FF : I REALIZE THAT MY HEART BEATS ONLY FOR YOU : PT 2 ON (PG 2)

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Guys , I am really sorry for the long delay as I have already given the promo of this FF longtimes ago , if you could remember but I have never updated it!!! That's why I am going to start by the prologue of the FF and then will try to update part 1 😃😃 Hope that you would like it 😳😳
~Prologue~
They could have never met , never known the existence of each other in this world and never ever seen each other and the most important : their 'LOVESTORY' would remain incomplete and unhappened if the destiny didn't unit them!!!!
From the day when destiny has decided to unit these two people , completly poles apart , with different dreams , hopes and ambitions and has decided to write their 'EPIC LOVESTORY' , they are already destinated to be together , to be each other's and to be soul mate and from that day , their story starts!!!

Jalaluddin Mohammad Akbar , son of the rich family of Mohammad , a successful young businessman of Dubai , who still suffers of the tragic death of his father , the sadness and the deep wound of his childhood which always haunts him!!! However he manages to not show it outside by being cold from nature and also by owning a handsome look , dashing face and body which makes every woman desires him and go crazy over him!!! His professionalism and quality to handle everything easily in the world of business , made of him one of the most successful and desirable among all businessmen!!! He hates to loose and always shoot at the top to see farther!!!

He considerates himself not to have a heart and unable to have feelings for others!!! At his eyes , love is weakness , fake , waist of time which leads to loss and doesn't believe in it at all!!!
He hates those people who believes in it!!! He is always busy and uses to travel around the world for different professional reasons !!! He likes when things turn out as his wish!!! He hates having relationship out of professional life !!! It's difficult to gain his trust , and a place near him as an important person for him!!!!

However , he manages himself to be more kind and lovely with his childhood friend Ruqaiya , who has been always beside him in the sad days of his childhood without knowing that she is in reality in love with him!!! On the otherside , the bubbly , sweet , kind hearted and amazingly gorgeous young woman , name of Jodhaa !!! Is someone who believes in the pureness and sacrifice of love and is completly against fake relationships fixings !!!! She believes that when god has created the human body , he has also put a heart in and it isn't for nothing as he wants us to be kind and compassionated toward others , who are unprivillaged by life!!! Her life will drastically change when her parents will recieve a proposal for her!!! She doesn't only own a gorgeous beauty but a pure soul and heart ready for any hard sacrifices for the benefit of others and a smart and clever mind which always help her to get out of tough situations!!!

When two people , who are completely different and seperated by anything meet , then WHAT HAPPENS????

Discover it by reading each parts , starting by the first below!!!!!

HIT LIKES AND WAIT FOR THE FIRST PART TILL TONIGHT PLEASE DEARIES 😛


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PART 2 : PAGE 2



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Here you go dearies 😳😳 Enjoy it 😛😛 even if it's boring 😆😆
Part 1
Dubai , a city which is known for it's skycrapers , luxurious hotels , sunny beaches , brand stores , big offices and finally it is known for it's impressive international airport which give easily access for tourists in the city , making countless numbers of taxis available at any side of the city , ready to drop you everywhere in this big attractive city known also under the name of 'CITY'S OF LIGHTS' due to it's important evolution in construction of new monuments , architectures and offices , which make the city more enlightened , animated and dynamic globally!!!

That being said, Dubai has its virtues, so if you find yourself with 24 hours in the city, you'll have no shortage of things to do.
A famous , attractive and dynamic city in which you can lost due to it's immensity , countless numbers of things to do in but somehow it's in this city , where will begin a beautiful lovestory , an epic lovestory , a lovestory of JODHAA AKBAR , while they two are completly unaware of their destiny and moving ahead with their quotidian life!!!

It's nearly noon in Dubai , where a mindblowing weather offers a sunny and brightful day , with the sun rising over all the city in sort of lighting up lost hopes and to make starts a new day ahead!!!! Lots of traffics on highways , with countless number of cars of people going at their workplaces , their offices , trucks to delivers shipments in big factories and industries , taxis to drop tourists or people who came on holiday here !!!

However it's an everlasting traffic jam on the highway!!! It's a real jungle , by those honks and cars that we can't even breath in peace for a second without hearing an annoying honk!!!

It's change when suddenly a Ferrari 250 GTO makes it's entry on the highway!!! So that people can notice his presence there , he begins to honk incessantly , people feels it's such a different sound but still annoying to hear it incessantly and becomes fully mad of anger when it doesn't even stop after a moment and made up their mind to make the day of this crazy car driver and turns to see it , from the first look , they become flabbergasted by the dazzling design of this car while the Ferrari drives away , leaving behind him , drivers open-mouthed!!!! All along the highway , he is the only driver to drive peacefully at his comfort while behind him people are blocked!!!!

People deliberately let spaces for this Ferrari , so that he can make his way!!! All of a sudden , he drives his car , in a speedness of a swirl , all along the highway and stops his Ferrari infront of a luxurious 7 stars hotel !!!!

