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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: ashpat

Superb os. I really liked how jodha used her wits to prove herself right and save jalal from benazir with snake poison bec she figured ben wont try to kill jalal right now and this was last chance to save jalal. But so mean of jalal to say i will never c u face again and banish her from agra. I also liked when jodha included that her maasa iccha would be fulfilled too about arthi leaving from agra. I was not sure if moti could scream at jalal bec he is her king but then jodha is supposedly banished from agra so i guess it does not matter to moti anyway.

Plzzz continue soon.


Thx for pm.

My dear Ayesha,
Almost every time you write my favorite part in your comment... When Jodha tells him her MASA iccha... was my fav...part too...
Moti ki chatk li thi😆 how dare Jalal punish Jodha to go out of the Agra... and She knew from beginning what Jodha was suffering and her emotion, her pain... her genuine concern including her sacrifice... She is the only one who witness and stays with her all the time and she is her best friend as well...
thanks for your comment!😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: anshfever

wohooo...ye wala twist mast h.

she herself made poison nd m sure benzir herself vl commit her gunah by mistake.

yes yes yes...ye sahi rhega nd i would lobe to see ds in d shw...u r an amazing writer bhavini di...plz upload ur resume or cv on d site of balaji telefilms. u vl def get job of cvs...nd i vl be d first prsn who vl watch ur shw😆...

u write all emotions vry well...when he gave punishment jodha's rply ws so so emotional...she said u vl nt see me nd my mother's wish vl be fulfilled...on all those lines i ws like 😭...

plz plz plz update soon.

OMG😲😆 !!!!!! PREPARE MY RESUME... 😃SEND IT TO EKTA... LOL😆😆 SO SWEET OF YOU SWATI... YOU HAVE MADE MY DAY WITH UR AWESOME SUPER DUPER COOL COMPLIMENT AND COMMENT... MOTHERS WISH WAS MY FAV...PART...SAD TOO
THANKS A LOT SWATI... KEEP ENCOURGING ME... 😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: roshaeldsouza91

Superb bhavini... superb just loved it😳

totally emotional and brilliant O.S it was

thanks for the pm🤗.. loved it..👏

ROSE SWEETY ... THANK U FOR YOUR SWEET COMMENT!!!! LOVE U 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: roshaeldsouza91


🤣
@red-😲shhh where😆😉


bhavviii😃

@pink- bubble gum sham ke saath even i agree😆 make it FF if you could😳😆maza aayega... please please please😆

So sweet Rose and Somu... Thanks for encouragement... I will update second chapter soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

ROSE SWEETY ... THANK U FOR YOUR SWEET COMMENT!!!! LOVE U 🤗


aww how sweetly you said it😳jhappi shappi with pappi for you... love you too dear🤗

you can call me Selvi (my real name) 😉 or rose ...anything you wish😆 i dont mind🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: sweetystubborn

Bhavi my little gulab jamun 🤗🤗 SUPERB OS 👏👏 Jodhaa bani meera YAY , DISHUM DISHUM but I want Jalal to be punish in worser manner then this 😡😡 He shows his back to her angrily ignoring her AAAGGGHHHRRR😡😡 Punish him well ditto sweeto 😈😈 Well , I am preparing to write a beautiful OS entirely dedicated to Jalal's punishment ditto 😛😛 Yiark Yiark Yiark 😈😈😈 I am proud of my evil idea 😆 I am sorry for late comment ditto Update soon and PM me ok 😳😳 Lovely peck mmuuaahh ❤️😛😳

MY LITTLE GULAB JAMUN😆😆😆 WHAT SWEET NAME😃...
SWEETY... MERI SPICY CHATAKE DAR PANI PURI🤗🤗🤗... LOVE UR COMMENT... I COMPLETLY AGREE JALAL SHOUD BE PUNISH... THIS IS NOTHING... JODHA SHOULD NOT FORGIVE HIM... USKI KAMINI HARKTO KE LIYA ME PURI PUNISHMENT KE LIYE TYAYAR HU... USSE GIN GIN KE BADLA LUGI😃
I CAN'T WAIT TO READ YOUR OS PUNISHMENT...😃 SWEETY AM I IN YOUR PM LIST? I AM NOT SURE... I AM NOT RECEIVING YOUR PM... CAN YOU PLEASE PM ME YOUR STORY... YOU ARE SO FUNNY SWEETY ... I LOVE UR POST😃🤗🤗THANK U SWEETY LOVE U...🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: ..Sofia..

wOow ...that was an awesOme shot Bhavini👏👏👏
Very well written ...loved it😳

&
You're splendid when it comes to writing ..u know that right😉
So keep it up ...👍🏼

SOFIA MY LOVE... I AM SO HAPPY TO SEE UR COMMENT!!!!!!!!!! THANKS A LOT... I AM GLAD YOU LIKE THIS OS ... THANKS FOR ENCOURAGEMENT 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Wah wah!
Really nice.
This z exactly what I want to see tonight!
Bt hope sewaiya r poisonous!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Thank U for your comment !!! I am glad U like this OS😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Thanks for the lovely write up.

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