OS: Wedding Night - Page 12

Originally posted by: luvera

The situations and emotions that accompany the characters here are soo different from what I am used to... I feel a slight disconnect with the story which I attribute to the fact that this a tale based on wholly different characters than what I am used to...

It was a good story but I think I miss your sass that is so very typical of you..

I think I figured out what I feel missing... I have always liked the banter of your characters... I find your take on the he said she said very refreshing and innovative..

Originally posted by: sonia_1

This is a brilliant piece Donna 👏👏

How beautifully you have managed to capture their emotions.👍🏼

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

Wow 👏 nicely written!!

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

OMG ... ur writing is out of the world ... plz continue ... i would like to read more ... what happens next .. m so much eager to knw what will happen next ...if u have updated then plz kindly pm me ...😃

I would love to read more ...

thank u - varsha😳

Originally posted by: LizBennett

<font color="#006600">This took me a long ass time to write so hope you all make it worth it. It wasn't a piece of cake...</font>

<font color="#990000">Thought asses...tended to be rounded...unless u r reffs.ing to the ass..inine...kind...</font>

<font color="#990000">But long..?? Pray tell..😉</font>

<font color="#990000">Cracking up my ribs here...sniggering away...</font>

<font color="#990000">Good to see a whipper lasher of a tale...Betty boo...feisty, gutsy, and fun...</font>

<font color="#990000">Yeps, love u 2...</font>

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

thank you.
I dunno what cloud, star, or galaxy you laughed your way to but GURL, come back down to earth. you have a strange sense of humor but I welcome you because I am cool like that. 😉