SS-'JODA AKBAR LOVE JOURNEY' CHP16 PG37 UPDTD SEPT 22nd - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was awesome! Loved it. Happy to see that Jalal did not force Jodha. Awesome precap! N thankx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashvikfever

It was awesome! Loved it. Happy to see that Jalal did not force Jodha. Awesome precap! N thankx for the pm


Thanks
Akbar is not that bad guy to force 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
m ur new reader...😊
both d chapters were beautifully written👏
luved ur description about jodha akbar relation ⭐️👏😛
plsss...pm me nxt time
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
superb update...jodha and akbar scene was great...and thnks for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
loved it please do continue it :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome chapter anisha...just loved it..very nice👏👏...i loved the way they have started bonding
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 3


JALAL - everyday he used to come WENEVER he is free to joda haram and used to spend time with her ...Day by day his love for joda is increasing ...he even realized his love towards her .he is waiting for joda's acceptance .

JODA - even she started liking JALAL and is ready to accept him as her husband but never expressed her love to JALAL ...

JALAL - joda and jalal, they used to walk in da gardens and talk in da evenings and sometimes they used to have sword fights .they even used to play chess in JALAL's harem .

2 MONTHS PASSED LIKE THIS AND THEY BECAME GOOD FRIENDS AND CAME TO KNOW MUCH ABOUT EACH OTHER.

JALAL - he arranged a party for Rajputs ...kind of inviting for lunch

JODA - she plans to prepare food that day and goes to bawarchikana along with her maids ..and starts preparing food.

MAHA MANGA - she comes over there and looks at everything . She gets angry on joda but doesn't react as everyone is there .

JALAL - he is in his haram looking after some political matters

JODA - she is about to enter JALAL's harem and she finds maha manga on da way

MAHA MANGA - she stops joda and starts shouting at her " how dare u joda ?? Bawarchikane pe thumaari kabza " 😡

JODA - yeh app kya KEH rahe hai ...kabza !!😲 Yeh tho har pathni ka saubhagyy hotha hai

MAHA MANGA - how can u tell ur wife of JALAL wen u don't give him his right as husband on u ...

JODA - yeh aap kya bolthe jaaraha hai 🥱

JALAL - he hears da voices and comes out and watch both of them from behind da pillar ..." yeh kya ho raha hai"

MAIDS - even they watch both MAHA manga and joda

MAHA MANGA - don't act smart joda ...".Shaadi thab mukammal hoga jab aulaad wajood mein Ayega ... Aulaad tho thab Ayega jab JALAL thume chuyega "

JALAL - he gets shocked at her words 😲

JODA - tears start flowing down her eyes ...she stares at JALAL from behind and walks away from there ...goes to her harem and sit on bed and cry

JALAL - he shouts " badi ammi 😡 U can't talk to joda like that ...don't forget that she is my wife and malika Hindustan hai .."

MAHA MANGA - she gets scared at JALAL's anger and tell " JALAL maaf kijiye but am so worried about ur relationship so I told like that .. I have seen u coming out of her harem on da day of ur first night which made me so worried "

JALAL - wajah Jo bhi ho u don't have righ to question my queen ... She can stay as she wishes and she can go anywhere in this palace ...Jo bhi mera hai usi par joda ka bhi hakh bantha hai 😡

MAHA MANGA - Hume maaf kijiye JALAL .. I'll go now and apologise to joda ...she goes into joda harem

JALAL - he follows her

MAHA MANGA - joda am sorry ..I shouldn't have spoken to u like that . But my love and worry towards JALAL made me speak like that ..

JODA - it's ok ammi Jaan ... I can understand ...aap kuch galath nahi kaha ...I deserve it ...am a bad wife ...

JALAL - joda don't tell like that ... The situation in which u married me is different ... I can understand it

MAHA MANGA - she tells sorry and leaves da place .inside she boils with anger and humility .

