FF *Ishqzaade* Chapter 27 updated on page150*THREAD CLOSED* - Page 29

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey friends...😊
sorry for getting so late in update...😭
but my exam date sheet is out so was quite busy in preparations...😭
really sorry but i might not be able to give you frequent updates for next two weeks...😭
but i will try my best to update as soon as possible...
here is the next chapter...😃
plz forgive me for the writing mistakes if any...😳

Chapter 13:-

(Ruqqaiya...unable to bear more insult of her...looks with utmost disgust at jalal...and runs away from there...jalal was looking unaffected by this...hamida steps forward to jodha...)

Hamida:- jodha beta...ruqqaiya ki taraf se hum tumse maafi mangte hai...usne tumhare sath jo bartav kiya...hum kya kahe...hum bahut sharminda hai beta...tum uski kisi bhi baat ko dil se mat lagana...

Jodha:-(holding hamida's shoulders) nahi ammi jaan...aapko sharminda hone ki koi aavshaykta nahi hai...aur hume bilkul bhi bura nahi laga...hume to sirf svyam per krodh aa raha hai...ek tarah se unki baat sahi bhi to thi na ammi jaan...hum jabse is ghar me bahu banker aaye hai...kuch na kuch ashubh ghatit hota hi rehta hai...pehle rukkaiya begum ka garbhpaat...aur ab shenshah ki jaan bhi khatre me pad gayi humare karan...sharminda to hume hona chahiye...shayad hum hi is saltanat, aapke aur shenshah ke layak nahi hai...

(Jalal looks at jodha with angry face...)

Jalal:-(in an angry and serious tone) aaj keh diya so keh diya jodha...dobara kabhi esa mat kahiyega ke aap humare layak nahi...aap nahi janti ke aap humare liye kitni anmol hai...aapko koi haq nahi hai mogul saltanat ki begum ki kabiliyat per sawal uthane ka...aap humare liye bahut khaas hai jodha...aur jo kuch bhi aaj tak is mehel me hua usme aapki koi galti nahi hai...aur rahi baat ruqqaiya begum ki...to ye koi pehli baar nahi tha jab unhone kisi se badsaluki ki ho...unhe unke kiye ka ehsaas karana zaruri tha...kam se kam ab kisi ke dil ko chot pahuchane se pehle hazaar baar sochegi wo...

Hamida:- jalal sahi keh raha hai jodha...tum khud ko kasurwar mat samjho kisi bhi chiz ke liye,...yaha hum sab tumhe bahut chahte hai...hai na jalal...

Jalal:- beshak ammi jaan....(he said it firmly nodding his head...everyone was shocked to see jalal like that...everyone started staring at him with amazed expressions...)

Mahamanga:- (to herself) ye jalal ko ho kya gaya hai...kaise ajib tarike se bartav kar rahe hai ye...jis jodha ka naam tak sunna pasand nahi karte the...aaj uske chere se mano nazren hi nahi hat rahi inki...ya khuda...hume to aasaar kuch ache nahi lag rahe...kahi jalal ko jodha se mohabbat...jaldi hi pata lagana hoga...ke akhir chal kya raha hai jalal ke dimag me...

(Suddenly Hamida's attention shifted to their injuries again...)

Hamida:- are haan...jalal...hum to bhul hi gaye...aap ne bataya nahi...ye chot kaise lagi aap dono ko...

(Bakhshi bano and maham came forword...)

Bakhshi bano:- haan bhai jaan...aap keh rahe the ke bhabi jaan ne aapko bachaya...esa kya hua tha...

Maham:- bataiye na jalal...kya hua...kahi kisi ne hamla to nahi kiya aap per...(jalal looks at her doubtfully...she quickly corrected herself...)...aabbb...humara matlab hai...zakham kafi gehre hai...inhe dekhker to esa hi lagata hai hume...

Jalal:- aap sab preshan mat hoyiye...aaj sham diwan e khaas me sab kuch pata chal jayega aap sabko...aur badi ammi aapka andaza bilkul sahi hai...hum per humla hi hua tha...

Hamida:-(gets worried and scared) humla...kis dushman ki itni majaal ho gayi jo shenshah e hind per humla karne ki gustakhi ker baitha...

Jalal:- dushman nahi ammi jaan...kismet ne humare sath ek bahut ajib khel khela hai...jinhe aaj tak hum gair samajhte rahe...wohi humare sabse bade apne nikle...(he said it looking at jodha...) aur jinhe apna samajhte rahe...wo humari jaan ke dushman ...(looking at maham...she got a little scared...)

Maham:- aap kehna kya chahte hai jalal...hum kuch samjhe nahi...

Jalal:- abhi kuch samajhne ki zarurat bhi nahi hai badi ammi...sham tak intezar kar lijiye...sab kuch khud b khud samne aa jayega...filhal is bare me aage koi behes nahi hogi...jodha zakhmi hai...sabse pehle inka ilaj zaroori hai...fauran khwaja shera ko jodha begum ke khwaabgah me aane ka paigam bheja jaye...

