SS - The First Night - Chapter 2 - Page 5. - Page 2

Lovely chapter an awesome start to your story..👍🏼.
Adham khan kidnapped jodha and jalaal comes to her rescue not as the warrior king but as a worries husband and then coming to jodha's room in the harem and waiting for her just to make sure if she is doing fine I loved their hug after he saved her..😊 😳.
Jodha is in denial mode about her feelings foor jalaal and he is aware of what she feels for him very interesting..
Plzz pm me when u update next..😊

it's fantastic just like ur peac of offering os.I hope you make this into short story. thank for this. you are really good at this-plzzz pm me when you update.

Awesum update
do pm me nxt time n update soon

Awesome SS dear!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ Really loved the first part.❤️ 😳
Jalal's anger after reading the letter was a pure treat to watch. 😳
Gosh that Aadham is really crazy!! 😲 😡 😆 Loved how Jalal finished him off!! 😆 But Ab MA ka kya hoga?! 😕 😆 Uske reactions bhi dekhne hai mujhe! 😉 😳 😆
My most fav scene has to be When Jodha hugs him from behind and then He turns and hug her back. ❤️ 😳 Purely Amazing yaar!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ I loved that scene alot.❤️ 😳
And Now Jodha trying to fight with her feelings and yet not realized that She is in love with her husband...I loved how Akbar backed out coz He didn't wanted to make Jodha uncomfortable and how He understands Jodha totally, (just like Ruqu understand him 😆 )Her every feeling and expression is perfectly understood by him. 😊 ❤️ 😳
So He finally is making her realize and will make her confess too!!Wow Now I can't wait for next part!!! 😳
Pls Continue Soon and PM me pls if possible!! 😊 😳 😳


P.S.:-I'm a big fan of your OS on Akdha:-A Night of peace offerings. 😳 I really love that one alot and to the core of My heart.❤️
Pls if possible,I request you to write a Next Part-Ending part to it Bcoz It looks incomplete somewhere or I better say I'm too greedy to read more of that OS.😳 😆

loved reading your story..can't wait for the second chapter!

Amazing. No words to say. Very nice 👏

nice start.. Continue soon dear..

It is so beautiful... and I can see something very much like this transpiring in the serial a few months from now...😳

arggghhh AK i so hate him...😡

Very well written...I loved it!