OS: Jodha ya Rukaiya?

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: lashy
Beautiful! As usual...
Mwah!😛

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Sofia13
Great Os..!😊

thank you

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Az3003
Wow you are amazing yaar!! 👏👏👏 This story is wonderful! It really did have me guessing 'til the end who was in bed with him Ruks or Jodha😆.. It took all my willpower not to scroll to the end and find out... But I did it😛😛😛

You are fantastic... Keep up the wonderful writing!! I look forward to reading your work and thanks for the pm

Thank you. Aww don't worry, I am one of those people who reads spoilers and endings too😆

Thank you again :)

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: naneta
excellent dear🤗

merci

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ash08

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Good one!! 😊

I was at the end and I was thinking "shouldn't she be saying - "I will be your Jodha. Go and marry Rukaiya, the girl from ur religion your parents want you to marry!!" And then I had to go back and read the title of the story. Very nicely put sweetie. Had me hanging for a while.

Very very nicely written. 👏

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: ash08
Good one!! 😊
thank you
I was at the end and I was thinking "shouldn't she be saying - "I will be your Jodha. Go and marry Rukaiya, the girl from ur religion your parents want you to marry!!" And then I had to go back and read the title of the story. Very nicely put sweetie. Had me hanging for a while.
you know what? that would have been a good way to write too. in fact, I like your version better.
Very very nicely written. 👏

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Tahniat Ahmad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Awesome job girl! Love all ur works..
Pm me whenever u write an OS or any thing

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..
Awesome job girl! Love all ur works..
Pm me whenever u write an OS or any thing

will do. merci

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saakhi01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Nice OS... i liked it n d other one also, wife's keeper...
Sorry cud nt comment on that one due to n/w problem...
Count my like dere also...
Thanks for d pm