When a policeman comes running behind his car and keep screaming from the outside : "Sir , stop your car , sir , stop your car " , "It's illegally parked , sir , sir " but when he begins to knock on the glass window of his car all of a sudden one of a car door opens!!!!
* JALAL'S ENTRY *

BGM : IPKKND ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA'S ENTRY BGM

With a manly hand full of rings on it!!! The policeman keeps screaming "Sir , sir , your car is illegally parked , sir , sir !!!! " And then a dashing and gallant man , wearing a black suit with a red tie exits of the car with a stylish black sunglasses of *REY BARLOR* on!!!

Jalal steps forward the hotel's entry but unable to bear more this annoying policeman , he tends lots of billets of money from his wallet toward him and knock it on his car full of force while the police gets stuck there infront of him in a shock and fear , after that Jalal snaps his fingers and glares at him by saying "Out of my way!!!"

The man afraidly moves from there , without forgetting to take the billets on his car , which makes Jalal smirks!!! He smartly remits his sunglasses and makes his way toward the hotel's entry!!!!
Precap : Jalal's engagement fixed with Ruqaiya by Hamida begum much to Jalal's disagree and anger!!!

HIT LIKES AND LEAVE YOUR REVIEWS PLEASE 😛😛
SORRY FOR SUCH A BORING CHAPTER 😭😭
WILL DO THE BEST AS I COULD WITH OTHERS 😃😃



Edited by sweetystubborn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u shuld have pmed me dear...nice start...marriage proposal on the way...dashing jalal...give me an update
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awesome start plz conitnue soon
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Great start, please continue...😊
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Wow what a nice start my Tenny sweety ... 👏
And I can't believe you used ASR's entry bgm ... 😲 😳
Update plz update plz update plz ... 😆
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Part 2
Jalal enters the hotel , where everything was magnificiently decorated inch by inch , everything was illuminated inside that we can easily recognize as a 7 stars hotel !!! Floors and stairs were made of marble , where costy and dazzling long red carpets were put on as to make the entry of a king !!!

At the each corner of the hotel , they were bouquets of flowers in vases put on tables , in the middle with palm trees with behind long sofas and seats with a giant table , on which waiters and waitresses come to serve cocktails or dishes to those people , obviously rich!!!!

On the terrace , there is a big swimming pool and a beach not far from the hotel , with a sunny day on , a visitor can stay for hours just by staring at each corners of the hotel but Jalal doesn't care of all of this , and none he is interested as it's his quotidian!!! He lives , frequents , works , travels , spend time what always he does , he is always surrounded and lives in lux!!! As he is a busy professional man , he never frequents a place without any reason!!!!

As he enters the hotel , a receptionnist comes by him saying "Mr Jalaluddin Mohammad" , he just removes his glasses and looks at her in a sign of 'what'??? She tells him , with a paper in hand : "Your parents are waiting for you , in the big rest room which is just next to the pool side"!!! Without waisting more times , he goes to the rest room where his parents are waiting for him , which annoys a bit the receptionnist , who murmurs "Such a handsome guys , but also strange!!!"

Jalal steps forward the rest room , next to the pool side , with his glasses on !!! However by walking near by the pool side , all women there just keep staring at him , some of them , remove their sunglasses and put their hand on mouth by commenting loudly "OMG WHAT A MAN!!!" , "WOW , HE IS SOO HOT" , "PRINCE CHARMING" , "OH LA LA SUCH A HANDSOME HUNK" ,

Jalal by hearing those comments on him gets annoy and walks faster , leaving behind him all woman open-mouthed and mesmerize!!! There he reaches in the hall , where everybody is there waiting for him : his step father , his mother including his younger brother , who being a playboy , usually by such weather , spends his time on beaches , flirting and asking numbers of women , who he finds sexy and hot!!!

Hamida (in a sweet and full of joy) greets him "ASLAMALEKUM BETA "
Jalal returns the gesture "WALEKUM MASLAM AMMI JAAN"
His step father also greets him , for whom Jalal returns the gesture without any envy and desire just for his Ammi's sake as he is the new husband of his mom!!!

Adham greets Jalal with a smirk " ASLAMALEKUM BHAIJAN" and teasingly comment on his suit "NICE SUIT" , "YOU ARE LOOKING HOT" and then retorts again saying (exagerately)
"NO ACTUALLY YOU ARE LOOKING HOTILICIOUS" and then burst into laugh , much to Jalal's anger , who glares angrily at him by thinking "IF MOM WASN'T THERE , I WOULDN'T HAVE SPARE YOU IDIOT!!!"

Hamida sensing Jalal's anger , shouts at Adham by saying "WHAT'S THIS CHILDLISH BEHAVIOUR ADHAM , AREN'T YOU ASHAMED TO TALK TO YOUR BHAIJAN IN SUCH MANNER"!!!! Jalal calms down and Adham becomes angry as once again as usually Hamida takes Jalal's side!!!

