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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: -ForeverYours-
How point point of views. Like a he said she said version of the same story.

correct me if I am wrong, you are saying take this scene of their wedding night and write it from different points of view?

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Mrs. Sidharth Malhotra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

correct me if I am wrong, you are saying take this scene of their wedding night and write it from different points of view?

It was supposed to say "How about point of views?" I was on my phone. Sorry.

And yeah, that's exactly what I'm saying.

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: -ForeverYours-

It was supposed to say "How about point of views?" I was on my phone. Sorry.

And yeah, that's exactly what I'm saying.

a similar thought- roshomon- sounds really tempting but since I already wrote from the perspective of a third person narrator (who the reader assumes is truthful) there might be a problem.

right now it's all hypothetical. let's see if I can make it work when I put pen to paper.

great idea though.

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Mrs. Sidharth Malhotra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Let me translate that for you world:

WE'RE GETTING PARTS TWO AND THREE! PAR-TAY!

OOH-WOO-OOH-WOO!

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: -ForeverYours-
Let me translate that for you world:
WE'RE GETTING PARTS TWO AND THREE! PAR-TAY!

OOH-WOO-OOH-WOO!

OH HELL NO woman!

That is NOT what I said. I said I am thinking of writing a roshomon like you suggested but I am not sure this plot will do. i.e. there will be different perspectives, maybe with this plot or maybe not.

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Mrs. Sidharth Malhotra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

OH HELL NO woman!
That is NOT what I said. I said I am thinking of writing a roshomon like you suggested but I am not sure this plot will do. i.e. there will be different perspectives, maybe with this plot or maybe not.

Once again world, let me translate that for you:

I love my Shwetzy way too much, I shall be writing a part 2 and 3. Fikar not!

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

^gaaahhh I give up.

p.s. keep up your smug remarks for another minute and you have timeout out missy!

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Mrs. Sidharth Malhotra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

https://i.chzbgr.com/maxW500/3794950144/h443CD370/

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Kesha_H.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

you live and you learn😉

well yea 😆

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luvera

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

The situations and emotions that accompany the characters here are soo different from what I am used to... I feel a slight disconnect with the story which I attribute to the fact that this a tale based on wholly different characters than what I am used to...

It was a good story but I think I miss your sass that is so very typical of you..

I think I figured out what I feel missing... I have always liked the banter of your characters... I find your take on the he said she said very refreshing and innovative..

Edited by luvera - 12 years ago

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