AkDhaFF:Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani (Chap 5 UPDATED) - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SShreShthA

HEY RENU UPDATE SOON DEAR...

i will yaar agar sab acha jaye tho next two day me mil jayega...😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Note:

Other than Rajat,Pari and Lavina other character are all from Pyar ki ye ek kahani which used to air on Star One

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Ch2: The Second Fight
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khurana mansion:
There he was lying on his bed trying to get some sleep but no the sleep was not all interested to come to him..all her image during there encounter were flashing in this mind..he thinking about why the moment she came close to him he felt that some drum sound inside his heart and neither he had any clue about that..nor that thing happend to him before.. he waked up from his bed and went near the place where he kept her mask he took out the mask and started talking to it.
"who are you Ms.vampy??why are you effecting me so much?? why did i felt like some drum banging sound inside my heart when you were close to me ?? " he placed the mask there and moved away think"oh come on rajzz stop thinking about that vampy you didn't even see her face..okay now try to get some sleep u defo need "he fell back on to the bed and closed his eyes but no the sleep was still not interested to come to him..so he thought of watching some film to get sleep.. he started watch twilight ..he was even watching the film which he never liked but no his sleep was not at all coming to him..at last after a huge struggle he got sleep some time around about 4:30 Am..
Raichand mansion:
here our pari was reading an novel ..but no he mind was not at all letting her to read it she was read one line and then remembering rajat face and their dance sequence.."oh god ye muje huva kya hey??? why the hell am i thinking about that guy??? pari you got mad..stop thinking about him and read the novel now" she was trying to ware her mind but no use it was not at all listing to her..and was constantly thinking about him..for the first time she was wishing that how nice it would be if vampire also could sleep...
later the next morning :
an were wolf was running with full speed in the woods ..and the other side our pari jumped into an lake to take an swim in the lake..suddenly an area came where the land and water meet and both the supernaturals couldn't see the other till they reach close to each other..when they saw each other nothing was in there hand except colliding with each other and then BANG both banged into each others .as soon as pari collided with wolf the wolf roared loudly and started to transforming to his human form.in this process pari lost her balance and making some marks on the wolf cum human figure's neck she fell back into the lake again .on the other side the wolf was none other then our very own rajat ,he moved towards the lake .rubbing his wet hair back and cleaning his face and he saw an female figure raising form the water he had caught the culprit behind the accident and for him its looked like his was the most beautiful mistake he had ever committed in his whole life span.he didn't even blink his eye in fear that he would miss some thing.on the other side she was raising form the water slowly revealing her face and body structure , he was totally mesmerized by her beauty.she was looking hell gorgeous
"aakhey dhekya nahi dethey kya???" shouted pari

"dheka kar nahi chal sak thi ??"shouted back rajat.

both almost shouted at the same time.frist they were confused about what the other one said but later understood it ..but before rajat couldn't say anything he heard the sound "DHAK DHAK DHAK"from his heart for him it looked like some drum banging sound.it was the same banging sound which he heard the last night now he was in a dilemma.but pari has no such kind of effect so she answered back "oh hello me chal nahi swim karahihu" .he immediately got back to the normal world and answer back to her "mera kenaeyka wo malab nahi tha i mean to say ki ..chalo chodo you will not get it"he said and suddenly he felt some pain near his neck and it was because of her nails"sorry bolo"he said to her in serious tone."sorry ..me kyu bolu ? it was all your mistake in that case you should say sorry to me "she said with lots of attitude "oh ya yes meri mistake hi hey " he said as if he was agreeing to her .but she know winning boys was not so easy ..."per me koi sorry vorry nahi boleney wala"he said with his male attitude."arey jao jao "merey dil ethana bada hey ki meney tume kab ka maf kara diya.."she said ."dheko mer humare mu nahi lag na chahatha did you get it?" said rajat"kyu koi prob hey kya?"said pari taunting him "hey look..i don't wanna waste my time on fighting with you so just chuck it "rajat replied with lots of attitude. "oh ya esey muje par bohat bada upkar karahiho na tu??aur vise bhi kyu bigad lega tu mera?" she said"what ever "he rolled his eyes."aakadu" she said moving towards the lake "nakchadh" he thought to himself .both marched to there respective house..
khurana mansion:
"beta tum tho jogging gaye they but ye kya purey bheeg key ayeho??"said Madhu looking at his son who was totally wet
"long story mom ...bat me batavunga ..pheley muje fresh up hone do "siad rajat moving towards his room and he got freshed up..
Raichand mansion:
"ethana subha subha swim par koi jatha hey kya??"said Hassena looking at her daughter who was wet
"i do for my happiness maa koi jaye ya na jaye usey muje kya..okay now am gng fresh up"said pari rushing into her rom
"es ladki ko me kab bhald nahi sakthi"said hassena smiling at her daughter
after some time pari was sitting reading her novel Abhay came there with some language
"bro ..kaha ja raha hey?"said pari in confusion
"pari mey SHS ja rahahu"said Abhay
"per SHS ka reopen tho parso hey na??"said pari in totally confusion
" ah ..par me staff member hu right so need to go before and make arrangement for you people arrival"said abhay
"oh okay .."said pari
"ek bat yad rakna mey vaha tumara bhai nahi black magic professor hu..so be careful ...am not gng to spare you for your mistakes got it??."said abhay
"yes sir.."said pari giving him a salute
abhay smile at her sister childsh behavier ..befor eh coulde react pari huged him and said
"will miss my bhai "
abhay give an soft smile and break the hug and said
"sirf do din hi tho hey.."
"dono din ka kya matalab?? usi dono din muje mom aur dad ka shouting aur scolding se koni bachayega??'" said pari
"bas en don koi sheyaithani mat kar simply"said abhay
"try karungi"said pari with an naught smile
"chal come here "said abhay and hugged her
khurana mansion:
"dheko rajat me tuje phele hi waring dirahihu ..waha par koi sheyaithani nahi ..please meri waha bohat acha image hey pls use maat karab karana..ye teri behana ka request hey..me waha tera di nahi botany professor hu get it "said Panchi to this bro before leaving the house
"ji di ..i will try my best"said rajat with an trust me look
"kes keliye sheyaithani karaney keley ??"said panchi
"nahi ..i mean nahi karunga.."said rajat
"chal tek hey bye "said panchi hugging his bro.
"okay cu"sia drajta hugging her back.
bothe elders of the respective house left...
PRECAP:
royal party
parijat and misha ,kabir 's ball dance...
pari: i hate you fluffy Alsatian..!!!!
rajat: same to you bloodsucker.!!!!
both moved out in different direction toward the counters
[note:were wolf's heart beats only when his/her soul mate is near to them...normally it doesn't beat .that why rajat was hearing that sound for the frist time...if any more doubts feel free to ask]
so am done with the 2nd chap..hope ki you people liked it...i know acutely you people may be excepting ball dance but sorry was not able to write it in this one but next part me hoga..so bolo how was dat? acha tha ya bura tha ya wrst? ...pls give ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment...criticism and suggestions are most welcomed
With lots of love ,
Renu.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asapom

awesome update

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing Renu dear..loved it..👍🏼awesome update👏continue soon.eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful renu...and update the nxt sooon...excited abt precap
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing update
continue soon,
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update thanx 4 pm:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome dear..
Loved it..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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*UnRes*

that was an awesome update👏👏
loved it..!!
going superb👍🏼

Continue sOon..😳
Edited by Sofia13 - 11 years ago

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