyan rakha jab hum behosh the aur..."

Jalal cut her off in between and said :"Jodha begum shukrguzar toh hume apka hona chahiye...apne humari jaan bachali...aur khud ki jaan khatre main daal di...allah kasam Jodha begum agar aapko kuch ho jata to hum..." (and tears started coming from jalal's eyes)

Jodha's heart ached..she could not see him crying..she didnt know why but seeing him cry made her cry..she felt like hugging him and take all his pain to her..
She slowly kept her hand on his hand and said "Shehensha aap royiye maat...hum bilkul thik hain...aur yeh humne jo kiya woh bilkul sahi tha...hum appe koi bhi sankat nahi ane denge apke paas ane se pehle us sankat ko humara samna karna hoga...chahe humari maut hi kyun na ho jaye hum ap par ek kharoch bhi nahi ane denge..hum maut ko sveekar kar lenge..."

Jalal kept his finger on her lips and said a bit angrily "shhh...Jodha begum, aaj kahan hain dubara maat kahiye...hum apko kuch bhi nahi hone dete aur nahi kabhi hone denge...hum apke bina nahi reh sakte Jodha begum..haan hum mante hian ki humne apko bahut taklif di hai...khas kar ki benazir ke vishay me...magar apne humare sath aisa vyavahar kiya isliye hume aisa karna pada"

Jodha: "kaisa vyavahar shehensha?"

Jalal:"Jodha begum, hume aaj bhi woh raat yaad hai jab hum apke hojre main aye the apke bulave pe..aur apne hume dhaka mara tha" (he was sad)

Jodha: "Shehensha hume maaf kardijiye.. hume apko is prakar dur nahi karna chaiye tha lekin aap apne hosh main nahi the..aap humare sath raat gujarna chahte the"

Jalal: "haan yeh sach hain magar hum wahan aye apke bulave pe...apko yaad hain Jodha begum humne apko jaban di thi ki hum apko apki ijajat ke bina chuyenge bhi nahi magar apne khaat me likha ki aap apka patni hone ka farz nibhayenegi aur isliye apne hume bulaya"

Jodha was shocked...

Jodha :"shehensha...humne aisa kuch bhi nahi likha tha...humne sirf humari prasanata vyakta ki thi us patra main...apne woh khat padha na??"

Jalal (confused and angry) : "yeh aap kya keh rahi hai Jodha begum badi ammi ne khud hume woh khaat padhkar sunaaya hai..."

Jodha: "shehensha...kya kahan apne badi ammi? ne padha?"

Jalal realized everything he remembered how his baddi ammi was forcing him to go to Jodha's room that night and he was shocked, sad and angry...how could his badi ammi do such a horrible thing? he looked at Jodha and felt horrible, he remembered all the horrible things he did to her just to insult her
Jodha: "shehensha? kya hua?"

Jalal: "hume maaf kar do Jodha...humse bahut badi galti hui hai humne us shaks par bharosa kiya jisne hume dhoka diya...badi ammi ne hume dhoka diya"

Jodha felt very bad for him she said : "shehensha apne woh patra swaayam kyun nahi padha...?"

Jalal(almost in tears) :"kyunki hum anpad hai Jodha begum...hum padh likh nahi sakte hume maaf kijiye hum jante hai aapko bahut padhai aur likahi main diljasbi hai magar hum anpad hai, agar iske baad aap humse baat bhi nahi karna chahengi toh bhi hume yeh manzoor hai" and he started weeping

Jodha kept her hands on his face and wiped his tears and said with tears in her eyes "Shehensha...apne aisa soch bhi kaise liya ki hum apse muh fer lenge apki sachai jane ke baad...shehensha hume khushi hai ki apne hamse sach kaha. aur humpe bharosa kiya...aur sirf padhai se insaan bada nahi hota insaan bada hota hai uski soch se, uske nek kaam se aur sach main shehensha aap bahut ache hai..."

jalal hugged her tightly... both were lost in each others arms..both felt completed they could hear eachother's heartbeats they knew they had found their soulmates...jalal broke the hug and lovingly looked at jodha...he hesitantly took her face in his hands and slowly kissed her forehead...jodha closed her eyes.. she was melting in his arms...Jalal looked at her and said
jalal : "Jodha pehle hum apse bahut nafrat karte the...aur pata nahi kaab yeh nafrat badal gayi vishwas aur dosti main...magar jab hume laga ki hum apko hamesha ke liye khone wale hai tab hame ehsas hua ki hum apke bina nahi reh sakte Jodha...kyunki hum aapse BEINTEHAH MOHABBAT karte hai aur aphike vajah se hume mehsoos hua ki humare sene main bhi dil hai jo ki sirf aap ke liye dhadakta hai"

Jodha was speechless...she was so happy her heart started beating fast and this time she could not deny it...she listened to her heart and said :"shehensha...sach toh yeh hai ki hum bhi apse bohot pyaar karte hai...aur isliye hum apko kuch hota hua nahi dekh sakte...haan hum sweekar karte hain ki hum apse pyaar karte hai"

Jalal and Jodha's happiness knew no bounds..both of them who hated each other at first... could not live without each other now both of them had fallen in love..and fallen so hard that no one could seperate them

Jalal took jodha's face in his hands and he gently kissed her soft lips..Jodha also responded back to him and from there a new journey began..a journey of love




i know i have written anything in this🤢 hope you all like it 😳 sorry if its bad...dont throw chapals at me 😛

please hit like and comment if you like it😊



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..Sofia.. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wOow...It was a beautiful & awesOme Os😳
Amazingly Written👏

LOved it❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Sofia..

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0099">wOow...It was a beautiful & awesOme Os😳</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0099">Amazingly Written👏</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0099">LOved it❤️</font>



Thank you so much glad you liked it 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: arvifan1



Thank you so much glad you liked it 😳

You're wc ..it was really niCe😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is amazing. am so happy that at least in ur os the letter truth came out and Ma'S TRUTH TOO. u should write more os.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow dear that was brilliant... totally loved it👏
garden me baatein😳aww
and jalal taking jo to his room👏and MU clear

well written dear😎

you should write more O.S or FF's😳Please whenever you write pm me😃
Edited by roshaeldsouza91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow it was beautiful
Do write more dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice! Thanks you made my Sunday!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Sofia..

You're wc ..it was really niCe😳


thanks again 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashpat

this is amazing. am so happy that at least in ur os the letter truth came out and Ma'S TRUTH TOO. u should write more os.


thank you dear 😳
yeah will try to write more OS 😊

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