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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PupCat

Tahni nancy shreshUPDATE PLIJJ GANG WAIT PLEASE!!

Update plzzz😆😆😆
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Hey Im updating tomorrow PaKka!!
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MERA BACCHA UPDATE KAR KAREGA🤣 RADS...JALDI UPDATE KAR VARNA😈
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omg i just read all in one go i must say this is aoo amazing
i love it
the way jalal is turning into a good man
jodha's concern
disgusting aadhaam and jalal defending her
jealous jalal when he sees surya
i love all of it
doo update quickly :))
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Plz plz plz plz plz update soon
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Originally posted by: starstellie

omg i just read all in one go i must say this is aoo amazing

i love it
the way jalal is turning into a good man
jodha's concern
disgusting aadhaam and jalal defending her
jealous jalal when he sees surya
i love all of it
doo update quickly :))



Thank you buddy!
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Originally posted by: SUMESHNI

Plz plz plz plz plz update soon



Hey updating!! today!!
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Guys I haven't rechecked UPDATE so please forgive me for any mistake!!

Recap:

Jodha makes Paneer Makhni and Roti's for Jalal. Jalal who is lost in her thoughts is interrupted by jodha.

Jodha- Dinner time.

Jalal- ummm nice smell... Whats it?

Jodha- Paneer Makhni for patient.

Jalal- Wowww!!!! You made my night... Thanks...

Jodha serves him food. He takes first bite. Ummm... delicious... Very beautiful... He licks his fingers. You are master chief.

Jodha- Thank god you liked it! Now stop talking and start eating.

After dinner Jodha gives him meds and both falls asleep.

Hey guys this part is recommended for 16+ buddies!☺️

Part 14

JM mansion is sleeping at this late hour except Aadham. He is still thinking about Jodha and tricks for troubling Jalal. Restless angry Aadham makes his way to Jodha's room. He is well aware that Jodha is sleeping in other room. All alone. He finds this is his chance of touching her... of feeling her. He enters Jodha's room where Jodha is sleeping peacefully. Aadham smiles craftily.

He sits next to her. Slowly removes her blanket. Jodha is wearing a night dress it's a one piece dress hardly covering her thighs in sleep. Aadham looks at her with limitless greed. With no second he starts touching her shoulder her smooth legs her beautiful cheeks. Jodha feels his hand and wakes up in fear and starts shouting. Aadham closes her mouth tightly but she manages to run away. While running towards Jalal's room Aadham scratches her shoulder and it starts bleeding. She throws flowerpot on him and runs to Jalal who is sleeping calmly due to effect of medicines.

Scared and injured Jodha rushes in Jalal's blanket and hides herself in his macho chest. Aadham doesn't dare to enter in Jalal's room but takes oath that one NIGHT he will make her his Slave. His THING! Aadham leaves angrily.

Scared afraid fearful Jodha sleeps in Jalal's arms.

** In flight**

Ruqaiya hears about Jalal's accident and rushes to meet him. Her so called Love!!

Ruqaiya (in mind)- Wow I am going to meet Jalal. My love. He will be happy and surprised as well.

I know no one can take my place in his life. I am yearning to see stressed down Jodha. I hate her to the core.

**5:30 am morning**

Ruqaiya's plane lands on airport. She is happy that after many days she is going to meet Jalal but she is unaware that she is going to face bitter reality soon. Her driver comes to receive her. On the other hand Jodha Jalal are totally unaware of Ruqaiya's arrival. They are sleeping in each other's arms.

Approximately at 7 am Ruqaiya will reach at JM Mansion. She starts dreaming that how Jalal will welcome her...

Here in other room Aadham is dreaming about Jodha. He recollects how Jodha took care of Jalal. How she made dinner for him.

