SS-'JODA AKBAR LOVE JOURNEY' CHP16 PG37 UPDTD SEPT 22nd - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago
wesome.. Loved it to the core...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow- i had been waiting for this update since long. THank you so much. I really love ur ff- it's so unique with the storyline. awesome. please pm me when u update next time.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aanchal_c

why another wife,arent 3 enough...


Hahah that was the last wife
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pari_pooja

hey!
awesome update dear
i just loved it
salim is very cute
please do continue soon
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Thanks 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
CHAPTER 15


KAMALAVATHI - she arranges a Pooja and invites EVRYONE

JODA - she also attends Pooja with RUKAYYA and Hameeda

KAMALAVATHI - hope lord bhavani grants me a child atleast this year ...

MAID - don't worry begum ji , god will bless u with a child

JODA - she hears there conversation

MAID 1 - I feel sorry for begum KAMALAVATHI

MAID 2 - y r u telling like that .. ??

MAID 1 - bacha tho thab hoga jab SHEHENSHA unke paas Roj Ayega ...he comes only once in a week ... And wen he goes for politicall issues out of Agra ...he will stay for weeks outside

MAID 2 - yes even that's true ...wen he is in Agra he spends most of his time with begum joda and kids... And RUKAYYA begum

MAID 1 - alla show some mercy on this queen and grant a child

JODA - she accidentally over hears maids conversation and feel they had a point . Also feels a bit guilty ...

HAMEEDA - joda aaj hum dono bachon ko humare saath le chaltha ...it's been so long since I have spent time with my grand children

JODA - jee ammi Jaan ...

RUKAYYA - ammi Jaan I'll also join u

HAMEEDA - she leaves with RUKAYYA and kids

JODA - she goes to Akbar room to meet him

AKBAR - he is busy looking at some map ...

JODA - she proceeds towards him

AKBAR - hearing the Payal sound he understands it's joda and keep the map aside " tho Humara begum sayaba ko pursath mili apne shauhar Se Milne ke liye "

JODA - she smiles and sits beside him

AKBAR - wat happened ?? Ur looking dull ?? Do u need anything ?? Bache kaha hai ..?

JODA - woh dono ammi Jaan ke paas hai . I just came to talk to u

AKBAR - Achaa bathao kya Baath hai

JODA - she explains everything about wat she has seen and heard

AKBAR - kisne gusthak kiya Aisi Ba'ath karne ka ...kaun hai woh daasi , hum use dandh denge

JODA - aap shaanth ho jaye . Wats wrong in what they said

AKBAR - joda wat u wanna tell me ??

JODA - every women wishes to have a child ... So KAMALAVATHI. Also has a right to have a child

AKBAR - tho aap kehna kya Chahtha hu KI am not a good husband and not looking after her needs

JODA - she puts her hands on his chest and tell " nahi SHEHENSHA don't get me wrong , I didn't mean that way . I know ur fulfilling her wishes as husband and looking after her , I know ur a king and u get very less time to spend with family ..."

AKBAR - tho aap kehna kya Chahthe joda

JODA - how should I explain u ... Can't u give her more time SHEHENSHA ... I mean. To say try to go regularly to her ... Atleast for few months ...u spend more time with kids ... But for few months give ur time to KAMALAVATHI

AKBAR - joda everything has a right time . Some day she will also be blessed with child .

JODA - she turns towards him and tell " SHEHENSHA ji kya sahi wakth aane par and gods grant without u not going to her ...bache yuu hi Akele aurath paida nahi kar sakthe hai na , y don't u undersatnd wat am trying to tell u " she bites her tongue and turns away realizing wat she. Said

AKBAR - teek hai joda ... For 2 months I'll spend my most of time with her only ...even u have a point ...

JODA - not most of time especially nights SHEHENSHA ji

AKBAR - he smirks and tell " joda aaj aap muje bahuth hi explain karre bacha and nights ke baare mein ,do u also need one more kid 😉 "

JODA - nahi SHEHENSHA mein tho busss unke liye pooch rahi hai ...mere liye nahi

AKBAR - he smiles and holds her hands

JODA - she feels shy 😳and. Is about to go away

AKBAR - he drags her dupatta ...

JODA - CHodiye na ,Hume jaana hai

AKBAR - kyu chodu, I should always listen to u and u don't listen to me at all

JODA - she opens her mouth and turn around and tell " wen did I didn't listen to u SHEHENSHA ?? "

AKBAR - he pulls of her dupatta

JODA - she hides. Behind curtain

AKBAR - come in front of me joda ...don't hide there

JODA - then u give my dupatta I'll come

AKBAR - see ur not obeying me ...

