a journey to LOVE : a FF update pg4 - Page 3

Jodha ke pass pohoch chukatha jalal. Usne dekha, per ke pass khari ek larki, thori si sehmi... kissi ko dhund rahi thi...toofani hawaye uske chunar se cherchar kar rahi thi..wo lar rahi thi...koshish kar rahi chunar se apna sar dhakneki...lekin jitna wo koshish karti, utna hi manmani karti uski chunri...khud toh ulajh hi rahithi sath mein jodha ke balon ko bhi uljha rahithi. Tabhi achanak hawa ka ek jhowka aya our jodha ki chunar ko ura le gaya...

Apne aap ko kho chuka tha jalal... kho chuka tha us bepanah husn mein...uljhe hue balome...nazook bahon mein... makhmali badan mein...ab toh bass ek hi tamanna hai... is khubsurti ko apni aghosh mein lene ki...jalal ne apne kadam jodha ki wor baraya.

Chunar mein uljhi jodha ko jab jalal ki moujudgi ka ehsaas hua...tab jalal uske saamne khara tha...apni belagaam nazron se wo jodha ko dekh raha tha... uski jism ke har jarre ko apni najro se mehsoos kar raha tha jalal...jodha ki bechaini uski betabi our bara rahatha... jodha ke our kareeb ana chahta tha jalal...uski gulab jaisi komal hothon ko apni datoon se rondhna chahta tha wo..mehsoos karna chahta tha wo jodha ke jism kO...apni hathon se...

Jalal ki ankhon mein uske iradon ko par lia tha jodha nE...use andaza ho gaya tha...agar wo abhi yaha se nehi bhag payee...to shayad is mouke ke lie taras na parega...lekin jaise hi jodha ne bhagne ki koshish ki, jalal ne uska ek hath pakar lia..hath pakar ke jodha ko apni taraf kheech lia us ne.jalal ke seene se ja takraye jodha...jalal ki chattan jaisi seene se takrake khuch der ke lie sab kuch bhul gaye jodha... kuch hi der mein apne aap ko samet ke ek bar fir jalal se dur jane ki koshish ki usne...magar isbar jalal ne use piche se pakar lia. Jodha chillati usse pehle hi jalal ne ek hath se uska mu bandh kar dia...apne aap ko chura ne ke lie lar rahi thi jodha...lekin jodha ki har larai, har war se kahin jyada takatwar tha jalal...jodha ke kisi bhi war ka jalal par koyee asar nehi hota dikhta...jitna jalal ko dur karne ki koshish kar rahithi jodha, utna hi junoon sawar ho raha tha jalal ke sar par...jodha ke jism ko apni jism me samet lena chahta tha wo...

Apni pakar majbut kar raha tha jalal...kamjor par rahi thi jodha...larai har rahi thi woh. Jeet chuka tha jalal'ab bas apne fateh ki jasn manane ka intezzar tha use. Apne sar ko jodha ke kandhe ke kareeb laya jalal...apne hothon se jodha ke makhmali badan ko chua usne...jalal ke sparsh se kaap uthi jodha...jodha ki jism ki halchal ne jalal ko jaise pagal hi bana dia tha...apne ap pe kabu nehi tha uska..apni puri takat se jodha ke kandhe pe bit kiya jalal ne..dard se chatfata uthi jodha...chilla nehi pa rahhi thi woh, lekin uski dono ankhon se asuyo ki jaise barsaat ho rahi thi...our jalal? Wo toh jaise jodha ke jism ka ek hissa katke alag kar lena chahta tha...ek akhri koshish ki jodha ne... jor se dhakka dia jalal ko...isbar rok nehi paya jalal... uski pakar dheeli par gayee...our jalal ki pakar se chhut gayee jodha...

Itni asani se kaise use jane deta jalal... jodha jyada dur jati usse pehle hi jalal ne use pakar lia...jodha ro rahi thi'lekin uski ankhon se gusse ki aag nikal rahi thi... aj tak kabhi aise...kisi ne uske sath behave nehi kia...jaan lena chahti thi wo is admi ka...

Is larki ko apna banana ka maan bana chukka tha jalal... use pata nehi tha yeh koun hai...kahaan se hai... shayaf wo janna chahta bhi nehi tha...wo to ban pana chahta tha use...our pane se pehle jodha par apni mohar chorna chahta tha wo...

Jodha ko apne kareeb laya wo. Uske seene ki taraf jhuka'apne dono hathon se jalal pe war kar rahi thi jodha...lekin jodha age kuch soch pati, usse pehle hi jalal ne, jodha ke choli ke upar ke hisse ko apne ek hath se hathaya... our bosom ke upar ke hisses me bite kiya...dard se chikh uthi jodha...

Ab jodha ko chor dia jalal ne...

"jaiye jahaan jana hai...bhag lijiye jahaan bhagna hai...ek baat yaad rakhiye ga ...aap sirf hamari amanat hai...our hamari chees hum hasil jaroor karenge"

Originally posted by: yoga23priya

Awesome Update

Really Loved 👏

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

thanx yaar...par mujha kuch khas achha nehi laga...

i hope...ap log ise jhel loge

Originally posted by: yoga23priya

Dnt worry if you feel this update was not your best, you will gradually increase your writing and just give your best shot 😳personally I really loved it...Dear we all really loved it 😳

Plz can you in english too,if you are free 😆