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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy
Part 2 -

WOW!😲 👏 That was amazing. ⭐️👏⭐️ The commotion of the household was described so naturally and beautifully! 😛 The routine was depicted well😳 ..Jodha's endless work and yet the love between all the family members..really cute to read.😃 ❤️
The bit I LOVED - besides, who can win when they're pitted against YOUR sister...DEFINITELY not a couple of immature post-graduates! Ahan..Now THAT's the perfect attitude!😳
Awww thanks so so so so much! dearest😃

Moving onto the Auditorium bit, Jodha's confidence was written with absolute brilliance.⭐️👏⭐️ But poor her, the sound system failed to her surprise..! So naturally and obviously she had thought, that they wouldn't do it because of the squabbles of last week.😛.But NO, she was wrong there. They had done it deliberately.😡😛 Loved her self thought - How petty..How disgusting! ❤️
Yup... a very embarassing moment no doubt😳...had I been there, Iwould have scooted off😆
She managed the problem so professionally!😳😳👏 She was there to complete her job, and She wouldn't back off at any cost..forget about the trick by those people!👏👏 So she sang exceptionally well as seemed from the response!👏 And she definitely deserved those whole lots of compliments and appreciation for sure!❤️👏👏 And WOW.. What goes around...comes around, doesn't it?' Lovely lovely lovely Bit !!!⭐️Her answers get me CLAP for her and ofcourse for you, the writer!❤️

Thank you sweetie... so you loved it... 😳
Finally, she was happy from her successful completion of singing !😃😃 And the message..Ooh!😛😛 Who could that be hun? Shareef? Jalal? Who else? Umm..Me thinks Jalal !😛❤️ Anyways, I'll find out my answers in the upcoming chapters!😛😆😉

Yup! 😛

As for these two chaps, they were written exceptionally well with phenomenal touch!😳 ❤️ 😳 LOVED them..Loved the very concept! ❤️

Love you di.. You are my Jaan! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Thank you too so much my dearest - your comments are so encouraging 🤗

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aanchal_c

@aanchal_c

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Posted: 11 years ago

#732

wow,i simply loved it...but why does abdul think that jodha will break jalal's heart,also renu is just crazy..how will jalal react?

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#733

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy
Part 3 -

Wonderful and awesome description of their "own" ways of having fun..their backgrounds..!😳😃 Yes definitely, the chai at 5pm is not less than amrit I tell you..😛😛 I feel the same after my college gets over lol !!😆
Oh yes.. I was reminded of all the tea-drinkers I know when I wrote that... 😆
But..Oh God! What a mess..What a mess.. Darn !😕😕 Ofcourse, WONDERFUL writing.. but I am talking about the chapter.. OMG Poor Jo! You know what di, the exact statement that I was about to make.. was already in the chapter.. Forty tables, 160 seats, scores of students - and THIS place was the only one Meera had found to topple her tea over!' Phew!😲
Awww😆 Tough luck seems to follow her Nancy.. you have no idea!
Try as she might to defend herself but could not! So Jalal was not only mad at her but also dragged her all the way to AD's office to complain.. Damn He narrated only one-sided story and as luck would have had it, Jodha could not do much to prove herself innocent..Ok!😉 Another blower to Jodha when Jalal demanded the compensation!! GOD!!
Yup... Jodha was in great trouble at this point!
Lets see what next chapter brings in😳 .. But ofcourse, the language and the description of everything in the chapter was so well and a delight to read!😳😳 This was really so wonderful to read!!👏👏
Thank you so so so my dear🤗 you are so uplifting!

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Hena

@sunshine_sun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#734

oh lashy loved it soo mucch...😳❤️

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#735

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy
Part 4 -

ROFL Jodha and her Gang!😆 God..this girl!😲 😆 Enjoyed the scene where she was seeking forgiveness and asking him to take those broken pieces of jewelry as compensation.😳.So it was a nautanki as revealed later!😛😆 But Really really loved it !👏👏 Ok When She was caught by Jalal, She managed it well again..😳 God I was rofling when She said Ofcourse without tears this time!😆 This girl is too much hun..But right na.. She had to suffer because of him..Now Scores equal!😛😛

Many seemed to like this bit a lot.. 😆 I guess it was the making the hero the poppat bit!

OMG THIS PART MADE ME DAY DREAMING... As part of his colourful student days, he'd met many-a-girl - the smart, the straightforward, the spunky, the sensuous, the smooth and the self-respecting. However, he was yet to meet one with such a tantalizing dash of ALL of the above. Indeed, she was something special!

*Sigh* You are making me relive it Nancy

Jodha and Maan part in library was really capturing!😳 First a little convo..but soon took a pace!😃 Loved How Jodha pre-warned and then, frankly let her feelings out!😛😛 Lol I was again Rofling at her replies.. DON n all😆.. Aww But the last line of Maan let me in thoughts and little emotional !!😳 Jalal didn't fit in the last lines what Jodha said..why? I am yet to read!😛 Really loved the Chap !!!👏
Yup!...it was a light-hearted conversation between the two! 😳
Hopefully you would have gotten the answer with the next chapter😳

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Bobby13

@Bobby13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#736

Read the chapter 15. Nice one. Looks like now Jodha will start avoiding Jalal becaue of Renu and also because of what Meera suggested.

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INDU

@GOTforever

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#737

wow di...awesome update...ufff yaha bhi love triangle...i dnt like dis Renu...it means love is gng to start btwn jj...hope Renu yaha mm ka kaam na kare...!!!

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#738

Originally posted by: srividhya68
awesome upt
cont soon

Thanks dear 😳

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Juggaadd

@Juggaadd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#739

I had a bad feeling at the start that something was going to happen. And Renu finally came!😔. Looks like Jodha will start maintaining a distance from Jalal now on...

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#740

Originally posted by: SUMESHNI
Superb update 👏
Looks like now jodha Will avoid spending time with Jalal because of renu .
Plz plz plz continue soon

Thanks so much sumeshni...

Your comments are always very encouraging...😃

As for the Jalal-Jodha-renu equation...without giving away much, I'll say that the unfolding story will possibly be different from what you'd guess...😳 Hope I don't disappoint...