Akdha FF:Bin Tere chapter 11 updated on pg 154 - Page 43

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Indhulovesparii

thanks a lot my shreshtha dear🤗will give a long update next time..will miss you 😭take care😉😉



wwowww dear jst 50 post more then u will be GOLDIEEE...Congratss in advance...
btw though u wont come to forum bt we cn chat na...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SShreShthA



wwowww dear jst 50 post more then u will be GOLDIEEE...Congratss in advance...
btw though u wont come to forum bt we cn chat na...

thanks dear..i can't come for chat also that's why i'll miss you too
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Posted: 11 years ago
so nice
liked the small salim very much
bonding growing btw jallal - salim
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: srividhya68

so nice
liked the small salim very much
bonding growing btw jallal - salim
cont soon

thanks dear..will continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
last 3 updates was awesome... pls update ur index...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dancersqueen

last 3 updates was awesome... pls update ur index...

hmm...will update dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow 2 meetings! Love the talk b/w Akbar & Salim.

-Sona
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sparikh

Wow 2 meetings! Love the talk b/w Akbar & Salim.

-Sona

thanks sona dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice. Love little Salim. Can't wait to read what happens next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks all for the support... 😭😭i got a lot of free time today..😃😃so giving an update.😛😛.sry if i made anyone disappointed...😊😊