JALAL - he sits beside joda and tell " joda don't blame urself ...ur a good wife and am happy to have u as my wife "

JODA - she hugs JALAL suddenly and cry

JALAL - he gets shocked but feels happy and embraces her


JODA - am a fool not to understand u at first .. But I got to know . Ur a kind person ... I LOVE U

JALAL - he feels out of world and holds her shoulders and ask " kya kaha aap "

JODA - she realises wat she said and bites her tongue and gets up and make a move

JALAL - he stops her by holding her and ask " joda Phir Se kaho"

JODA - she turns to the other side and tell ...hum aap Se bahuth pyaar karthe ..par KEH nahi paaya ...

JALAL - he couldn't control himself . He is out of this world with happiness . He hugs her from Back and tell " hum aap Se behinda mohabbath karthe joda ..I have been waiting to hear this from u "

JODA - she feels shy and lowers her head and leans like that towards JALAL's chest ...

JALAL - he hugs her and closes his eyes and feels the moment . He finds eternity .

RUKAYYAA - she comes into joda harem to inform about the guests arrival and finds both of them like that and is about to leave but a pot falls down

JALAL - he watches RUKAYYA and tell " RUKAYYA aap yaha aayi aur ja rahi hai "

JODA - she moves away from JALAL and propers her goongat

RUKAYYA - woh hum bathane Aaya KI SAB log athidi kaksh mein aagaya

JALAL - yes am coming ... He leaves harem ... While going he turns back and looks at joda and smiles to himsel and leaves

RUKAYYA - she to leaves da place

JODA - she gets ready and attends da lunch and by evening everyone leaves .

JALAL - he is with his ministers discussing about political issues , but his mind is around joda .he sends her msg asking her to wait in his harem at sunset

JODA - she reads the letter and goes to his harem and wait for him

JALAL - he enters da harem and finds joda sitting on his bed and feels happy and touches her from behind

JODA - she stands and smiles ...

JALAL - ill show u something today joda ...

JODA - woh kya hai

JALAL - he points out towards sunset ... Sun rays all in his room and the room gets illuminated

JODA - she walks around and looks at the beautiful sigh in room and gets mesmerized

JALAL - he holds her hands and confess his love to her " joda ur my first and last love ...I love u more than anything in this world "

JODA - even I love u more than anything else ...

JALAL - he hugs her and starts kissing her on her cheeks forehead and collar bone ...

JODA - sh feels shy and turn around

JALAL - he turns her face and kiss her on her nose and start smooching her

JODA - she starts responding to JALAL and puts her hand on his chest and starts kissing him back

JALAL - he lifts her and put her on bed . Curtains close and lights go off ... That night JALAL makes love to joda ... She becomes his completely . Two souls and bodies become one .

EARLY IN THE MORNING .

JALAL - he turns around in sleep and puts his hand beside and find the bed empty . He wakes up and sits on da bed and remembers his last night and smiles to himself .

JODA - she is in puja Mandir doing her routine Pooja

JALAL - he gets up from da bed and wears his dress and goes to joda harem and finds her praying . He smiles and goes back to his harem and takes bath and gets ready and come out

JODA - she comes with AARTHI plate to JALAL's harem and wait for him

JALAL - he finds joda and takes AARTHI and puts sindhoor in her mang

JODA - she recollects last night scenes and feels shy and doesn't dare to look into his eyes

JALAL - he understands it and raises her head and kisses on her forehead " ab hum Se kya sharmana joda , am ur husband"

GUARD - he comes with a Message asking JALAL to attend darbar soon as there is some political problem going on

JALAL - am coming ... U go

GUARD - jee hukum


JODA - kya hua SHEHENSHA

JALAL - kuch nahi ...a political issue ...he pats her cheeks and leave to darbar



PRECAP -

Story after 6 monnths ...
JALAL and Joda love story goes on and people understand his love as king and give him Akbar title

JALAL that is AKBAR FROM now gets a good news from joda and goes mad with happiness after hearing it and lifts and swings joda


Edited by puggyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi



awesome chapter anisha...just loved it..very nice👏👏...i loved the way they have started bonding


Thanks gargi 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Sorry dear for reserving late 😳

Akdha consumed ❤️ 😳☺️

Awww meri rock star ki band bajadi Jalal ne 😡 😆

Waiting for your update 😳
Edited by yoga23priya - 12 years ago

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