Hamida ask Jalal with a smile " BETA , COME HAVE A SIT!!!"
He nods in a 'yes' and sits on the red , sophisticated soft sofa , as he has such a habit to select the best , wherever he is , with the best quality!!!

Adam angrily looks at him and is about to sit near him when Hamida shouts "ADHAM , FOR ALLAH'S SAKE DON'T START YOUR CINEMA AGAIN AND COMES SIT HERE" , Adham reluctantly leaves the sofa and goes to the one near Hamida without leaving Jalal from his eyes and fumes in anger when he reads a sly smirk on his lips!!!!

Hamida to Jalal "MY SON , I KNOW THAT YOU ARE SUCH A BUSY MAN , AND EACH TIME IS PRECIOUS AND DETERMINANT FOR YOU AND YOUR CAREER BUT IT ISN'T WITHOUT ANY REASON IF I ASKED YOU TO COME HERE!!!"

Jalal asks "THEN WHAT'S THE MATTER MOM"

At the same moment some waiters enters , which doesn't let Hamida answers and she asks them to put it on the table infront of them as they are going to lunch here and not moving at another place!!!

Waiters begins to pour drinks for everyone but when they come to Jalal , he tends his finger , in a 'no' and they leave!!! Jalal tells to his mom "I AM NOT GOING TO LUNCH HERE AMMI AS I HAVE ALREADY TOLD TO RAHUL THAT I WILL LUNCH WITH HIM "

Hamida understands him "THIKE BETA , THEN WE ARE GOING TO START TO TALK ABOUT SOMETHING DELICATE AND SERIOUS WHICH CONCERNS ABOUT YOU!!!"

Adam murmurs loudly "ALWAYS ABOUT HIM!!!"

Hamida angrily glares at Adham saying "COULDN'T YOU SHUT UP FOR A MOMENT , ISN'T IT POSSIBLE???"

Jalal is surprised to know that this matter concerns him and quickly asks "THEN LET'S START AMMI"
Hamida nods in a 'yes' and starts "BETA , YOU KNOW THAT YOU ARE A YOUNG MAN WITH BIG RESPONSABILITY ON SHOULDERS NOW RIGHT???"

Jalal quickly answers "YES AMMI BUT WHAT'S THE REAL MATTER BEHIND???"

Hamida is about to answer "SO. . ." and

Adham cuts her in between saying "IT'S YOUR ENGAGEMENT TIME OR WHAT DUDE???"

Hamida shouts "ADHAM , TOO MUCH NOW " and slaps him hardly saying "COULDN'T YOU BE A BIT POLITE AND KIND MANNERED"


Jalal is hell shocked , his engagement , he , who doesn't know at all what is feeling , love , having a partner and the meaning of relationships and engagements, who wants to spend his life alone!!!!

He quickly gets back to his senses and asks "IS IT TRUE AMMI??? DID YOU FIX MY ENGAGEMENT WITH SOMEONE???"


Hamida sternly answers "YES IT'S TRUE MY SON , YOU ARE AT THE AGE TO MARRY , TO HAVE A PARTNER IN YOUR LIFE NOW!!!! AND. . ."

Before she could finished her sentence , Jalal has already stood up in anger , visible in his eyes , which becomes red and Hamida senses it!!!

Hamida "JALAL BETA ..."
Jalal manages to control his anger by holding tightly his fist and asks to Hamida in anger "WHY DID YOU DO THIS AMMI , WHY???"

Hamida to Jalal (in a sweet and tender voice" "FOR YOUR WELL BEING BETA , YOU KNOW. . ."

Jalal (full of anger and in rage) "I AM AGAINST THIS ENGAGEMENT , WHOEVER SHE WILL BE , TELL HER THAT I AM NOT GOING TO ENGAGE WITH HER" and is about to leave when

Hamida tells him "DON'T YOU WANT TO KNOW HER NAME ???"
Jalal manages to stop himself infront of the door waiting for her answer even if he doesn't care at all !!!

Hamida reveals to him "IT'S NONE OTHER THAN YOUR CHILDHOOD FRIEND , BETA !!! IT'S RUQAIYA"!!!!

While on the otherside also in Ratnagari , a small gujarati village , Jodhaa's wedding gets fixed!!!
---INTERMISSION---

Precap : Jalal and Ruqaiya's engagement preparations on same with Jodhaa's wedding on the otherside!!!
HIT LIKES AND LEAVE YOUR REVIEWS PLEASE 😛😛



Edited by sweetystubborn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome dear..😃
please continue😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oye second update bhi de dia sweety tune😆 ruk padhne de
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Originally posted by: roshaeldsouza91

Oye second update bhi de dia sweety tune😆 ruk padhne de


Chal pagli 😆😆 Sorry may be it would be boring or out of your expectations

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