JODA - she gets angry and come out and tell " yeh galath. Hai...wen dint I obey u "

AKBAR - he smiles and pulls her on bed and lie on top of her

JODA - she blushes and try to get her dupatta slowly searching for it on bed

AKBAR - he notices it throws away dupatta from bed

JODA - she hides her head in his chest

AKBAR - wat happened joda till now u were giving. Me lecture about how to make a baby and stuff ...ab kya hua bada sharma rahe ho

JODA - SHEHENSHA ji I ding tell u how to ...u got me wrong ...woh ...

AKBAR - he captures her lips and starts kissing her ...

JODA - she slowly responds to him and keeps her hand around his neck

AKBAR - he removes dori of her blouse ... And start proceeding further

JODA - her body is responding to his desires ...

AKBAR - he shrugged off his clothes and threw both of their clothes on ten floor

JODA - she tried to cover her nude body with blanket

AKBAR - he smirks and pulls way the blanket aside and stares at her porcelain skin ...and kisses all over her. Private. Parts❤️

JODA - she gets all goose bums ...

AKBAR - he is so lost in her beauty and kisses all over and admires her " joda thum abhi bhi dho bachon KI maa jaisa nahi lagtha hu , ur the same lady like u have been on our first union "

JODA - she blushes 😳

AKBAR - he kisses her on her nose " shall I "

JODA - she moves het thighs apart nodding him saying that she is ready ...

AKBAR - he puts his hands down her waist and makes her comfortable and he enters her with a jerk

JODA - she closes her eyes and hug him tightly ...

CURTAINS CLOSE . HOPE U GUYS KNOW WAT HAPPENS FURTHER 🤬

THE NIGHT ENDS BLISSFULLY ...WITH A GREAT PASSION OF LOVE...

AKBAR - early in the morning he wakes up and finds joda. Doing Pooja to her kaana ...a smile creeps on his lips ...

SALIM - he is knocking the door " ammi Jaan open door "

AKBAR - he immediately wakes up and wears his clothes

JODA - she opens door ...

SALIM - ammi Jann y so late in opening door , by the way y did u lock door . U never lock

JODA - who beta aise hi

SALIM - abba aap bhi yaha hai ..he jumps on akbar in excitement

AKBAR - yes beta ,he kisses him and asks had ur breakfast ..??

SALIM - not yet , ammi feeds me right ..but today she dint come to

JODA - beta mien ne Socha aap daadi jaan ke paas hai na isliye nahi aaya

SALIM - abba jaan wat is this red clour on ur neck and chest

AKBAR - he gets embarrassed to answer ...as its sindoor on joda maang ...it stuck to his skin as she slept on his chest

JODA - 😳 SALIM come with me now ...u have to eat

SALIM - but ammi woh kya tha abba jaan ke neck pe

JODA - SALIM look at there a peacock

SALIM - wow ammi today it came this way, he runs to catch it

AKBAR - he comes from behind and tell joda " yeh tho bahuth sawaal karthe hai

JODA - sheensha ji first clean that on ur neck before some one else also observes it 😳

AKBAR - he rubs it away ...😊



THANKS EVERYONE FOR LIKING AND COMMENTING THE FF. SORRY I DON'T HAVE TIME SO AM NOT ABLE TO PM ANYONE . DON'T MIND PLS .
Edited by puggyy - 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 16




AKBAR - he gets a message from Kabul that there is an emergency , so he plans a tour to Kabul . To settle political issues there .

JODA - she gives him aarthi and wish him good luck


AKBAR - am gonna miss u joda ...he kisses SALIM and Heera ...am gonna miss u all ...


AKBAR LEAVES FROM AGRA . STARTS TO KABUL . ITS BEEN A WEEK


KAMALAVATHI - she gets to know she is pregnant ...joda and everyone feel happy for her


JODA - after 2 weeks joda also knows she is pregnant again . Everyone is happy for the seond good news again . They couldn't send message about KAMALAVATHI and joda to akbar as he was busy with 2 wars and political issues in Afghanistan n Kabul .


ITS BEEN 5 MONTHS SINCE AKBAR HAS LEFT AGRA . NOW HE RETURNS TO AGRA . THE NEWS ABOUT HIS ARRIVAL IS GIVEN AT PALACE . THEY MAKE ALL PREPARATIONS TO WELCOME HIM . EVERYONE IS HAPPY THAT HE WON BATTLE AND SETTLED ISSUES AND RETURNED SUCCESSFULLY .


