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Arya

@Iheartpancakes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: ashpat
Congratulations for becoming a aunt!!!
I really love this story of urs. It's so different from all other stories I have read. I like how they are friends from beginning and love each other. I cannot wait to read more. plzzz pm me when u update.

Thanks you! I wanted mine story to be a little different from the usual and stand out, I'll you when I update :)

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Arya

@Iheartpancakes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Annarichard

Awww sucha cute name :)
you write really well. I love reading your updates :) so update soon and Congratulations once again!!!!!

Thank you! I chose the name so it has to be cute and adorable 😉, I am going to try to update either today or tomorrow. My class was working in the computer lab today and all the lights went off, I didn't save my work yet so I have to restart. I was almost done, my teacher says it's still due on the same time tomorrow. The update might come a little slow

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Arya

@Iheartpancakes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Az3003
Sorry!! I had been busy with exams and couldn't comment... I loved this chapter!! The flashbacks are too cute and I love how you made Jalal and Ruqaiyya friends and gave Ruqaiyya her own lovestory👏

You are an amazing writer🤗And congratulations from the bottom of my heart on becoming an Aunt🤗

You are amazing... Keep it up!!❤️

It's alright, how'd your exams go? Thank you! I wanted to show my version of Ruqaiyya, and I always liked her, but not as they show her in the serial.
Thanks 😃

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Arya

@Iheartpancakes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: KDR81
Congrats Dear!!!👏

Thank you :)

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philantus01

@philantus01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

heartiest congratulation to u n ur family...👏👏

ur update was amazing...😉😉

i guess its high tym ...unable 2 c deir pain😭😭

pls dnt separate dem frm each oda...😭😭

want dem to meet 🤗 🤗

thnks for d update 🤗 🤗 🤗

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Arya

@Iheartpancakes

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Chapter Six, There You Are

Jodha's Pov

Screaming could be heard as I woke up.

"You can't do this!"

"I have to"

"But he's a Mughal!"

"I have heard of many praises of his kindness"

"Have you seen her?" There was a short pause. "No you don't, because you know it's your fault that she's like this and your too much of a coward to face what you've done"

"I did what was best!"

"Who are you? Are you even her father?"

"I am a king before I am a father, I have to do what is best for my kingdom"

"And look where that's gotten us" loud footsteps could be heard as the last word was uttered.

I tried to close my eyes to sleep again, but I couldn't. I had a feeling like something important was happening, I felt hopeful for the first time in years. Eventually I slipped into sleep, only to be awoken by my mother an hour later.

"Jodha" she said with a small smile that didn't reach her eyes. "Your marriage has been fixed"

Jala's Pov

"Do you think I did the right thing" I asked Rukaiyya as we sat on one of the many benches in the garden.

"I have a good feeling about your decision"she paused "but I think you should meet her before making any big decisions."

"Do they allow that there?" I asked confused.

"Sort of, you see the others reflection in water."

"Would I be able to talk to her?"

"Maybe if you asked"

"Soldiers" I said loudly to alert the soldiers standing on the sides of the garden.

"Yes my king" they said as they stood infront of me.

"Send a message to Amber that I wish to see the princess and talk to her"

"Yes my king" they said before marching away.

"what if this is a horrible decision?" I asked looking forward, i had a habit of thinking the worst. "What if this ruins her life and mine?"

"you'll have to hope it won't" she answered simply.

i nodded in reply

"Do you still love her?" She asked referring to Punandavati (Jodha)

"I never stopped," I said looking at the red roses. "But it's time I move on"

"If you're sure" she said before standing up and walking towards her chambers.

Rukaiyya's Pov

I smiled as I walked back to my chamber. I had heard many praises of Jodha's beauty and kindness, I had a feeling like she'd be perfect for him. No matter how much he hated to admit it he needed someone, he needed someone who would be there for him like Abdul is there for me.

a light kiss on my cheek broke my train of thoughts.

"There you are"

Jodha's Pov

A week had pasted since the news of my marriage being set had spread around the castle, everyone was acting odd. Mother wouldn't look me in the eye when she talked to me, everyone looked at me with a strange pity.

"i am such a horrible sister" Sukanya cried to me.

"no you aren't" i said try to comfort her.

"this is all my fault, i could have stopped this"

"stopped wh-"

"Jodha are you ready?" my mother cut me off.

"yes" i said as I stood up.

Mother walked beside me until we reached the chair i would sit at. I sat down and looked around the room, before settling my eyes on the water below.

Jala's Pov

this first thing i noticed when i walked into the castle was the look of pure disdain and hatred on everyone's faces. No matter how much they tried to conceal it with fake smiles, their eyes showed their true feelings.

"shahenshahji," one of Jodha's brothers choked out "come this way."

He guided me to a room full of people, my eyes roamed around the room till they settled to a single person in a green and gold, she stuck out. She drowned out all the hatred in the room without having to do anything.

Jodha's Pov

The sound of foot steps entered the room, shushing the chattering. Something felt different. My eyes looked up carefully through my dupatta.

Sorry it took me so long to post this. I know this chapter is sucky, but i wanted to update as quick as i could. Please comment and like 😃

If you want a pm for the next chapter like this one.

Edited by Iheartpancakes - 11 years ago

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SShreShthA

@SShreShthA

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Hey dear its really auwsome... Fab update...
Nw finally they r abt to meet...
In ur ff I dont find any kind of reason of hatred among akdha so after they meet will their love journey would start...?? Its a different thing...
Really excited...

Very beautifully written...
Plz continue soon and pm mei

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puppylover101

@puppylover101

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

i loved it! update soon and Pm me

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Arya

@Iheartpancakes

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: SShreShthA
Hey dear its really auwsome... Fab update...
Nw finally they r abt to meet...
In ur ff I dont find any kind of reason of hatred among akdha so after they meet will their love journey would start...?? Its a different thing...
Really excited...

Very beautifully written...
Plz continue soon and pm mei

thank you 😊

They wont hate each other, and i am not saying anything about their love journey, i'll update as quick as i can. if you want a pm could you please like the chapter before, when i send pm i send it to the people who liked the chapter before. Its easier if everything's together.