OS-after elephant is under control

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Posted: 11 years ago
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RECAP: on jodha's challenge jalal without thinking for a second runs to control his favourite elephant who had become wild due to some poisoned food given by adham. Though several times gets hit by the animal Jalal controls it bravely. Jodha after challenging feels guilty for herself as she didn't want to be blamed for jalal's injury again. Jalal after winning his begum's challenge returns to Hojra. Jodha waiting.

As soon as he enters-

Jodha (in a hush) aap thik to hai na

Jalal almost normal observes jodha's behavior for a second-

Jodha-(clings to his chest without thinking -in hurry)

Jalal is stunned. He does not respond as he is shocked !

Jodha: (Closes her eyes and thanks god for saving him) he kanhaji aapka dhanyawaad.

Jodha: (to jalal) agar aap ko kuch ho jata to? Hum jivan bhar apne aap se drashti nahi mila paate..

Jalal: (njoying her closeness) lagta hai aaj khuda hum par maherbaan hai. (smiles happily looking upwards) Kyuki hum ko to wo ghav bhi gawara hai jis par marham lagan eke bahaane hi sahi, humari begum humare nazdik jo aati hai.. par aaj to chot nahi lagne par ye tohfa mila hai..(and blushes)

Jodha suddenly realizes what she had done. And steps backward to make a space between them and feels shy. Looks down. Jalal gazes at her beauty.

Jodha: wo .. sahenshah aap ko wahan nahi jana chahiye tha (feeling shy .she tries to divert. She can't look at jalal)

Jalal: (smirks) par jodha begum aapne hi to kaha tha..

Jodha: jaise aap humari har baat mante hai(typical biwi types).. jaante hai hum ki aap bade vir yoddha hai.. ye sidhh karne ki zarurat nahi thi..(in taana tone)

Jalal: khair jodha begum.. hum sahisalaamat hai. AApke KAnhaji ki dua se..

moti baai enters.

Moti: Khalal ke liye mafi chahtein hai shanshah par maharani jodha ko daadi sa ne yaad kiya hai.

Jodha: Hum abhi aate hai (moti leaves)

Jalal smilingly Moves to get fresh after the fight. Jodha proceeds to meet dadisa.

Jalal: jodha begum..

Jodha stops but does not turn

Jalal : tohfa humein bahot pasand aaya (blushes)

Jodha also bluses and moves.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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tohfa humein b behad pasand aaya😳
very good OS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1234philli23

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">tohfa humein b behad pasand aaya😳</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">very good OS</font>



Yup loved it... AUwsome yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww..that was a Cute os😳
lOved it..!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww- it was short and sweet but u should write more os or ss and plzz me when u do
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome...

Nice to see the nook jhook...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful os dear👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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what a beautiful os please continue

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