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Rads my Baby, my angel, my cutie-pie, my adorable little cherub❤️ I'm finally back and I missed you so much!! As with all the other stories, I am reading everyone's stories chapter-by-chapter and I'm going to give reviews for each chapter!! I'm doing this because I know how hard it is to give a decent update so I want to give each chapter the appreciation it deserves!!😛
This review is for your chapter 11!! I just want to say that you not only gave a decent update... You knocked it out of the park!! It was so amazingly good!!!⭐️I am loving jealous Jalal to the CORE and I think no1 portrays him with the arrogance and fiery passion like you Rads!! Kudos to you my baby this story just keeps getting better and better!!!🤗 I felt so sad to finally read Jalal's backstory! You have really added a wonderful new depth and a new dimension to his character never before seen in fandom and I salute you for it👏Jodha is the perfect combination of sweet and fiery and her cute antics make her a treat to read😛 I hate to admit it but her chemistry with Surya is making me fall in love with their pairing as well!! You just write them so well⭐️⭐️⭐️ I know she and Jalal are meant to be but I'm enjoying the banter with her and Surya! Also... You left this chapter at such an interesting juncture that I absolutely can't wait for more!!! Congratulations Rads my sweetheart on a wonderful Modern, sexy, sizzing AkDha romance!! I'm loving this one to bits❤️s I read more I'll review.. I the meantime... Keep up the amazing work!!!😳
Sorry for late replay Azz... thanks so much
Cricket
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