SS - The First Night - Chapter 2 - Page 5.

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Tahniat Ahmad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Awesome yaar!
Update soon!
Will be waiting for it

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kanika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

superb .plz update really soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Tahniat Ahmad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Okay okay first I'd like to say that I'm really happy to be te first one to comment.
Yaar wat a nice piece of writing. Jalal was di confident that Jodha loved him. He was so happy.
I'm super happy aftering reading this ss. Did a great work dear. U should write more often. Would love reading it..

Awesome awesome awesome update... ⭐️

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Absoluv

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Nicely done dear...enjoyed it...

waiting for a true, strong, passionate love story of JA to start in the show...😉

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Hey it was a lovely chapter..
Jalaal's determination to make jodha realise her feelings about him and she does realise it just a week and all the determination of not seeing his face goes out of the window that's the charm of jalaal..😃.
The confession was lovely jalaal understands jodha pretty well without words communicated he understands her feelings.. Well written..👍🏼
But why did you end it sooo early wanted to read more..😔

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Yoga priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Ur SS is added in gallery plz check...

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Ayesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

This is it...👍🏼

Awesome...👏

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Kritika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Gr8 update
jodha waiting 4 akbar n then angry
n last say there feeling of love ws superb
love it
thanks 4 pm

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Jaisoif

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Omg loved it, made my heart beat faster with every line, so beautiful and as I read this I imagined, in my crazy over AkDha head, them actually saying these things, made my whole day now I can sleep peacefully, please update soon!!

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