OS - Current Body Heat Track (Pic added)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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"This is truly the fictional work of my naughty mind" ...This is not going to happen in actual episode!!😆😆
Jodha laid almost lifeless..Her lips turned blue and body shivered with utmost cold and jerks.
Jalal looked at her with mixed emotions of mesmerisation and worry.
He was in such a big dilemma.. Whether to keep his promise he made to Jodha or take the only step which would save her life..
He was in a great fix..The thing which further made him anxious was the continuous quivers of Jodha.
He had to do something really fast. Otherwise, he might lose his"Baaghin" forever.
His expressions turned serious and pale at the same time.
He covered all the curtains of the Khema.. creating a small world ..in which ..there were only him and his "Baghin"..
At that moment..He felt for first time...that He needed to save Jodha..She did matter to him.. He was struggling with his own feelings within.
Jodha made a cry in her unconscious world. That was enough for Jalal.
He moved closer to Jodha and touched her forehead with uttermost care..
He babbled slowly - Ye kya kar diya Jodha Begum aapne?? Pehle hi humare kaaran bimar pad gayin...aur ab humse vo karwaengi..Jo aapne mana kiya tha.. Aapne humein humesha se hi dharm sankat mein dala hai.. Ab aap hi bataiye hum kya karein...
Apni zabaan rakhein..ya aapki jaan bachayein...
Jodha further quivered. He immediately got near her on the bed.
He slowly lifted the unconscious Jodha and stuck her on his chest.
He covered her with the shawl.
OMG!! Something stung him... Her touch was out of the world.
He couldn't bear it. Her being so near him was a kind of drug to him.
Jodha's lips were near to his ears and he could hear the quivers of her lips.
Her body temperature was falling fast.
He controlled his mind and feelings..and put Jodha down on the bed again.
He promised to himself..I have to do both my duties..I need to keep my promise as well as save her.
He removed his Jama ...looking at serene Jodha all the while..
He laid beside her.. turned her towards his chest.. He closed his eyes and decided ..not to open them till he does his duty..
He brought her closer to his bare chest.. Hugged her with tender care.. and covered her and himself from the shawl...
He provided her with the utmost care he could and slowly ran his hand around her back.
Her back was cold too..
He made Jodha lay again...and came on top of her..
He covered her fully and provided the body heat.
His face was so close to her face...
For the first time..he had been so close to her..
He didn't open his eyes...
Her temperature was still low..but better..
He could feel that she wasn't improving...
He slowly and tenderly removed the palla of Jodha's sarree that covered her front body..
and hugged her tight.. so as to warm her..
He continued to give her the required body heat till early morning...Finally Jodha improved a bit.
Morning arrived...
Baaki ka episode mein dekh lena..😆😆
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Pasand aaya ho to LIKE mar dena..😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful and fab update dear...
Love d way u describe confusion...

Damm excited for todays episode... Lets see what happen there...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nancy how can I not like it ???!!!
This is awesome yaar ... 👏
I can't wait for later ... Dying to watch tonight's episode ...
You are seriously talented yaar ..
P.S. I liked that u edited PS and RT's face into ASH and Hrithik's body ... 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice 👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww thank U everyone.. Glad u liked my naughty mind's work!!😛😛😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👏thanks dear at least u care about us the serial cvs are enemy of all of us👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesum update...👏
Loved it...👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by keelabc - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Saw it so late
Are yaar I am always out during Diwali
Lol, I loved it! Keep updating me when you write more. 😃
I hope ki this does not happen in any of the episodes. Or else if mom sees then JA is over for me.😭
But you sated my hunger for a proper 'Body Heat' episode 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank U everyone!!😊😊 m glad u liked it😛😛

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