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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
awww- they r so sad. but i liked the letter especially about if ur happiness is in forgetting me then forget me and don't let people control u.
thanks for updating. plzz pm me when u do.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
All the parts were mindblowing
Pls adde in ur Pm list and do pm me
Cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
I loved the update! It was amazing, I really like the letter and why did you spend so much time on moti? Is she going to play an important part in the story or you just did that randomly? Please update soon, and Pm me!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Chapter Four, Broken

Years past for the two without meeting each other.
Jalal grew more brutal, and shut out people from his life, even badi ammi. But on the inside he was a different person, a kinder and nicer person. He just didn't want to show it.
Jodha perfected her fake smile, her fake laugh. She became a new person, but somewhere on the inside the true Jodha was trying to break out. At nights she would cry herself to sleep remembering Jalal. No matter how much both of them tried to forget the other, they couldn't. They tried to accept that they'd never be together, but they couldn't.

Jala's Pov
"What's wrong?" Asked Ruqaiya as we walked down one of the many halls in the palace.
"Nothing" I said while keeping my focus on the ground.
"Your thinking about her, aren't you?" She said, making it sound like more of a statement.
I knew who she meant when she said her, Punandavati (Jodha). I hadn't seen her in years, but I could remember her stunning face and soothing voice perfectly. I could remember every pointless argument, every witty remark.
"Maybe your love was not meant to be, but that does not make it any less of a love"
"It was never a real love, a real love needs more than one person" I said, I knew the truth and I wasn't letting anyone bring my hopes up to crash them down again.
"Did you ever stop and think that she might have actually loved you back"
"That's impossible, that letter clearly showed that she only thought of me as a friend. "
"Have you ever thought that maybe that letter didn't end your love story, but changed it?"
"It did change it" I said before looking her in the eye "it killed it"
"My friend you need to be more trusting of fate, it will bring you to where you are meant to be"
"Fate can not do everything for me, if I simply relied on it we would all be dead"
She gave me a slight smile " but at least you'd be alive"
"Salam shahenshah" she said with a smile before walking away.

Jodha's Pov
"Your turn Jodha" said sukanya with a smile.
I tried to give her my best smile and played my turn.
"Jodha!" She exclaimed "you always make that move"
"It's the only one I know"
She looked me dead in the eye "What happened to you Jodha? Don't try to make up an excuse, you haven't been the same since that day. You may have fooled everyone and even yourself but not me."
"What are you talking about?" I said trying not to look at her, she had grow wiser with the years and as my mother said she is the reflection of who I use to be. Except she was blunt and spoke her mind, a trait that often had gotten her into trouble.
"Please Jodha, tell me"
I rose up to leave but she held my hand.
"I can't handle seeing you this broken," she started to tear up "I want my sister back"
I gave her a smile "she never left"
She stood up from the soft cushioned chair "your wrong, she died and left a corpse behind"
Her footsteps echoed in the halls as I looked at the spot she sat.
She was right, I wasn't Jodha anymore.
Tears started to flow from my face as I collapse to the ground.
i saw moti at the door with a glass of water in her hand, the glass hit the ground as soon as she saw me. she looked stricken and for a second she was frozen.ran to me and crouched next to me "Princess what's wrong?"
"I'm broken," I said while try to hold back my tears "I'm too broken to be fixed"

Little did these lairs know fates plan. All the dominoes were place and ready, all that was left was a single push.

Sorry this is so short, I'll update again soon.
If you want a Pm for the next chapter please like this one.
Edited by Iheartpancakes - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Nice update...
Read all parts awesum...
Do pm me n update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
woww very nice update... fabulous... love to see that they still love n remember eachother and with same passion even after so many years...
plz unhe jaldi milaona... want to know hw u hv plan that...
continue soon and plz with a bigger update and do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
awesome upt
waiting 4 them to meet
plz cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
OMG! You updated so fast, I loved the chapter even though it's so sad. Update quick and pm me!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
read al d parts in one go...
amazing update...
beautifully penned down their concern,emotions ,inner turmoil,etc...
u r an amazing writer
do continue soon...would love to read more on dis...
if possible pls PM me d next tym u update

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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Amazing update dear :)
Absolutely loved reading it. Please continue soon!!

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