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taaniroyal

@taaniroyal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

vincy its awsum update, superbbb sensual kiss sequence ❤️
continue soon

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harshita singh

@oshinchaudhary

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

great chapter

luved it to d core

plz cont soon...

thnx for d pm

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Annu

@ANNU30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Nice 1 vincy update soon

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Good update Vincy. The marriage scenario is one normally encountered situation with some aunties (usually matchmaking aunties) asking a girl's age, why she was not marrying and also having a groom in mind to fix marriage😆 I could understand Mommy dear ka reaction.😊😆 I enjoyed that part😃

Jo having dreams of the stranger😳😳😳 She meeting the stranger once more😳😳😳. There is more to the dreams, which Jo will know for sure in the coming days😳😳

I loved the entire chapter. One suggestion though.(Please avoid the suggestion if you don't find it useful, as I am not a writer😃). If you would have described the stranger when Jo met him again then it would have been more interesting (usually it creates an impression on readers when leads are described😉 & also because Jo can see him clearly now as opposed to last mulaqat where it was dark/raining/she was fearful due to the thug)😃

Now when are you updating the next chapter. Jaldi chahiye, with maybe an intro of the stranger or something different that you have thought off😃

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diksha

@sweet_diksha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

very interesting...waiting to see she knows his identity

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...janu...

@...janu...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

nice one thanks for the pm plz update soon

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Angel-

@Angel-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

Really amazing dear!!👏 soo akdha romance n kisses r in jo's dream... wow ...thank u so much it is really lovable dear thanks for the update pm also 😃

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Tahniat Ahmad

@Sexylicious.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#198

Sorry for the late comment laddu.. I wanted to use this color to post here and I didnt have my laptop around me and you know how lazy I am.. Be happy that I didnt res your post...

AYYE HAYYE! What a beautiful update! It was brilliant! I am in love with it.. Thankx for giving the SR update.. Jodha its not ur fault baby... Ur dream is not in ur hands... I loved the dream sequence.. I HATE THAT ALARM CLOCK! UGGGHHH!!!!! It disturbed the SR... AHEM.. Jodha was willing to meet JALAL?? AHEMMM... Loved it.. was too cute..

no precap?? NAHI *DRAMATIC BGM*

U better update quickly LADDU... VARNA..😈

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

Vincy What do I say?!

It was Brilliant update...!!👏👏 Loved it the core.. So the teaser was her dream..right?! Knew it..!😛😆 Hot teaser, hun!😳😛 Amazing awesome chapter..!! Maina worrying about her wedding..But Jo seems to be in thoughts of 'him'.. oooh!😛😛 She forgot the pass and he returned..and he knew she'll ebe in trouble..coz if I am not wrong..He's himself the Boss, right?!😛😛 Your story is so intriguing, that I crave for updates..!! Great going Vincy..!👏👏

Please update sooon Vincy..!!😳😳