SS-'JODA AKBAR LOVE JOURNEY' CHP16 PG37 UPDTD SEPT 22nd - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Can't wait for the first night! Thankx for the pm! And hey puggy r u from Pavitra Rishta forum?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Puggyy you are here!
I am really happy.
i liked the chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THANKS EVERYONE FOR LIKING IT AND PASSING COMMENTS

SORRY THAT I COULDN'T REPLY FOR EACH AND EVERY COMMENT ..AS I HAVE ASSIGNMENTS ...

THANKS TO EACH N EVERYONE WHO HAS COMMENTED 😊

THANK YOU
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update...pls pm me next time...
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awesome chapter anisha...very interesting...just loved it...continue soon
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CHAPTER 2


JODA - she feels Happy after seeing Mandir in her harem ..

Hameeda BANU - she comes to joda harem and tells to her .." joda I know how u must be feeling ...JALAL won war and forcily married u🥱 ..but my son was not like that due to circumstances he became cold hearted ...he was 10 years old wen his father died and he came to throne ...🥱bhairam khan was his guru ...he is his mentor..they waged only wars from then ...there was no time for JALAL to enjoy his childhood ..that is the reason why he is like that ..but trust me he is a good person by nature "

JODA - She listens to her conversation and nods head

HAMEEDA BANU - tume kuch chahiye tho muje bey hichak bathaona ...hum aap ke anmmi jaisa hai ...koi bhi pareshaani ho muje batha sakthe

JODA - she feels happy😊 after hearing that from her mouth and for her friendly behaviour ..." dhanyavaad ammi Jaan "

HAMIDA BANU - she smiles 😊 And pats joda cheeks and tell " u must be tired joda , take some rest ..rukayya n salima will come and meet u in da evening " saying this she leaves .

JODA - she stares at roof and falls asleep for 3 hours ...

MOTHI BAI - she comes to Agra along with joda . She wakes up joda

JODA - patha nahi chala kab aakh lag gayi ... She freshen ups and goes into balcony and see the palace form there ... She could see variety of birds in a cage and rabbits running here and there in lawn ..

NEEMADH - he is a gay ... Boy dresses like a Muslim girls .." Salam Mallika hum NEEMADH hai ..."

JODA - Salam

Nazima - she is another Muslim maid for joda in the harem . Mallika Aaliya begum rukayya padaar raha hai

RUKAYYA - she comes to joda harem ...

JODA - she smiles and greets her

RUKAYYA - she looks joda from top to bottom and smile sarcastically and greet her " tho thum ho woh Rajput rajkumari joda a baiii "

JODA - jee ha

RUKAYYA - tho thum janthe hogi hum kaun hai " SHEHENSHA ka pehla begum aur uske DIL aur Jaan "

JODA - she smiles and tell " jee "

RUKAYYA - she comes inside and looks joda harem and stares at Mandir ..." tho bitadiya mogul kila mein apne Bhagwan ko "

JODA - yeh Humara Bhagwan Sri Krishna hai

RUKHAYYA - Am not interested to know about ur god and stuff ...k u carry on ... All the best joda ...she smiles and leaves

MOTHI BAI - rajkumari ji yeh tho bade Ajeeb lagthe

JODA - shhh MOTHI Aisa nahi kehthe

MUSLIM MAIDS - they come and get ready joda for her first night on Hameeda BANU orders . They get her ready in a Muslim costume bride ...

JODA - she looks elegant and as usual very beautiful in that dress. She sits on bed and waits for JALAL .

JALAL - he is in his bath tub ...taking bath with rose water ...he thinks about joda and is so excited to meet her to night ...
He gets ready and goes to joda harem

JODA - she sits on da bed inside goongat with her head down

JALAL - he comes and sits beside her and removes her goongat and gets mesmerized at her beauty ..." Suhan alla ...pari ho thum joda " ❤️

JODA - she is still with her head down

JALAL - he touches her shoulders

JODA - she moves uncomfortably aside

JALAL - he smiles and thinks inside " joda thum chandini ho ya jannath ka noor ho " ❤️ he holds her shoulders with both his hands and hugs her and feels like jannath

JODA - she doesn't respond ,..like a statue just sits like that 🥱

JALAL - he kisses on her collar bone

JODA - she thinks about her parents and how they lost battle and all that will be going in her mind ...a tear drop falls from her eyes

JALAL - tear drop falls on JALAL's face ... He immediately looks at her face and gets up and moves away ..." yeh dukh KI wajah joda "

JODA - maaf kijiye SHEHENSHA ... Am unable to adjust TO NEW environment

JALAL - aap is Shaadi Se KUSH nahi ... Humara paas aana pasand nahi karthe

JODA - she stands up and tells " pls don't get me wrong SHEHENSHA ... For us marriage is a sacred relationship ... Till my death I'll be ur wife and obey you ...I'll do all my duties as wife . But at present am so disturbed . Am not ready for this so soon . I need time . "

JALAL - I can understand .. JALAL never loved a girl against her wish and never gonna do it ...I'll come to you only when ur ready for that and wen u accept me whole heatedly ...saying this he is about to leave

JODA - SHEHENSHA ji pls don't misunderstand me ...am just ..JALAL cuts her in between

JALAL - I know joda ...u need not tell ...everything happened so fast ...ur married to a Muslim which u never expected and u left ur parents and came ...everything happened so fast and suddenly ..hum samaj sakthe ...hum .ithna bhure DIL KI nahi hu joda jithna thum samajthe ho

JODA -she stammers and tell nahi SHEHENSHA ji aap DIL ke bahuth ache ho

JALAL - he turns around and stares at jodha

JODA - mera mathlab u accepted my conditions and arranged a Mandir in my harem ...am very thankfull for that

JALAL - he looks at Mandir ...

