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Okay firstly very good concept nancy! I got confused in the start when i read those chapters that who is the writer man? Then afterwards i got to know that radhika is the master mind 😆 Dude you write soo awesome! As ofcourse i missed so many chapters here and i don't even know what to write and how to write! The story is just superb! Jalal jodha and ruku! I firstly felt very bad for jodha as jalal overloaded her with the work but after that all got normal :) Then ruku going for a month _/\_ Poor girl lol uske peeche se kya kya ho gaya! And that accountant...uske saath bhi lol ho gaya! Jalal jealous haan! Nyc nyc!
That accident was amazingly shown! But how dare that adham..ughh. Maar usko abhi ke abhi!!
Jalal's dream...gosh..how do you guys manage to write such hot stuff? Sheesh i can never write it man _/\_ its sooo hot! :X Ab isse zyada what i can write! The party and then jodha getting kidnapped by adham was scary...i hate that man! Thankfully they reache din time and saved her.
But dude she read her diary?? Oh gosh i was like freak! She must be so embarassed. I would've been dead by that time if i was in her place!
Confession awww...jodha toh aaage nikli jalal se 😉 😆
Then uske baad separation :/ So sadd! Poor lovebirds didn't even got time with each other and separated.
Radz tum CID mei ho kya? Just asking. Yeh plan toh Acp Pradyuman bhi nahi bana paate jo tumne banaya :O
Gosh the CCTV's and all the master planning was just superb and in between that jodha and mrs. dixit talks were saddening. Jodha seducing jalal...oh gosh. It was really hot.
Now last update? God i commented that time when you are ending this story
Do write more man. I will wait for a new story okay except your prince and princess FF.
Waiting now for the amazing update!
Superr story Radz you are just a brilliant and talented writer.
Wayy to go! :D
Okay firstly very good concept nancy! I got confused in the start when i read those chapters that who is the writer man? Then afterwards i got to know that radhika is the master mind 😆 Dude you write soo awesome! As ofcourse i missed so many chapters here and i don't even know what to write and how to write! The story is just superb! Jalal jodha and ruku! I firstly felt very bad for jodha as jalal overloaded her with the work but after that all got normal :) Then ruku going for a month _/\_ Poor girl lol uske peeche se kya kya ho gaya! And that accountant...uske saath bhi lol ho gaya! Jalal jealous haan! Nyc nyc!
That accident was amazingly shown! But how dare that adham..ughh. Maar usko abhi ke abhi!!
Jalal's dream...gosh..how do you guys manage to write such hot stuff? Sheesh i can never write it man _/\_ its sooo hot! :X Ab isse zyada what i can write! The party and then jodha getting kidnapped by adham was scary...i hate that man! Thankfully they reache din time and saved her.
But dude she read her diary?? Oh gosh i was like freak! She must be so embarassed. I would've been dead by that time if i was in her place!
Confession awww...jodha toh aaage nikli jalal se 😉 😆
Then uske baad separation :/ So sadd! Poor lovebirds didn't even got time with each other and separated.
Radz tum CID mei ho kya? Just asking. Yeh plan toh Acp Pradyuman bhi nahi bana paate jo tumne banaya :O
Gosh the CCTV's and all the master planning was just superb and in between that jodha and mrs. dixit talks were saddening. Jodha seducing jalal...oh gosh. It was really hot.
Now last update? God i commented that time when you are ending this story
Do write more man. I will wait for a new story okay except your prince and princess FF.
Waiting now for the amazing update!
Superr story Radz you are just a brilliant and talented writer.
Wayy to go! :D
Jhanak