Maham:- jo hukm shenshah...hum abhi khwaja shera ko bhijwate hai...

(jalal nodes his head in satisfaction and moves towards jodha and lifts her up...everyone present their looks at jalal surprisingly...they all were way too shocked...their mouth wide open as they have never seen shenshah e hind doing this and that also in front of everyone...all begums clutched their fist due to immense jealousy as they had waited for this moment all their life and here jodha took away the chance...hamida bano also felt a little awkward...she moved towards jalal and whispered in his ear)

Hamida:- (in a husky voice so that other can't listen it...) jalal...beta ye aap kya kar rahe hai...sab dekh rahe hai...kuch to lihaz kariye bado ka...

Jodha(husky voice):- haan shenshah...niche utariye hume...bahut ajib lag raha hai hume...

Jalal:-(replies in the same tone...) are aap fir bhul gayi...aapke pair me chot hai jodha...aur ammi jaan humari begum ko chalne me taklif hai to unki madad karke kaun sa gunah kar diya humne...

(Now loudly) are aap sab hume ese kyu dekh rahe hai jaise humne gunah e azim kar diya ho...jodha ke pair me chot hai... (And he shows the blood mark at her toe to everyone...) ...dekhiye...esi halat me kaise chal payegi wo...isiliye unhe unke kaksh tak chorker aana humara farz hai...ab aap sub khuda ke liye hume ese ghurna band karege ...

(Everyone moved their heads sideways and started looking in other direction...started giggling by covering their mouth with their hands...bakhshi bano decided to pull the leg of her irritated brother...)

Bakhshi bano:- are bhai jaan...to humne kahan kuch kaha aapse...ab apne bhai aur bhabhi jaan ko dekhna bhi gunaah ho gaya hai kya...

Jalal:- hum dekh rahe hai bakhshi bano...aaj kal aap apni umr se badhker baate karne lagi hai...(she giggles and jalal gives her an angry look...everyone was trying to look away but the magnificence of the couple together were not allowing them to take their eyes off them...jalal...ignoring the gazes...made his way to jodha's room... )

(all the way ...jodha was just watching and admiring jalal...she dint even feel much embarrassed that jalal lifted her in his arms in front of everyone...she was so much moved by his words...the way he stood by her side...and spoke in her support touched her soul completely...but somewhere she felt bad for ruqqaiya too...she knew that somewhere...what ruqqaiya said was a bitter truth also... because jalal was there in the jungle to save her...and he got injured with arrow in the attempt of saving her...she was feeling a bit guilty for this...jodha was in lost in her own thoughts so much that she dint realize when they reached to the room...jalal put her down...and realized that she was continuously staring in one direction...lost in thoughts...)

Jalal:- jodha...(she dint respond...he waved his hand in front of her eyes to make her come back in her senses again...)...jodha....(she jerked off from her thoughts...)

Jodha:- ji...(in a low voice)

Jalal:- kaha kho gayi aap...

Jodha:- kuch nahi...bus ese hi...

Jalal:- agar kuch nahi hai to phir aapke maathe per ye shikand kaisi...bataiye hume...kin khayalat me doobi hui thi aap...jo humari aavaz tak nahi sunai di aapko...hmm??

Jodha:- kuch nahi shenshah...hum bus wo...ruqqaiya begum ke bare me soch rhe the...aapne sabke samne humara paksh liya...humara sath diya...iski behad khushi hai hume...parantu aapko sabke samne ruqqaiya begum ko bura bhala nahi kehna chahiye tha...ye aapne sahi nahi kiya...

Jalal:- aur jo unhone kiya wo sahi tha aapki nazar me jodha...ek baat aap achi tarah samajh lijiye...hum aapse behad mohabbat karte hai aur agar humare samne koi bhi aapki tauhin karne ki koshish karega...to hum use katai nahi bakhshege...chahe wo koi bhi ho...usse hume fark nahi padta...samjhi aap...

(jalal faces away in anger...jodha comes close to him and hugs him from behind...resting her head on his shoulder...but still jalal was carrying the same annoyed expression...)

Jodha:- hum jante hai shensha ke aap humse atydhik prem karte hai...aur hum per koi ungali uthaye ye aapko bardashat nahi...hum to bus itna keh rahe the ke ruqqaiya begum aapke bachpan ki dost hai aur aapne isse pehle unse kabhi bhi is tarah baat nahi ki ...kitni thes pahuchi hogi unke man ko...

Jalal:- (turns to face jodha) jinhe dusro ke jazbaato ki kadar na ho ...unke saath yahi bartav kiya jaana chahiye jodha...kya aapko bura nahi laga...kya aapke dil ko chot nahi pahuchi unke lafzo se...boliye...(he held her shoulders...)

Jodha:- nahi shenshah...balki hume to svayam per krodh aa raha tha...kyuki kahi na khai jo unhone kaha wo bhi to ek katu satya ke bhanti hi tha na...

Jalal:- kehna kya chahti hai aap jodha...

