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@pranavvikas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
this is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!! love it... Can u pm me next time... and continue this os to ff... U R amazing sweety!!!!!!!

I will try to write more any way thanks for liking it

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: pranavvikas

Thanks dear I will try

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SIVARANJANI

@pranavvikas

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

CHAPTER 2

Jalal along with jodha comes to Agra. HB and all the harem ladies were Happy to welcome them except Ruqs and MM as they were not liking jalal going to amer to bring jodha back. After all the Pleasantries all of them proceed to their rooms . jalal went to DEK for the left over tasks to complete. jodha was so tired so she went to her hojra to take rest.
Rahim comes to know about jodha's arrival and rushes to
her and says chotiammijan aap aagaye hum apse naaraz hai hum apse baat nahi karenge. Jodha says are khane-khana hume mauf
kar dijiye
Rahim: Maufi toh apko ek hi shart maan ne se milega
Jodha: Aur woh kya hain
Rahim: Aaj aap hamare saath Khelengi , kahani sunayengi aur jho
bhole woh karengi
Jodha: Tik hai manjoor
They both along with reva, moti go to garden to play .
Jodha was tied with cloth to her eyes and they were all playing
Jodha tries to catch rahim but always he escapes . Lastly She
was tired and asks now lets go to our room its enough for today
But rahim requests for one last play. So jodha again ties the cloth and plays with them Jalal who has finished his meeting sees
them playing in the garden and comes over there. Jodha who was unaware of this tries to catch rahim but holds jalal and unties her cloth and open her eyes and gets shocked to see jalal
Jodha: Shehansha aap yaha , Maufi chahte hain woh hum rahim ke
saat khel rahe the aur aap ko pakadliye
Jalal; Koi baat nahi jodha begum
Jodha: Rahim ab bas hum chalte hain aap log khelo
Rahim: Hum bhi thak gaye hain, lekin chotiammijan rukiye aap
bhool gayi sharth
Jodha: Kyu kya hua
Rahim: Mujhe Kheer kaana hai aap se banayigayi
Jodha:Thik hai hum abhi banakar late hai, and she leaves
In the meanwhile both son and father were chatting
after some time moti comes to rahim and tells that jodha is
calling u to have the kheer. Rahim becomes happy and runs towards jodhas room. jalal also goes behind Rahim and Says can your friend also get some kheer.
Rahim: Nahi chotiammijaan hamare liye banayi hai aap apne ammijaan se banva lijiyega
Jodha: Rahim u should not talk to ur elders like that
And she hand overs a small bowl of kheer to jalal which both
rahim and jalal relish . After finishing their kheer they all three
sit and chat and play in their room for so long. Jalal was so happy
to see old jodha back who was talking friendly with him like that
night when both were sitting under the moon light and had some
moments.

Precap: Tansen's Re entry

Thats it for now,Bear me Sorry if any mistakes

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Parijatrocks

@Peacefulmind

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

wow nice continue... tansen entry

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malini

@malini96

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

awesome

do continue soon

waiting for the story to move forward 😊

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

WOW!!!👏👏

Really nice.. I loved How Jalal was not able to face her..

Loved the whole Amer thing!! Superb dear👏👏

Finally their talk led to fresh start of friendship!!! Amazing👏⭐️⭐️

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

VOW!!! I love the part when Jodha and Rahim were planning and Jodha catches Jalal instead of Rahim ... cute... Their love story is progressing little by little