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Aiyyyooo! Sorry for delay I'll update next chapter today on 1st march
Edited by PupCat - 11 years ago
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Okay guys I'm gonna irritate you for few minutes but please read this.

Ummm... I have no words actually... I have 12th board exams and my computer is locked 😭that's why I didn't updated next chapter. Secondly I was visiting forum from my cell phone that's why I didn't reply on any comment. I'm sorry for that. I amtyping the chapter from phone that's why its small.πŸ˜• Please forgive me for spellings and grammatical mistakes. Thanks for choosing me as witty author. 😳

Summary of previous chapters...

This is story of our beloved couple AkDha, a modern one. Main concept is of PrincessNancy.

The story starts with a famous, arrogant, hot business man Jalaluddin Mohammad and his girlfriend Ruqaiya Sultan. In a party Ruqaiya collides with Beautiful but simple, kind- hearted, middle class girl Jodha Singh.

Jalal and Jodha's love story starts with hatred. Jalal decides to trouble Jodha. He appoints her as his P.A. One day Ruqaiya leaves for London to take care of her ill mother.

As days passes Jalal gets attracted towards Jodha. Her intelligence, simplicity, honesty and kindness.

Then Surya enters the story. He is accountant and Works for Mr. Firodia. He is Jodha's childhood friend. He kinda loves her but for her he is only a friend. Jodha and Surya's growing relationship starts bothering Jalal.

Jalal mets with an accident. Jodha takes care of him. She comes to know about his family. How he lost his mother and his father and step- brother.

Aadham Jalal's step- brother and "The villain" enter the plot. He has desires for Jodha. He is a rude and arrogant, have no respect for women. Total NALAYAK!

Jalal starts feeling SOMETHING about Jodha... Jodha too but they don't know exact name of SOMETHING.

Aadham tries to misbehave with Jodha, Jalal saves her. A misunderstanding brakes relationship of Jalal and Ruqaiya.

Jalal becomes Businessman of the year! Ofcourse with Jodha's help. They start feeling more attracted towards each other.

Jalal throws a party for celebrating this achievement...

Party Continues...

Part 17

Jodha and Jalal got ready for the celebration. Jodha left for the party. Maina and Bharmal didn't seem to be happy coz maina thinks that Jodha is changing in Jalal's company.

*Party Hall*

Jodha reached to the venue. Jalal was already there and was chatting with guests. He was about to leave when he saw Jodha in the entrance chatting with her friends.

"She is looking REALLY HOT" thought Jalal. Jodha gave him a cute smile.

They entered the hall. It was decorated beautifully with purple curtains... Little dark it was but those disco lights were dancing continuously. When they entered the hall people started gossiping. Jalal encircled Jodha's waist and walked in.

Jalal thanked his staff and Jodha for helping him in achieving success, the party started.

Jodha- Sir! I wanted to tell you something. She was serious and worried.

Jalal- Yes? Any problem?

Jodha- Sir actually I invited Ruqaiya too.

Jalal- What? But why? I mean I clearly told you about it. I'm not in love with her. Why don't you understand?

Jalal panicked. Jodha was fearful.

Jodha was about to answer him when Ruqaiya caught their attention. She greeted and thanked Jodha silently. Jalal was shocked.

"Jalal" Ruqaiya started...

Ruqaiya- I know you are angry with me... I know I was totally wrong. I apologized to Jodha. Now...

Jalal was in no mood of listening to her.

"Jalal my marriage is fixed with Nazir... And...

Jalal turned to her and cupped her face... he was happy beyond words...

Jalal- Really? I mean your marriage is fixed with Nazz? ( Nazir Is Jalal's cousin)

Ruqaiya- Yup Jalal. He proposed me... I found him a good decent guy. He is kind and loving. I accepted.

Jalal was feeling that he is happiest person in the world.

Ruqaiya continued- Will you forgive me Jalal?

Jalal hugged her. " Ruqs you are and always be my best buddy" Said Jalal.

Ruqaiya turned to Jodha, hugged. "Jalal, Jodha helped me in realizing what is best for my future"

There Aadham also entered the party hall. Jodha excused herself from Ruqs and Jalal. Aadham came to Jodha. Jalal was busy in dancing with his friends.

Jodha sat on the chair and started drinking her soft drink. Aadham smirks.