JODA - thanks for everything ...thanks for understanding me

JALAL - he smiles at joda and leaves her harem

JODA - she stares at leaving JALAL

MAHA MANGA and AMEEDA BANU - they both notice JALAL leaving joda harem so soon ...

MAHA MANGA - tho aakhir yeh Rajput princess JALAL to apne kareeb aane Se door rakha ... I shoud be carefull with this lady ... I can see a change in JALAL aft she came into his life ...hume saavdhan rahna chahiye aur ispe nazar rakhna padega


NEXT DAY MORNING

JALAL - he wakes up and gets ready for darbar ...while going on da way he finds joda harem and hears a bhajan n goes inside

SALIMA - she gets irritated with that bhajan and comes out

JALAL - he goes inside joda harem

JODA - she finishes her prayer looks at JALAL and gets up with AARTHI plate

JALAL - he looks her with love in his eyes ...he feels something very attracted to her ...he looks very pretty in purple n pink Lenga ...like a new bride ...

JODA - she puts AARTHI plate in front and shows how to take AARTHI to JALAL

JALAL - he does that and stares at her

JODA - sindhoor

JALAL - he stops staring at her an puts sindhoor in her maang

JODA - she gives AARTHI to all god portraits in da room and roaming here and there in da room

JALAL - he just stares at her with a smil on his face ..." joda " he calls out

JODA - she covers her face with goongat from side and stands infront of him and tell " jee SHEHENSHA ji kahiye "

JALAL - he removes goongat from her face and tell " first thing is don't cover ur face with this infront of me ...it's not necessary ..I don't want to see anything coming in front of my eyes that keeps me away from seeing u ... "

JODA - she smiles and lowers her head and tell " jee "

JALAL - wat I want to tell is if u need anything u can tell me

JODA - jee SHEHENSHA ji ... Dhanyavaadh

JALAL - he raises her head up and tell " WENEVER u talk to me look into my eyes and speak ...don't bend ur head down "

JODA - she feels shy and smiles and again looks down due to shyness ...😳

JALAL - he smiles at her shyness and loves her pretty smile ...❤️he holds her face with his hands and tell " joda look into my eyes ... "

SALIMA - she enters joda harem angrily but gets shocked looking at JALAL and joda in that position ...JALAL holding joda's face and smiling with her ... Never she saw JALAL smiling happily like that 😲 She just stares

JODA - as there is no way to escape ...she looks into his eyes and tell " jee SHEHENSHA ji "

JALAL - he notices salima and tell " andar aana salima ,rukh kyu gayi "

JODA - she moves away from JALAL and stand aside and smile at salima ...

JALAL - joda yeh salima hai ...hamaara doosra begum ...aur salima yeh amer KI rajkumari joda BAI hai ...inse milo

JODA - she greets salima and salima greets her back

JALAL - aap dono baathe keejiye ..hum chaltha hai ...hume darbar ke liye Jana hai ...While leaving joda's dupatta get struck at JALAL's dress near his chest region ...he doesn't notice it start moving ...

JODA - she also doesn't notice but as JALAL started moving her dupatta gets dragged ...then she notices it and shouts in hurry " SHEHENSHA ji rukhiye "

JALAL - he gets surprised and turns around and tell " kya hua joda "

SALIMA - she watches it angrily ...

JODA - woh hamari dupatta ...she points towards his chest

JALAL - he notices it and smiles and tell " shayad aapka dupatta Hume chodna nahi Chahtha hai ... "

SALIMA - yeh SHEHENSHA ko kya ho Gaya Aisa baath karre ...

JALLA - he removes and tell " joda will u come to darbar with me ..ur new here , u will get a chance to know about moguls "

JODA - Jo aap teek samje SHEHENSHA ji

SALIMA - she literally gets mad at this new avatar of JALAL ...so called very polite and soft side ...

JALAL - will u come salima ???

SALIMA - no am fine ... She takes their leave

JODA - she goes to darbar along with JALAL ...


PRECAP -

JALAL and joda become good friends in 2 months ...and their silent love story and romance


Edited by puggyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Wowieee this is the first FF, which I read about Jodha and Akbar that Jodha accepted him wholeheartedly 👏⭐️👏

I really loved the way you described Hamida and Jodha's bonding. 😳

Both Queens are Jealous of Jodha 🤪 🤣

Ufff about Jodha and Akbar No words dear...❤️

Truly Amazing Update and really loved it 👏 ⭐️ 👏

This is for you


Priya
Edited by yoga23priya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Lovely Update, Dear.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: yoga23priya

Wowieee this is the first FF, which I read about Jodha and Akbar that Jodha accepted him wholeheartedly 👏⭐️👏


I really loved the way you described Hamida and Jodha's bonding. 😳

Both Queens are Jealous of Jodha 🤪 🤣

Ufff about Jodha and Akbar No words dear...❤️

Truly Amazing Update and really loved it 👏 ⭐️ 👏

This is for you


Priya


Thank u 😊
Nice flowers ..liked it ...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hmmm...

Loved everyone jealoused by Jodha...

Hamu Begum and Jodha scene was nice...

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