KAMALAVATHI - she takes aarthi and go along with hameeda banu to welcome akbar



JODA - joda couldn't go as SALIM is not well , he has fever . So she stays back with SALIM in room .


AKBAR - while giving aarthi he notices bump for KAMALAVATHI

HAMEEDA - huh JALAL she is pregnant 5 months .. Now


JALAL - ammi jaan yeh tho bahuth Kush kabar hai ...am very happy KAMALAVATHI


KAMALAVATHI - she feels shy and happy


AKBAR - he searches for joda ...


HAMEEDA - she understands it and tells " beta SALIM has fever so joda stayed back ..."


AKBAR - he gets worried and tell " kaha hai SALIM ...is he ok now "


HAMEEDA - don't worry he is fine now , seasonal change . Light fever


AKBAR - from there he goes to joda chamber to see SALIM


SALIM - seeing akbar , he jumps " abba jaan "


JODA - SALIM beta samalke


AKBAR - he hugs SALIM and kisses him " how r u my baby ...ur we'll now ??"


SALIM - yes father am fine now ... But ammi n daadi jaan are not allowing me to play . Always telling me to take rest


AKBAR - he turns to joda and smiles ...


SALIM - ill show u something father , I'll be back . He runs away


MOTHI - she runs behind SALIM



JODA - she is about to go behind SALIM ...akbar holds her hand



AKBAR - I came after a long time , u dint even talk to me properly ..running behind SALIM again . He looks only at her face and fails to notice her body that is her bump


JODA - nahi sheensha. Woh SALIM ok


AKBAR - I know joda . He kisses on her cheeks " I missed u " he hugs her and finds something uncomfortable as her bump is touching his belly ...he moves immediately and looks at her bump and tell " joda ur also pregnant ...again "



JODA - she blushes


AKBAR - am so happy ...he kisses her on forehead ...today I got two good news infact great news ...tomorrow there will be a grand party in palace


JODA - she smiles ...


AKBAR - he freshens up and goes to KAMALAVATHI chamber and stay there till evening and talk to her and go to darbar and declare that there will be a grand party after 2 days and ask all to arrange it


FINALLY THE DAY OF PARTY COMES . EVERYTHING GOES WELL . ALL GUESTS AND RELATIVES FROM ALL PLACES ATTEND PARTY AND CONGAGULATE AKBAR FOR HIS VICTORY AND FOR TO BE FATHER .


AFTER 4 MONTHS . BOTH JODA AND KAMALAVATHI ARE 9 MONTHS PREGNENT .



KAMALAVATHI - she goes into labour and delivers a baby girl



AKBAR - he feels so happy and names the baby girl as Fatima ...



JODA - two weeks later joda delivers a baby boy


HAMEEDA - JALAL beta hua


AKBAR - he feels very happy and elated . He names the boy as Husain .


SALIM - he gets all wired doubts and asks akbar " abba jaan I have a doubt "


AKBAR - k SALIM ask me ...


SALIM - from where did baby come out ...ammi jaan tummy became flat now . I wonder how he came out . " daadi jaan how he came out ?"


AKBAR - he stammers ,he doesn't know what to answer


SALIM - father tell me , he shakes his hand


JODA - she stays calm


HAMEEDA - beta it's a magic ...god came and with his magic he took baby out of tummy


SALIM - really daadi jaan ...y u dint allow me inside , eveni woulda have seen the magic of god


HAMEEDA - no SALIM , small kids are not allowed to see gods magic


SALIM - k daadi jaan . Ammi my little brother is so cute . After he grows up we both can play together .he kisses baby on cheeks .


BABY(HUSSAIN). - he smiles and kicks his. Legs




PRECAP -

STORY AFTER 5 YEARS

SALIM WILL BE 8 YEARS OLD


HUSSAIN AND FATHIMA WIL BE 5 YEARS OLD


HEERA - 6 YERAS 3 MONTHS OLD ...AND THE STORY AND FEW TWIST

ENEMIES OF AKBAR PLAN TO KILL SALIM ...AND STORY GOES ...





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Edited by puggyy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: marium-zamamii

Awesome weekend blast thanks pm me when u post next update


Thanks 😊
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Thanks 😊
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Originally posted by: Shehenshah_RT

Ee puggyy buggyy update jaldi jaldi...


Will update in 4 days dear ...😊

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