*flashback of Aadham*

Jalal Jodha and Ruqaiya were busy in talking. Aadham gave signal to waiter for mixing something in a soft drink. Aadham knows that Jodha don't consume alcohol so the waiter goes to them with a trey having only a soft drink and other hard drinks so that Jodha will take the drink with sleeping pills.

*flashback ends*

Aadham comes to Jodha with sad guilty but fake face.

Aadham- I wanted to talk.

Jodha tries to walk away but Aadham blocks her way, and starts his drama. "I am really sorry Jodha" "I am guilty for my deeds. Please forgive me" and crocodile tears comes out his eyes.

Jodha being kind- hearted melted on his dramatic apology.

Jodha - Look I'm forgiving you for first and last time. Ever again in life don't you dare to misbehave. I'm warning you.

Aadham nodded with teary eyes and barged out of the hall.

"Don't misbehave! I'm warning you!" Aadham mimicked Jodha. Now I will show you real meaning of "Misbehave" he smirked.

In the party hall as Jodha finished her 3rd glass the room started rotating. Her eyes became heavy. Her head started aching and image blurred. She tried to call Jalal but her voice froze.

She however came out of the party hall but was unable to even walk. She was about to fall when
Aadham caught her. She was trying to push him away but all in vain. Aadham again started his drama. He didn't let jodha to say something... He pretended to be her friend. He managed to drag her to his car.

In way he continued his drama so that he didn't get caught by police and guards.

Jodha was in semi- conscious but was aware of his plan. She dropped her phone on the ground. She threw her chain in Jalal's car's wipers. She left some proofs for Jalal because she knew that he will come to her rescue.

Precap- Aadham tries to molest Jodha. Jalal saves her...

I'm so so so so so sorry for a short update, but I'm unable to type from y mobile. I will update next chapter on 11th March. Many people pm'ed me for updating the story... Sorry I didn't replied.🀒 Please wait for next update. Those who are new readers and wanted a pm for new update please add me in your buddy list.πŸ˜ƒ

Edited by PupCat - 11 years ago
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Hii radz πŸ€— finallyyy after a looonggg wait gawt ur update without PM πŸ˜‰ though it was a too short bt I liked it.. πŸ‘

It was amazinnggg ⭐️

Liked d way ja-jo made an entry @ d party.. πŸ˜ƒ good to c ruq with som1 othr dan jalal.. 😊 hopefully now she won't b in ja-jo's life anymore & plz dnt bring her back in2 der life..

And Dis adham is cheap, bloody bas***d 😑😑😑 firstly he dreamt ov jodha n nw he tries 2 molest jo.. 😈 😈 he'l not succeed neither he'l in future. 😊 Coz jalal vl kill him πŸ˜›.. plz in ur nxt part give adham a harsh punishment dat he deserves.. 😳😳😊(chodhna mat kaminey ko) πŸ˜›πŸ˜› jalal k hawtho khoob pitwana. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Precap was good.. πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘ looking fwd 2 d nxt update more of it m despo waiting foh ja-jo's love confession part of how u made dem confessing der love in ur update..

Plz update d nxt part soon n plz write more like u used to write..πŸ˜ŠπŸ€—

Edited by lovergirlalina - 11 years ago
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It was a short update but it was important for the plot! it was really nice... Ruqqu is out of their way and now Adham is the one troubling them..hayye! I HATE ADHAM KHAN! He spiked Jodha's drink😲 Evil dude!


Jodha is so pure that she forgave him and he is taking advantage of that.. She is smart indeed.. Its good that she threw her chain and phone..Awww! she trusts Jalal!


HOPE ADHAM KHAN GETS A GOOD BEATING FROM JALALπŸ˜‘πŸ˜†


Update soon.. waiting for it
Edited by ..Tahniat.. - 11 years ago
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Wow wow wow Rads u r back with a bang !!! πŸ₯³πŸ˜†
What an awesome chapter !!!
Though it was short but it was really fantastic !! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Damn Adham he's trying to get Jodha huh ... 😑
It's very smart of Jodha to leave some of her belongings behind so that it'll be easy for Jalal to find her !!! 😳
Really enjoyed this chapter , can't wait for the next one ...
Keep up the good work ... πŸ‘πŸΌ
Edited by VincyAnne - 11 years ago

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