Amer Wedding- JA SFF(CLOSED)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Great start👍🏼
Do continue sOon...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Ausome...
Both went outside without protection...
Plz continue soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Thanks for apprecaiting my FF. I thought how to develop relationship and trust between Jodha and Jalal and hence writing this SFF

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Posted: 11 years ago

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both updates wer awesome...do continue soon😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

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This is an awesome start!! I love your characterisation and dialogues!! I love that you wrote Maharana Pratap so well👏👏👏 Plz update soon and congrats😛

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myviewprem

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Poem from Jalal to Jodha

OK here is one poem i wrote sometime back which suits jalal thoughts after the temple scene

Shama ban ke jalraha tha

Jab tum aayi zindagi main

Akeli kashthi khi tara beh raha tha jazbaton ke toofan main

Jab tum aayi zindagi main kinara bankar

Mere tukrane par bhi tum nahi hui mujhse naraz

Mere har gusthaki koi karke maaf

Mujpe tumne saaya kiya

Aur bhula diye mere dil ke zakaam

Par abhi yakeen hai mujhe milenge

hum doobara kisi mod par kahin

Kayamat tak karunga main tumhara intezaar

Tum bhula na dena mujhe kahin

Tum bhula na dena kahin

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SShreShthA

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Nice dear... Yeah perfect after temple scene...

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SShreShthA

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Nice... Too good update...
Bt why stopped here abhi ja ke toh woh mile...
Plz cont soon yaar...

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Asapom

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Nice update

Jalal is jealous like a child

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srividhya68

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice update

cont soon...waiting to see what happens next

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