**Aadham's dream**

Aadham is raging with unimaginable anger. The memories of Jodha rejecting him haunt his mind. His head is throbbing with the mere thoughts of Jodha's behaviour.
He is not able to control his anger. He breaks the vases and pots in his room when suddenly he sees someone entering his room. It isdark night and he had
already turned off all the lights, trying to run away from the light of truth. He hears the sound of a payal and he can sense that it is familiar to him..
The person continues to come closer and approached him. His vision is already blurred with excessive intake of liquor. But suddenly, the view becomes all crystal-clear.
The person is none other than Jodha. She looks heavenly. Aadham's eyes shine up. "She's so gorgeous lady", Aadham drools...licks his lips. His anger came down to zero.
A wide grin crept on his face. Jodha cames to him and hugs him out of passion. This is a SHOCK to Aadham.."WHAT!!!" cames out of his mouth..
Before he could say anything, Jodha brakes the hug and seals his lips with hers..She enjoys his lips to her extent and Aadham does the same..though highly shocked..
Both of them kiss sensuously for about ten minutes..Then Jodha brakes the kiss..and says seductively "I am so sorry Aadham! I am JUST SO SORRY! Trust me..I fell
for you the moment my eyes saw you! I started loving you ! But I was scared of Jallad So I had to act all the while..You will not believe but I loved when you touched me..
I love you Aadham..I can't wait for both of us to become one..
Adham is so shocked with all this..His happiness knows no bounds..He grabs her passionately and hugs her..He says "Oh my God Jodha! Are you saying truth?"
I really want to make love with you Jodha! I just can't wait more..Adham said out of immense excitement..
Jodha becomes all happy and looks at him with seductive YES !!

* Kurban Hua..
Teri Tishnagi mei yun..Kurban hua..
Teri aashiqui mei yun..
Bekhudi mei..bekashi mei..Benakhi mei hua..
Tujhko har dua di..aur daga bhi..
Aur fana hua.. *

Adham places a rough passionate kiss on Jodha's shoulder and continues to pour down kisses on her collar bone..neck..He removes her duppata..Jodha blushes and lookes in another direction..
Adham lifts Jodha in his manly arms and places her smoothly on his bed..He is so happy..
Jodha starts breathing heavily with his mere touch..Adham removes his shirt and came all over Jodha with his bare chest..

Jodha blushes and slightly kisses on Adham's chest..Adham is in heaven with her touch..He immediately pulles Jodha towards his chest and
started hugging her passionately.. He opens the dori of her kurta and removes her kurta..Jodha did not mind..She is all lost in him..
Adham witnesses her heavenly beauty for the first time..Never did he imagine that She looks much more gorgeous in THIS way..
Jodha and Adham starts smooching each other and soon..they removes each others' pieces of clothings..

After having a sensibly good amount of kissing and hugging session, Adham looks at her with THAT look..
Jodha understands immediately and blushes..Adham pounced on her..And Jodha gives in easily..
Within no second, Adham enjoys the sensuous touch of Jodha's tender breasts..her milky soft belly and thighs..
Jodha enjoyes his touch to core..She wants more of him..She clutches and hugs him with utmost passion...literally begging him to fill her up..
Adham strokes him in her...with a BANG.. Jodha moans loudly..Both get the ultimate enjoyment and satisfaction..
They continues to have the session until both collapse..They sleeps in each others' arms the remaining night..It is very lovely night.

*Kurbaan Hua *

Suddenly Aadham hears aloud voice and Aadham falls from bed. It's a girl's voice. He gets out of bed and runs the direction of sound. Aadham is SHOCKED as well as HAPPY to see RUQAIYA WITNESSING JALAL AND JODHA SLEEPING IN EACH OTHER'S ARMs!

Aadham looks at clock its 6:40 am approximately. He gives a sly smirk. Now the real drama will begin. He smiles in mind.

Jalal wakes up with her scrams. "Oh god!" he murmurs. Ruqaiya storms in the room. Jalal feels smooth touch on his chest and is SHOCKED to see Jodha SLEEPING WITH HIM! But suddenly he witnesses FEAR on her face. She is still sleeping. He witnesses THAT SCRATCH on her shoulder and Aadham standing in door. He comes to know that Aadham tried to force himself on Jodha.

How dare you Jalal? Ruqaiya shouts again. Jalal stays unmoved and calm. By the time he is well aware of his heart he knows that He DON'T LOVE Ruqaiya. Liking and Loving are different things. Tears flow down from Ruqaiya's eyes.

Jodha also wakes up and realizes that she is sleeping with Jalal and is scared by seeing Ruqaiya in anger. Ruqaiya runs towards Jodha clutches her hand and drags her out of bed. How dare you to sleep with MY JALAL? She slaps Jodha and Jodha falls on ground. Jodha tried to explain but Ruqaiya is in no mood of listening. Ruqaiya starts shouting on Jodha.