Jodha:-(she cups his face in her hands) hum bus ye kehna chahte hai...ke us paristithi me yadi koi bhi hota to yahi samjhta ke wo chot apko humare karan lagi hai...jo ek tarah se sahi bhi hai...kyuki jungle me to aap humare karan hi gaye the na...yadi hum mehel se bhagne ki murkhta na karte to shayad ye sab kabhi na hota...isliye unki soch bhi galat nahi thi shenshah...bus unke kehne ka tarika galat tha...

(jalal was amazed at jodha's purity and innocence...he never ever had seen anyone with that much selflessness...)

Jalal:- (he held her hands and placed them close to his heart) yakin nahi hota hume jodha...ke koi itna paak...itna masum...kaise ho sakta hai...aapko apni mohabbat ke roop me paker sachmuch humari adhuri zindagi puri ho gayi jodha...kabhi kabhi to lagta hai ke aap sachmuch esi hai ya phir ye koi chalalva hai...

Jodha:- ab ye to aap hi behtar jaan sakte hai shenshah...acha ab mudde se mat bhatkaiye hume...hum keh rahe the (jalal interrupts her in b/w)

Jalal:- nahi jodha...aap nahi janti...humne unhe kuch zyada hi azadi de rakhi thi...shayad isiliye unke mizaz is had tak bigad gaye hai...jab unhe dusro ki fikr nahi to phir hum kyu soche unke bare me...

Jodha:- nahi shenshah...yadi aap bhi wohi karege jo unhone kiya to phir aap me aur unme kya anter reh jayega...ek shenshah hone ke nate bhi to apke kuch kartavya...kuch sidhant hai na...aur stri jati ka samman karna unme se ek hai...

Jalal:- to phir aap chahti kya hai...kya kare hum...

Jodha:- hum chahte hai ke aap ruqqaiya begum ko maaf kar dijiye...aur unse jaker baat kariye...(jalal's face turns serious now...)aur unhe samjhaye ka prayas kijiye...

Jalal:- jiski aankho per nafrat ki patti bandhi ho use samjhana namumkin hai jodha...ye humse nahi hoga...agar unhone phir se aapke bare me kuch galat kaha to shayd is baar hum apne gusse per kabu na rakh paaye...maaf kijiyega...magar ye humse nahi hoga...

Jodha:-(hugs him lightly) shenshah...zid choriye na...jaane bhi dijiye...kya aap humare liye itna bhi nahi kar sakte...plzzz(I was not getting what to write here...hehe)😆...humare liye...

Jalal:- (hugs her back tightly taking her in his embrace completely)...apni baat kaise manvani hai...iska bakhubi ilm hai aapko...thik hai... hum jayege...magar sirf aapke liye...bus...khush...(and he places a soft kiss on her forehead)

(jodha hugs him tightly by resting her head on his chest and placing her arms under jalal's arms...capturing his shoulders with them...jalal hugs her back passionately by placing his hands on her waist ...and they again forget the whole world around them lost in each other completely)

Precap:- jalal confesses his feelings towards jodha to hamida bano ...all blushing....😳

Thanku friends...

Don't forget to like and comment😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

OMG Pallavii My Sherni.. WOw..👏👏👏👏👏

Brilliant Chapter !! SO amazingly written👏👏👏
Your Dialogues win over my heart everytime!! How you can be so talented!! Love you Sherni.. You are awesome👏👏
This is one of my Favourite Stories, I love it to the core!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Akdha convo was dreamy!! Loved it!!
Thanks for such an awesome story !! Love you 🤗🤗🤗
Edited by PrincessNany - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow,nice one.loved it..do continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Az3003

Amazing update!! I loved it👏👏👏 The way Jalal made Ruqs apologise to Jodha I was so happy!! Finally that witch was taught a lesson😳😳😳 Can't wait for your next update sugar😛.. Keep up the great work!! You are a fantastic writer❤️

me too very happy dear...
thanks a lot😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: daisydee425

awesome update
maaza aagaya
loved the way jalal stood for jodha

thanks a lot daisyy😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Karkit

Hi...
Hw ws u??
Nice update...
Jalal insult ruk wo bhi sabke samne
poor kya kya sahna padta hai bichari ko...
Par jab tak jalal hai koi bhi kuch nahi kar sakta...
Awesum update
thanks fr pm n update soon

hey karkit...
thanks...glad you like it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sofia13

it was an Amazing update👏
I just lOve this Jalal😳
Continue sOon...

thanku sofia...
and yes my jalal is so adorable...because its my jalal...hehe😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sara2012

Good one. Word fighting me Thu so great ho.

thanku yaar...😊
thats the only thing i know quite well😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pallavvi

me too very happy dear...
thanks a lot😊

You are definitely a Fantastic, Incredible, ROmantic, Eccentric, Whimsical and breathtaking writer Pallavi My Sherni !!!ClapClapClap
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful ... 👏
U made Jalal address Jodha as Jodha n not Jodha Begum in ur this update.

Thnx a lot dear 🤗

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