Chapter 5

Jalal and Salim reaches Jalal's camp.Salim looks in wonder.
"Arey..lagtha hai kisi bade raja ki sangh hai".Jalal smiles hearing this.
"Aapko darr toh nahi lag raha haina Salim..aage jaane keliye.Jalal asks teasingly.Salim stares at Jalal.
"HUmein kisika khauf nahi hai..samjhe aap?".Jalal smiles.
"Mwaaf keejiye chootte janaab..ab andar chalein?
"Jab maafi maanga hi tha toh galathi kyun karthe ho?...jo bhi ho chaliye..."
Both enters.Everyone at the camp looks at the boy with Jalal.All were surprised to see a boy who was just the copy of Jalal.Baksi Bano also sees him..she comes near them.
"Arey bhaijaan kitna pyaara ladka hai..yeh kon kaun hai?
"BAkshi inse miliye..yeh hai humari nayi dosth Salim...SAlim looks at Bakshi Bano
"Aur Salim yeh hai humari behen Bakshi Bano.."
"Aadaab".Salim says.
They were talking and Maham Anga comes in between.
"JAlal woh Atgah khan...then she sees the kit kat copy of Jalal besides him.
"Yeh kaun hai Jalal?"
"Badi ammi yeh hai Salim..humara naya dosth..".Maham keeps staring at Salim.She tells to herself
"Yeh kaisa chamatkaar hai?yeh toh ekdum Jalal ki tarah dikhtha hai..itni samaantha do logon mein kaise ho saktha hai?..Agar Jalal ka koi beta hotha toh shaayad woh aisa hi hotha"
.Salim felt a little angry with Maham's look.He tells.
"Mwaaf keejiye magar kya humara chehra itna khoobasurat hai kya?jo aap humein ghoorthe jaa rahi ho".Maham's face gets dark.
"Yeh bhi koi tareeka hotha hai apne se badon se baat karne keliye?".Maham shouts at him
"Humein koi aise ghoore yeh humein pasand nahi hai...
"Shahenshah aapki khaane ki intezaam hogayi hai..Atgah khan comes in between.
"Shahenshah?Aap shahenshah ho?.Salim was shocked to hear that
"Kamaal hai aapne inhe apna dosth bana diya phir bhi aap yeh baat nahi jaanthe ki yeh mughal saltanath ke baadshah hai..? Aur hum mugal salthanath ki wazeerealiya hai. Maham says
"Aapse humne kuch poocha?.Salim says and stares at Maham Anga.He turns back and again asks Jalal.Jalal replies
"Haan hum shahenshah e hind Jalaludhheen Mohammed hai"
"Ab toh aapse milke aur bhi achha laga...kaafi suna hai humne aapke bare mein".Salim tells
"Woh toh suna hi hoga.Jalal ke bare mein kon nahi jaantha,aakhirkaar unhein paal poske humne jo bada kiya hai...Maham was proud to be his foster mother."Achha kya kya suna hai aapne inke bare mein?.Maham Anga asks
'Yeh suna ki shahenshah bahut dayaaheen hai,sabke saath bahut atyaachaar kartha hai..aise bahut saari baatein.."
"Kya?kitne badtameez ho aap?Tameez naamak cheez hai hi nahi aap mein.Maham scolds him
"Badi ammi jaane deejiye na bachha hai.Jalal controls her but salim says
"Seedha Sach kehna badtameezi hai toh hum badtameez hi hai,humein asathya kehna sweekarya nahi hai,humne jo suna tha humne wahi kaha..magar ammijaan ne kaha ki aap aise nahi ho
Jalal was surprised to hear that.
"Ammijaan ne kaha?.Jalal asked doubtfully
"Haan unhone kaha ki aap har kisike saath aise nahi ho,sirf bure logo ke saath hi aisa hai,aur waise bhi shahenshah ke prathi praja ko thoda darr hona hi chahiye"
"Hmm...ab toh hum besabri se aapki ammijaan se milna chahthe hai..unki baatein toh bahut badiya hai..Jalal smiles and tells
'Magar aapki ammijaan shahenshah ke bare mein kaise jaanthe hai?.Maham asks doubtfully.
"HUm aapse woh kyun kahein?Salim's reply for maham was fast and stern
"Hum mughal salthanath ke wazeer e aliya hai,humein humare sawaal ka jawaab chahiye."
"Pehli baat yeh sawaal humse karne ki haq aapko nahi hai,doosri baath Iski jawaab dene ki zaroorath humein nahi hai,teesri baath aap mughal salthanath ke wazeer e aliya hai ya nahi isse humein koi farak nahi padthe,jaise sab hai humare liye aap bhi waise hi hai,koi khaas sthaan nahi aapka humare zindagi mein".Salim cleared her doubts
"Kaisi sanskaar diya hai aapki waalid aur waalida ne aapko?agar aap aise ho toh khuda jaane ki aapka waalid aur waalida kaise honge..jaise Maa baap waisa beta".Maham tells
"Hum pehle aur aakhri baar keh rahe hai..agar humare abbu aur ammi ke bare mein ek aur labz aapne kahi toh humse bure aur koi nahi hoga".Salim warned Maham
'Yeh aap keh rahe ho?beta jitni umar aapki hai uske hisaab se baat keejiyega..cheenti ho toh cheenti rahna".Maham said
"Mwaaf keejiyega maham anga jee..magar ek cheenti zaroorath se bhi zyaada hotha hai ek haathi ho giraane keliye"..He turns towards jalal and says
"HUmein thodi der tanha rahna hai..aapse ek darkhwaas hai ki aapki badi ammi ko humse door rakhien"
And Salim walks away fastly.
"Kaisa ladka hai?badtameez..Maham was so much angry with him.
"Toh usne galath kya kiya badi ammi?uske jagah hum hothe toh hum bhi yahi karthe.."
"JAlal par.."
"Humein kuch nahi sunna hai badi ammi..Salim ko naaraaz karne ki kya zaroorarth thi?bachha hai woh..aap toh samajhdaar hona?Khair...hum abhi aathe hai..
And Jalal leaves
"Iss ladke ke peeche ek raas toh hai..humara dil keh raha hai ki iss mein kuch gadbad hai..chehra ek dum Jalal ka aur baaton mein Jodha beegum ki parchhayee hai yeh ladka..daal main kuch toh kaala hai...humein iske patah laga na hi hoga".Maham thought and she also leaves.
Meanwhile Salim was sitting near a lake.Jalal comes and sits beside him/
"Aap yahan?humne kaha tha na humein thodi der akela chhod deejiye"
"Salim badi ammi ki taraf se hum aapse mwaafi maangthe hai"
"Aap ne kya gunah kiya hai?hum teek hai..bass humein ammijaan ki yaad aarahi thi.."
"Fikr math karo Salim hum tumhe jaldi aapke ammi aur abbu ke paas pahunchadenge"
Salim looked at Jalal.
"Aapse ek baat kahein?na jaane kyun par dil aap pe bharosa karthe hai isliye aap se yeh keh rahe hai"
"Haan haan kahiye na Salim"
Salim looked at Jalal with eyes full of tears.
"HUmari waalid nahi hai..humein unke bare mein kuch bhi nahi patha hai..sirf itna pata hai ki jab bhi unke bare mein poochthe hai toh ammijaan ke aankhon mein aarsoo dard aur takleef dikhayi dethe hai aur kuch nahi...Patha nahi jab bhi aapko dekhthe hai toh humein abbu yaad aathe hai"
Jalal was shocked to hear Salim's background.He felt sad.He hugged Salim tightly.Salim also hugged him tightly.Tears rolled down on his cheeks.Jalal wipes his tears and says.
"Rovo math Salim...aapko patha hai?humein 100 se bhi zyaada beegumein hai..magar ek bhi aulad nahi hai..jab bhi aapko dekhthe hai toh aisa lagtha hai jaise aap humara hi khoon ho.."

They both didn't knew the fact they had a blood relationship,but they knew that they had a special bond with each other.The sun was about to set.Both father and son were engaged in their talks..


That's it in this part😉😉.Wrote it in a hurry😆😆.I had a long leisure time..so thought that will update..😆😆srry 4 mistakes😆 and pls hit the likes..😊do post your reviews😉😉😉




Edited by Indhulovesparii - 11 years ago

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