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Mishika

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Nice start 👍🏼 The feelings are really well expressed by u
Please continue it
U r a nice writer n plsss update soon 👏

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Mrs.KimJongin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Mishika123
Nice start 👍🏼 The feelings are really well expressed by u
Please continue it
U r a nice writer n plsss update soon 👏

Awww 🤗 thank you so much my dear friend ! of course i am updating so soon

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Mrs.KimJongin

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 2 ROMANCE IN KITCHEN

The next morning occur , Jodha wakes up and thinks about last night conversation with Jalal and smiles .. " Aaj hamari zindagi ka bohot bada din hai .. Aaj hum apna tan aur man dono shehnesha ke hawale ker denge " and she smiles .. She gets ready , today she is wearing Jalal's favorite color saree , that is green .. She is looking very beautiful today !

She walks down , she didn't saw that there is some water spilled on the floor and she was about to fall when Jalal holds her ! They had a eye lock scene for 5 minutes , they were in the same position for much time , when Hamida Bano saw them together like this and she got so much happy and left thinking not to disturb them ! Jalal and Jodha but smiling and blushing .. Phir dono ko akhir kar hosh agaya .. and they left the hold of each other !

Jodha says " Dhannewaad Shehnesha " .. Jalal smirks and replies " Aap ek baar kya hazar baar bhi gire gi toh hum khushi khushi aap ko pakadne aa jainge " Jalal looks at him and smiles .. She left from there ! Jalal smiles and caresses his hairs with his fingers !

Jodha went down in the kitchen to see what was going on , she thought to make few dishes herself for Shehnesha and ordered all the chef's to leave , she starts kneading the flour ! Jalal was passing by when he saw all the chef's going out , he was shocked he thought there is some problem , he quickly went in the kitchen and was amazed what he saw ! Jodha's bare back ! and her hairs coming in front of her face , as she was kneading the flour all the flour had stucked in her hands and while moving the hairs back some of the flour gets applied on her fore head ! Jalal was watching this all , he moves towards her , Jodha was unaware that Jalal is inside , He can't move his eyes from her bare back ! he stands at her back and slowly kisses her back , Jodha so much shocked who can it be , but she knew that it might be Jalal only , before she could move and turn back Jalal holds her waist and puts his hands over her belly ! Jodha getting her breathe very heavily and her heart beat running very very fast ..

|| Back ground music : Jab sanson mein teri saansein ghule toh phir sulagne lage

Ehsaas mere mujh se kehne lage .. Aa bahon mein teri aake

Jahan do yun Simatne lage ||

He smells her fragnance and Jodha's heart beats very fast , He kissed her shoulder , Jodha breathing heavily .. Jodha says " Shehnesha yeh aap kya ker rahein hay , Agar kisi ne dekh liya to .. " Jalal doesn't reply and turns Jodha towards himself and he moves his hand up to remove flour from her forehead and Jodha closes her eyes ! She opened her eyes , Jalal comes very near to her to kiss her both were very near each other and were ready to kiss ... But Jodha moves him back saying " Abhi nahe Shehnesha .. raat ko " and she blushes and looks down .. Jalal comes near her ear and said " Aaj raat ko bus hum aur aap honge ! aur teesra koi nahe " and he lefts ! Jodha smiles and blushes and continue her work thinking these moments ...

Precap : Jalal aur Jodha ke SR 😳

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Mishika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Awww !! I loved Ja-Jo's coo-chico moments ! 😳n u chose the Perfect song for that moment n itna short chapter ab toh jaldi update karna hi padega 😛😛
Saying it once again that u r an awesome writer !

I read this part before ur pm ! 😉
Please update Sr wala part soon ! 😆
Though I'm only 13 but I'm dying to read their sr wala part 😛
Do continue it soon !

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SUMESHNI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Sooo cute awesome update love it plz continue soon

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Mrs.KimJongin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Mishika123
Awww !! I loved Ja-Jo's coo-chico moments ! 😳n u chose the Perfect song for that moment n itna short chapter ab toh jaldi update karna hi padega 😛😛
Saying it once again that u r an awesome writer !
I read this part before ur pm ! 😉
Please update Sr wala part soon ! 😆
Though I'm only 13 but I'm dying to read their sr wala part 😛
Do continue it soon !

Thank you so much Mishika 🤗

Thanks for all your support and love !

yeah i would be updating SR wala part soon !

No matter you are 13 ! waisay i am 15 😆 so koi baat nahe !

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Mrs.KimJongin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: SUMESHNI
Sooo cute awesome update love it plz continue soon

Thank you so much dear ! Thanks a ton

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Mrs.KimJongin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: -AshaNegi-
awesome uptade

thank you so much dear

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Mishika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: ---Mehak---

Thank you so much Mishika 🤗
Thanks for all your support and love !
yeah i would be updating SR wala part soon !
No matter you are 13 ! waisay i am 15 😆 so koi baat nahe !

Oh so u toh similar to my age group ! Friends ?
N u write so brilliantly ki everyone will obviously support you dear ! 🤗