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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb amazing update
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

this reminds me of the biology lab scene in twilight
superb awesome wonderful update


thnxz a lot 😊 regarding the mind shield dont worry..ill make it like on/off switch ,jalal can read her thoughts ,that is if jodha allows 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SUMESHNI

Superb amazing update

Plz continue soon

thank you ..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: hans1


thnxz a lot 😊 regarding the mind shield dont worry..ill make it like on/off switch ,jalal can read her thoughts ,that is if jodha allows 😉

ok thanks 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh...really nice jo and bella r similar isn't it...its so awesome😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting concept...
Twilight n The vampire diaries r my fav too...
cont plzz..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3: The Twin flame



For those of you who don't know about silver cord (some say it is true,some say it is not),i've given a small explanation about it,those who know about it,can skip this part.ok guys one more important thing,the words which are enclosed within the brackets () are thoughts..
Silver cord: It is the theory that two people who are true destined soulmates are connected by a 'silver cord', only visible to the destined soulmates themselves. Through the silver cord, the soulmates can feel what each other are feeling if the person concentrates. The strength of the connection varies. Some soulmates know instantly that something is amiss or that they are connected to the other person - by a simple touch, a spark of electricity that travels from one to the other, but for some Soulmates it takes years to figure it out.Soulmates can enter each other's mind and see their memories, thoughts, and feelings. Thoughts and memories can be blocked, but it takes concentration. If the concentration lapse during the time that one person is in someone else's mind, the blocks will fall down to allow the other person to see everything.

Jo's Pov

We sat at the end of a long table,lavina introduced to me several of her other friends ,some of them were my classmates,i couldnt remember all of their names though,two boys and a girl at the end of the table waved at me ,i smiled.
L:that's rishabh,nick and krithi..they are nice..hey look ,jalal is staring at you..to your left at the far end of the room she whispered..J: i noe he is been doing that for a long time,is he usually like this (like a pig staring at girls,breaking their hearts 😡 )L: like what staring creepy types ,no he is not,he doesn't date,maybe it's because he thinks none of the girls are good enough for him or maybe he lost his one true love,and he is pining for her everyday,maybe that explains his intense pain look .J:ur dramatic😆...or maybe he is rude and cruel and has lots of ego..whatever i just don't want him to be in my class,today morning i saw him making a girl cry..i think he broke up with her ,he just left her lyk dat u noe..L: no way,,he never dates,maybe it is one of his bro's gf, ya dat girl reena ,she is a stalker ,she didn't back off even after mirza jalal's bro told her politely that it didn't workout between them ,u shud have been there it was such a big drama,mirza might have asked him to convey the news to her..JO:(oh..it was his bro's gf,my mistake ,but still he shouldn't have been impolite to her ) neway yaar i dont want him to be in my class ,he is dangerous..L: lol u wish,he is in our class, and he is the one who is going to sit next to you..the empty seat owner ,based on ur schedule ,you have to sit next to him in all classes ,so romantic u noe..❤️ .. Jo:(not fair i thought) {life isn't fair} suddenly the voice in my head startled me it was jalal's voice m damn sure of it ,i looked around and saw him smiling at me,he had a dazzling smile,beautiful face..everything about him is perfect except his ego..stop it jo if u start noticing him,u'll end up falling in love with him..with great difficulty i shifted my concentration to lavina..L: based on the way he is staring at u .,maybe ur the girl who is gonna break his no dating rule..then we can go on a double date..den u both will be happily married ...den u'll have kids..den ur kids and mine will get married..J: kids what ? i almost fell off from my seat ..stop it lavi..datz not gonna happen..that will never happen..then again i heard a chuckling sound in my head..i turned and saw him chuckling secretly,as if he has heard all our conversation..how can it be possible..maybe he is a mind reader shit,along with being a jerk ,he is a mind reader too, i immediately imagined a wall protecting my thoughts,i know it sounds crazy..but it might work..then i just waited for few sec's..nothing hppd,i saw him, he was conversing with his friends,gosh ,im becoming crazy..L: ur wondering who is the girl sitting opposite to jalal,oh dont worry..she is salima,the boy next to her is jehan ,they are, might be distant relatives of jalal and the boy hand wrestling with jehan is jalal's bro mirza asiz,they are like one big family they live together..J: i glanced at salima ,she is really pretty raven black hair,sea grey eyes..the boys ,jehan and mirza were handsome..jehan has that muscular build and mirza ,slight build but something tells me that he uses his hands a lot,coz his arms were muscular ,maybe he is interested in sword fighting ..weird..all of them looked like models..
Jo: i'll go get something to eat, i proceeded towards the counter..i took the tray and i was deciding what to eat.i was deciding whether to include salad in my lunch tray or not ..when i heard his musical voice
Jalal:so have u decided to include salad in your lunch tray or not..? he smiled at me mockingly..how come he knows whatever i think , i decided to bring up the wall again
Jo: now that u've said i'm not going to include it in my lunch i moved on to the next counter..there was roti and spicy curry immediately i served myself roti and curry ..den i heard his comment again..
Jalal:spicy food is not good for your health
Jo: i'm a rajasthani ,i eat spicy food..besides i think ur afraid of eating spicy foods..i smirked ,stop concentrating on my lunch tray ,decide what ur going to eat for lunch ur tray is empty like ur mind..
Jalal:so u do care about me..he was so close to me ,i can feel his lips on my ear ,i immediately moved away from him jo:nnnoo...i stammered..i don't... Jalal:i don't believe you,since you challenged me ,i'm going to eat ur fav spicy food too..ah that reminds me why do u hate me so much?
Jo: i immediately i answered like a fool ,i dont hate you..it's just that i saw you in bad light today morning..Jalal:so you saw me talking to the girl ,u should not believe everything which you see blindly jodha..Jo: the way his voice caressed my name it brought chills to my spine..wat do u mean. ..d gap btwn us was getting lesser n lesser , i skipped..i was about to fall..i closed my eyes...but i dint fall on ground as i expected..two strong muscular arms supported me.. the moment when i looked up at him and he looked down at me. His eyes were gray-black ,like a stormy sea..it held lot of secrets..pain..,he smiled at me..then suddenly i don't know from where ..a beautiful silver string..with silver flowers..on it ,it is so lovely and delicate.. connecting my heart to his heart ...it was humming a beautiful song..it bounded us..it was bringing me closer and closer to him..then i looked up at him ..suddenly a lot f thoughts gushed into ma head..as if a old movie is played in my head

it was me and asiz ,he was dressed like a mughal king and me like a rajputani princess..i called him shahenshah..we were so close..der was so many things shown in my head ..i couldn't take it any more..my head started to ache...i passed out...mumbling shahenshah..

precap: the same...spectrometer lab..😆








Edited by hans1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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guys i will update jalal's Pov on monday ,as it need lots of work,,and guys i need ur help to decide on the silver cord song it should be beautiful as well as soulful..it is very important in this story..and guys if u want me to pm the updates..plz like the recent update..😊
Edited by hans1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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outstanding update dear
but how can jodha hear jalal ?
is it just because she is his soul mate ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

outstanding update dear
but how can jodha hear jalal ?
is it just because she is his soul mate ?

s yaar...read the silver cord explanation...dey can exchange thoughts 😃
Edited by hans1 - 11 years ago

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