FF : ll~Her First Love ~ll Thread 1 [CLOSED] ; PM lists in pg 24

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Fabulous Chapter 1 Vincy! Loved it😊 Waiting for Chapter 2, for another great mulaqat of our Akdha sorry Jodha and Mr.____________.😃

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akdhadeewaanii

@akdhadeewaanii

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

wowww...👏👏this is a fabuls update..👏vinci dear...frankly speaking i m also writing a story..nd it is somewhat matchingg...i m afraid of ur updates now...😕but it is cool chapter..i have more xpectations now with this story..😳thnx for pm..nd update soon..😛

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Parijatrocks

@Peacefulmind

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

iss story ko kya naaam doon ????????????

wow superrbbb se bhi oopar hai... lots of curiosity revealation of flash backs

baby wow nice one

wanna quick quick update soon

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

That was SPECTACULAR!!😳👏👏 Loved the whole scene! It was everything happening in front of my eyes..I was so engrossed😳 That was so intriguing Vincy!😳 Loved the way you described their states..Loved how you described their physiques!👏👏 Really BEAUTIFUL !!⭐️⭐️The scene set at Bus Stop..All heavily pouring.. Aha!😛😛 What a delight to read..Was very exciting😛😛..😃👏👏 Jodha was scared at first seeing that man, Now after sometime, they were bit comfy..and later when he went away..She was scared again!! God Vincy, You WRITE SO WELL !!!⭐️⭐️⭐️ I am a fan of yours!!!😳 Loved How HE dropped at her house..😊😃 Overall, a really beautiful Chap!! Very excited for next chap..🤗😃

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

It's lovely dear!! Nice concept and an amazing first part..😛

Loved the whole scene at the bus stop..the way they were checking out each other!😳

Can't wait for the next part..update soon!! Itna time mat lagaana🤗

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️VOW!!!! 👏👏👏SUPERB!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️ I am still in shock... this is your 1^st chapter... and this is your first story ever... You are a genius👏👏👏 writer...

The way you describe every little details like their cloths... their looks... Surrounding... Reason for delay... is amazing... The way you have describe her & his look... dress... I have no words to express it. U are very very talented... I was able to picture everything...

At the bust stop when U meet someone in this weather... You have perfectly written... what I mean is not too much and not too less... just perfect... very casual meeting... JUST PERFECT👏

I love the Dupatta part... Vow... And then eye lock...😳 phone ring... Seriously... U are wonderful writer... Please keep on writing more and more... 😊😊😊

You are an amazing writer... I am speechless... The way you have written entire chapter... Seems like written by proficient professional writer... I can't wait for more... Marvelous!!!!! Fabulous!!! Tremendous start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Rocking story

WAITING FOR NAME??????????

UPDATE SOON PLJJJ😃

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Angel-

@Angel-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

wow...this is such a beautiful FF👏
really love the way you are writing👍🏼
please please update soon :)

This was an awesome start :)

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litty thomas

@littoos

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

wow vincy darling...fantastic story...the way jodha blurting out er frustrations hitting her head jallu watchng all dis smilimg at her getting amused by her all these thngs were just wow...the way u described jodha and jalal owww sooo cute... they already got connected...

lovely chap and waiting 4 next...

MY FAV PART-

""""Meanwhile the man beside her was looking at her . Her facial expressions was changing by every second from anger to disappointment to fear to the point where she hit her forehead thinking of her foolishness for not taking a cab home . He was smiling upon seeing her change of expressions .

This is the first time he had ever met a girl like her . She's different from all the other woman I've met . And to think that she mistook me for a thief , doesn't she know who I am ? Just the thought of it was enough to make him chuckle . His chuckle caught her attention , she turned around and looked at him for the first time .

A pair of confuse dark brown eyes peered at him .""""