AkDhaFF:Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani (Chap 5 UPDATED)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello AkDhaians..🤗well i know ki merey already two ff hey but i really wanted to write this one so badly that i couldn't resist myself..This one is gng to be a story which involves supernatural ..i always love supernatural's stry and i always wanted to write one ..and now at last doing it.. guys this is the first time am trying something on supernatural's if there are any mistakes ..please kindly do pardon me..aur ye ff rebirth ki concept pe hi hey ...
Note:
This FF is no were connected to our show nor to the history ..it is totally my imagination...and Other than Rajat,Pari and Lavina other character are all from Pyar ki ye ek kahani which used to come on Star One
PROLOGUE:

All the kinds of supernatural were present at that place...the royals who give punishment to the sinners were present and not to forget about sinner who were also present & the crime they committed was "LOVE" ,yes the biggest crime according to them as it was not between the same community but was between an werewolf and vampire...Both community people were against them as every one wanted to save the purity of their own community but the sinner were standing there holding each others hands they have decide that what every the punishment may be they both will face it together..even if it is their end ...
"belonging to royal families committing such kind of sin don't you feel ashamed??" asked one of the head royals..
"love does happen by seeing whom you are ..it just happens by what kind of feeling you have for the other one.. ...and coming to the point of being ashamed.. am not ashamed about it but in fact am proud that i have fallen in love ..becoz it is the awsumest feeling that any one can experience.."replied the guy ..by this the had royal got angry and shouted at him "just stop talking this nonsense...in the first place you have committed such a big sin and now ur supporting it???now i don't wanna hear any thing from you both ... you people deserved to be punishe".he sign to the other royals and all the royal discussed together and decided to end them and there love forever and ever...
"persons die but love never dies"
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Two supernatural being who's love ended incompletely ..will take an rebirth to complete it ..but will they be able to do it atleast in the next birth ???will there lovestry becomes a successful one??
i know my writing sucks...am not so good writing but i so wanted to write an story on supernatural beings so i have written this...so bolo how was that? acha tha ya bura tha ya wrst? ..let me know if u want me to write it further or not...pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment...ignore typos ,criticism and suggestions are most welcomed

INDEX:

CHARACTER SKETCH

CH1 : Ishq shava

Ch2: The Second Fight

CH3: Pehla Nasha

CH4: I HATE YOU

CH5:Ishq Bulava

Author's Note:

If my story resemble to any others stry its jst truly a coincidence .don't think that i have copied it ,as i will never ever do it because i myself don't spare such people and i am a girl who think not writing anything and keeping quite is far better than stealing some one's work and getting applause...i hope u people understand why am writing this note. and one more thing please only do comment what ever you feel about my ff ..i don't mind about it..

love,

renu

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Renu another awesome ff..
Want to know how the story shapes up
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Renu I really don't know I should be happy or cry My heart out!! 😕 😳Your Title Itself,Pyaar ki yeh ek Kahaani!!Made me to open the link 😆 That is My MOST FAVOURITE SHOW of the Century 😃 Why the Hell do you have to make that As your title?! 😡 😆
Ok On a Serious Note,It feels good to read something like this on My 2nd fav show and couple with the title of Pkyek and A Dark Love Story!! 😳
So Jalal and Jodha dies as Supernaturals in their Firstbirth!!My Ques,Will They Be Humans in the Next One?!
Request-Pkyek ka title hai,Toh Can I expect to see some Pkyek charachters like Misha,K,Jai,Alina and Even Abhiya?!😆You can fit all these charachters as Akdha's Friends and siblings. 😳 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb Renu dear!!!👏👏👏 Jaldi update karo na!! I wanna see where you take this🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am not into supernatural stories but I have read ur other work so I will give it a try to this story. so continue soon and pm me when u update. thx
thx for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AwesOme update👍🏼
Do continue sOon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

Renu another awesome ff..
Want to know how the story shapes up

thank you tanhi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Janvie--

Renu I really don't know I should be happy or cry My heart out!! 😕 😳Your Title Itself,Pyaar ki yeh ek Kahaani!!Made me to open the link 😆 That is My MOST FAVOURITE SHOW of the Century 😃well mishu thats my fav too ...Why the Hell do you have to make that As your title?! 😡 😆 so are you gng to hit me for this????
Ok On a Serious Note,It feels good to read something like this on My 2nd fav show and couple with the title of Pkyek and A Dark Love Story!! 😳
So Jalal and Jodha dies as Supernaturals in their Firstbirth!!My Ques,Will They Be Humans in the Next One?!nope dear they are gng be SN only in this birth too...
Request-Pkyek ka title hai,Toh Can I expect to see some Pkyek charachters like Misha,K,Jai,Alina and Even Abhiya?!😆You can fit all these charachters as Akdha's Friends and siblings. 😳 😆

surly you can dear...not all but yes few are gng to present and Abhiya is gng to be our jo's bro in this ff...

am in red...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az3003

Superb Renu dear!!!👏👏👏 Jaldi update karo na!! I wanna see where you take this🤗

thank you ...
will update AsAp..🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashpat

I am not into supernatural stories but I have read ur other work so I will give it a try to this story. so continue soon and pm me when u update. thx
thx for pm.

hope you will like...yup will contnue and pm ...
and no thanks about the pm...

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