I know you poor girls very well. You can do anything for money and fame. I thought Jalal will teach you a good lesson for life time but you... she again slaps Jodha. This time Jodha's shoulder starts bleeding again. Ruqaiya hurts Jodha very badly with her words. Jodha again and again tries to explain but Ruqaiya doesn't listen to her. Finally numb Jalal raises his hand and slaps Ruqaiya!

Shut Up!! He shouts. How dare you to slap Jodha?! Don't forget Ruqaiya you also belong to a poor family. How dare you to call Jodha poor? Jodha and Ruqaiya both are shocked. Aadham is shocked too.

You wanted to know na that why Jodha is sleeping with me? Then listen I LOVE JODHA! That's why she is sleeping with me. Jodha starts crying. Ruqaiya Aadham both are TERIBALLY SHOCKED.

What you said? You love Jodha? Asks Ruqaiya. Yes I love her. I love her more than my life... Jalal answers. OK Then Jalal. It's all over from my side. It's all over now!

Ruqaiya starts leaving. This is not true...interrupts Jodha. No Jodha now it's all over... Jalal stops her in mid way. Truth is that I love you and not Ruqaiya. Don't stop her. Ruqaiya leaves in anger. Jodha is puzzled with this sudden change in Jalal's behavior. She starts crying bitterly.

I am sorry Jalal. Last night Aadham was trying to... He was trying to force himself on me. I was scared and... Before she can complete her sentence Jalal puts his finger on Jodha's lips. I know He tried to... He looks at that scratch mark.

I am responsible for your brake up with Ruqaiya. I am sorry... Please forgive me! She begs. Stop it Jodha... Jalal shouts. You are not responsible for anything. And the truth is that I don't love Ruqaiya.

What? Asks Jodha. Yes Jodha I don't love her. I realized that loving someone and liking someone are two different things. And... Jodha interrupts...

Jodha- I should leave now. I am living in your house from 3 days. My parents will back tonight. I don't want them to embarrassing because of me.

Jalal- Ok Jodha. If you want to leave you can leave today. I will not stop you. He smiles.

Jodha smiles back. Let's meet at office then.

Jodha- Sure!

Jodha leaves Jalal's room. Jalal is thoughtful.

**At office**

Everyone in office asks Jalal about his health. Jodha comes to him with some changes in final presentation. Jodha stands besides Jalal and explains him new changes. Today Aadham is also there in office. He looks at Jodha who is wearing a pink mini skirt and sleeveless white top lustfully. He licks his lips. Jalal notices that Aadham is looking at Jodha. He comes in between and listens what Jodha is saying.

Jodha- Sir Tomorrow's meeting will decide BUSINESSMAN OF THE YEAR!

Jalal- Yes Jodha I am also exited for this award function. Well will you accompany me in function?

Jodha- Sure sir! After all I am giving the presentation. But I am little nervous because I am giving my first professional presentation.

Jalal- Don't worry Jodha. I am there for you! Jodha smiles. Jodha recives phone from Bharmal so she leaves to talk in privet.

Jalal thinks- Hume nahi pata what's happening to me but I am confident that Jodha will surely give tomorrows presentation Best! Generally I don't trust anyone but I trust her.

Jodha comes and takes pendrive to add corrections in presentation.

On the other hand Aadham is thinking about kidnapping Jodha to make her forever his. Surya is well aware by now that Jodha don't love him. It's Just friendship from her side. He is heartbroken.

But somewhere his thinking towards Jodha is changing. He thinks that Now Jodha is changed. She started loving money that's why she is there with Jalal. But both are unaware that Jalal and Jodha's destines are ONE now! THEY CAN'T BE SEPERATED!!

Precap: Jalal wins BUSINESS MAN OF THE YEAR AWARD! ANd Jodha wins JALAL's HEART!!

Sorry guys for Aadham's dream!😡 But it was necessary for upcoming track!!😳And quick exit of Ruqaiya was also important!!😃


Thanks Nancy! And Alina this Chapter is for you! hope you enjoyed This!!

Edited by PupCat - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
dint like adham part but the rest was good.
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Posted: 11 years ago
"Unres"
It was good except😊😊😊 the Adham partsAdham is such a creep😡😡Always thinking so disgusting😡😡And the Jalal understood Jodha's situation and supported her was just wonderful. Loved this action of him😊😊Sry if it hurts you but pls try to avoid this adham..he's disgusting..eager to read next chapter..Jodha won Jalal's heart that means soon we will get some good scenes right?..anyways it was nice..update soon
Edited by Indhulovesparii - 11 years ago

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