||~~*RuqLal OS: My Insecurities*~~||

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Posted: 12 years ago
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MY INSECURITIES

Ruqaiya was shocked to listen that Jalal has married a Rajput princess it should not be shock for as he has married many girls but Ruqaiya could sense something different for Jodha.

The wedding happened in Rajput tradition even Jalal never cared for and religion but he respected didn't change Jodha masab even and on that a mandir in Jalal Khana...???

Thoughts came in her mid yeh kya hai kya Jalal ke dil mein Jodha ke liiye kuch alag feelings hai thoughts engaged her mind.

Once she saw Jodha and Jalal fight but Jalal's eyes were so intense even while fighting she could read Jalal's mind his eyes told he its not lust for Jodha its love.

Days turned in to weeks weeks into months and months into a year and Jodha gave the news of her pregnancy the whole Mughal Sulnant was Ruqaiya was not happy with this news but tears rolled down her eyes because she couldn't even bear a child to Jalal. She even tried to kill Jodha's child but failed.

Soon Jodha gave birth to a baby boy 'Hum iska kya nam kya rakhe Ruqaiya' said Jalal. Ruqaiya was shocked to hear this 'Haan jiji bataiye na' said Jodha Ruqaiya felt ashamed how cruel was she that she wanted to kill the child but Jodha never even thought a bad for her with a teary voice she said 'Salim kaisa hoga Shehnsha' 'Mashallah kitna hasen nam hai yeh' Jalal said and went Jodha and took the baby from Jodh a tear ran down from Shehnsha's eyes . He offered the baby to Ruqaiya she held Salim carefully in her hands and kissed his fore head and returned the baby to Jodha 'Salim vo aapki Badi aami thi aapko pata hai' said Jodha smiling on Salim.

Ruqaiya ran from there full in tears reached her room. Remembered all the beautiful moments spend with Jalal. Jodha knocked the door and said 'Kya hum andar aa sakte hain' 'Humari behn ko humare kamre mein aane ki ijazat nehi chaiye hoti.' said Ruqaiya rubbing her tears. 'Humneaapse bahut kuch cheena hai Maharaj ke dil mein aapki jagah, Malikaie hind ka darja aur humare karn aapki kook (lap) suni hai.' said Jodha 'Nehi aisa kuch nehi hai Jodha aap humari behn jaisi hain aapko kuch bhi kehne koi zaroorat hai.' said Ruquiya 'Chahe hum Maharaj ke dil par raj karte aur aap unke dil pe aur yeh jagah koi aapse nehi chin sakta.' saying this they hug eachother friendly.

*THE END*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW!! wat an awsum story uve written!! seriously i really luvd jodha nd ruqqaiyas bond :')
such an emotional update :) congratulations and best of luck
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks...😃😃😃
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Originally posted by: Annarichard

WOW!! wat an awsum story uve written!! seriously i really luvd jodha nd ruqqaiyas bond :')
such an emotional update :) congratulations and best of luck


Thanks alot...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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What a different take on the relationship between Ruqaiya and Jodha. Nice to see a humble Jodha and a Ruqaiya that realizes she has no need to be jealous as she will have a hand in raising the child.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Arya dear 🤗

I loved the way you described Ruqaiya's insecurities 👏

I don't know why some people can never understand the fact that " you cannot NEVER take someone's place in your beloved's heart, you have to MAKE your own place in thier heart ".

Ruqaiya can be described as Night in the Jalal's life, where as Jodha can be described as Bright Light,which leads to achieve new dreams. But most important fact is you cannot leave without them. 😳

Awesome update and please continue your work. We all love your work. 😳

Love

Priya

PS Added your work in Fanfiction Center.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: yoga23priya

Hey Arya dear 🤗


I loved the way you described Ruqaiya's insecurities 👏

I don't know why some people can never understand the fact that " you cannot NEVER take someone's place in your beloved's heart, you have to MAKE your own place in thier heart ".

Ruqaiya can be described as Night in the Jalal's life, where as Jodha can be described as Bright Light,which leads to achieve new dreams. But most important fact is you cannot leave without them. 😳

Awesome update and please continue your work. We all love your work. 😳

Love

Priya

PS Added your work in Fanfiction Center.


Thanks Priya...😃😃😃

How true I don't know why EK doesn't tries understand this she always makes her vamps snatching place of of lead in someone's heart...🤢🤢🤢


And surely Jodha will be a bright light in Jalal's life...😳😳😳

Will think about continuing this if I get good reviews...😊😊😊
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Thanks dear...😃😃😃
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Originally posted by: SonyaBlade

What a different take on the relationship between Ruqaiya and Jodha. Nice to see a humble Jodha and a Ruqaiya that realizes she has no need to be jealous as she will have a hand in raising the child.



Thanks...😳😳

I thought that I should write this before Ruqaiya turns evil...😆😆😆

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